2017年11月浙江高考读后续写真题

2017年浙江高考读后续写参考范文

On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.

Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But

第一节应用文写作（满分15分）

假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

1. 口语能力： 2. 相关经验； 3. 应聘目的。 注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.

His wife Tina cooked

一、读后续写（25分）

A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.

On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get

一、读后续写（25分）

A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.

placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and

yours” “Yes,

读后续写导练2学案

“Will you come with us, Susan?” cried several girls to a schoolmate. “We are going to the woods; do come, too.”

“I should like to go with you very much,” replied Susan, with a sigh, “but I can’t finish the task grandmother set me to do.”

“How tiresome it must be to sty at home to work on a holiday!” said Rose, one of the girls, shaking her head. “Susan’s grandmother is too strict.”

Susan heard the remark, and, as she bent her head, she wiped away a tear, and thought of the pleasant afternoon the girls would spend

高三英语读后续写导练3学案

【示例3】

Willie’sauntsenthimforabirthdaypresentalittlewritingbook.Therewasaplaceinthebookforapencil.Williethoughtagreatdealofthislittlebook,andalwayskeptitinhispocket. Oneday,hismotherwasverybusy,andhecalledhisdog,andsaid.“Come,Caper,letushaveaplay.” WhenWillie’smothermissedhim,shewenttothedoorandlookedout,andcouldnotseehimanywhere,butsheknewthatCaperwaswithhim,andthoughttheywouldcomebackbeforelong. Shewaitedanhour,andstilltheydidnotcome.Whenshecametothegatebytheroad,shemetMr.Lee,andtoldhimhowlongWilliehadbeengon

参考答案

1—5 ACBCB

6—10 CBABC 11—15 ACBAB 16—20 AABCA

音频与考点分布信息

音频信息

语音 美音 总字数 900 语速 高考正常速度 考点分布信息

事实细节 12 推理判断 主旨大意 观点态度 5 1 2

原文与单题解析

Text 1 找钢笔；29词

M: I can’t find my pen anywhere. It was on the desk with my book a moment ago. W: Look! Here it is. You left it by the phone.

1. What is the man looking for? A. His pen. B. His book. C. His phone.

【解析】 事实细节题。根据材料中男士的话“I can’t find my pen anywhere.”可知男士正在到处找他的钢笔，故选A。

Text 2 外出需加衣服；29词

W: Can I go out with friends, Dad? M: Yes, Carol, but you can’t go out in those clothes. It

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专题限时集训(二) 读后续写

训练2

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was a cold winter day.A woman drove up to the Rainbow Bridge tollbooth(收费站)．“I'm paying for myself，and for the six cars behind me，”she said with a smile，handing over seven tickets.One after another，the next six drivers arriving at the tollbooth were informed，“Some lady up ahead already paid your fare．”

It turned out that the woman，Natalie Smith，had read something on a friend's refrigerator：“Practice random kindness and senseless acts of beauty．” The phrase impressed her so

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在这篇文章里面有应用文评分原则，以及有关邀请信的写法。

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先从评分标准开始，然后提供原文，思路解读，作品展示，评析，欢迎吐槽。（应用文比较简单，不进行思路分析了。）

文章有点长，应用文两篇。续写四篇。每篇有点评。后附一些拓展素材，如细节描写等。由于时间仓促，能力有限，不当之处，敬请谅解。 应用文评分原则:

本题总分为15 分，按以下5 个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 第一档：（1—3 分）只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确；

第二档：（4—6 分）能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达； 第三档：（7—9 分）能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意； 第四档：（10—12 分）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚；

第五档：（13—15 分

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一、读后续写（25分）

A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.

On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to he