顾家北微信推送词伙 2014年10月

顾家北微信推送词伙 2014年10月

[10.26]

Some experts believe thatit is better for children begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

观点类文章 开头段

Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes.

学习点1：这个开头段是两句话，和我们上课说的一样。背景句的写法是描述一个趋势，也是我们的路数。

学习点2：这个开头段没有表明立场，只是说了正面和负面的影响都有。也回应了很多同学的问题：“观点类文章要不要给出立场？”

学习点3：一些词伙： at secondary school, 在中学

educational authorities，政府教育部门

[10.25]

今天推送的是part3的一个思路和答案，大家是不是发现这个题目的词伙和观点可以用在今天的作文考题？

What sorts of jobs are most popular with young people in your country？ 观点1：在国有企业工作state-owned enterprises 原因：稳定的收入 steady income

结果：生活不错enjoy a high quality of life

观点2：在小公司工作small-to-medium enterprises

原因：更大的空间发展more opportunities for self-actualisation

结果：有成就感a sense of fulfillment

观点1：many young people may choose to work for state-owned enterprises or government departments.

原因：because these jobs can offer them steady income 结果：so they can enjoy a high quality of life

观点2：on the other hand, more and more young people may also prefer to work for small-to-medium enterprises in the private sector

原因：these companies give them more opportunities for self-actualisation, for example, giving them participating in the decision making process about how to develop new products.

结果：they will have a sense of fulfillment

[10.24] 开头段

The pie charts compare the proportions of people falling into three distinct age groups inYemen and Italy in two different years.

学习点1：题目是the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy, 而Simon 的改写是“the proportions of people falling into….”

学习点2：其他部分的改写，譬如说pie charts，而不是题目的charts，其实都是很简单的。 概述

It is clear that Italy had the older population in the year 2000,and that the same is predicted for the year 2050.The populations of both countries are expected to age over the fifty-yearperiod.

学习点1：用it is clear that …. and that….引导两个主语从句

学习点2：整个图最主要的信息是：1 趋势（都变老了） 2 最高值（意大利年纪更大） 是不是和我们上课的总结一样的？

学习点3：注意时态的改变，2000年是had， 2050年是 is predicted, are expected to

学习点4：很多学生经常问我，就两个数据，也可以说区间吗？范文是over the fifty-year period! 主体部分第一段

In the year 2000, just over half of the population of Yemen was aged 14 or under, while most Italians (61.6%) fell into the 15 to 59 age group, and only 14.3% were children under15 years of age. People aged 60 or over accounted for almost a quarter of the Italian population, but only 3.6% of the inhabitants of Yemen.

学习点1：我们复习一下上课说过的分子分母法

over half of the population of Yemen was aged 14 or under（数字+分母） People aged 60 or over accounted for almost a quarter of the Italian population （分子+accountedfor+数字+分母）

学习点2：年龄的各种表达：aged 14 or under, fell into the 15 to 59 age group 诸如此类

学习点3：数字的表达，over half of …. Almost a quarter of… most Italians (61.6%)

【10．23】

今天推送的是Simon的一个关于信用卡的段落，里面有很多消费主义的词伙。 The main drawback of credit cards is that they encourage people to spend money that they do not have. This has led to the consumer culture and addiction to shopping that we now see in society. When credit card users are unable to pay off their debts, they often resort to signing up for multiple cards, and the debt becomes increasingly overwhelming.Many people in this situation find themselves incourt, bankrupt, and without a home as a final consequence of credit card dependence. In the worst cases, they may even face prison sentences.

学习点1：the main drawback of ? is that 写作和口语常用句型 学习点2：addiction to shopping = excess shopping 过分购物 Pay off debts=pay the money back 还钱

debt becomes out of control= debt becomes overwhelming 债台高筑 学习点3：词伙 the consumer culture 消费文化

学习点4：注意一些连接词in this situation, in the worst cases, 学习点5： 词伙face prison sentences 坐牢

【10．22】

今天推送的是一个网络资料, 关于如何学习文化，雅思作文和口语的常考话题 The world is a colorful landscape ofdifferent languages, skin colors, and different cultures. It's important to develop an appreciation for different cultures in order to become a well-rounded person，经验丰富的人 whois sensitive to the unique qualities of others. One wayt o develop this appreciation is to，口语常用句型 try to learn about other cultures around the world.

There are several ways to become knowledgeable about，变得博学 different cultures. One way is to read books written by authors from a particular culture，来自特定文化. Reading works by authors who have a close relationship with a particular culture allows people to gain an authentic glimpse into the food,music, language, religion, and way of a life of a particular group of people.

Another way to learn about different cultures is to try to learn a foreign language，学习外语. A variety of language-learning books, software, and audio programs is available at the public library or bookstores. A person can choose a language she has always wanted to learn and locate learning programs to help her master the language, 掌握语言.

If she feels especially ambitious, she cane nroll in a foreign language class in order to learn in a more formal setting，正式的环境下. Making contact with people who are native speakers of the languageallows her to gain firsthand knowledge of a particular culture as she struggles to learn the language. She can strive to visit areas of the city where she can establish social interactions with，进行社会交流 people who are native speakers of the language she is trying to master.

A person can learn about different culturesif she samples authentic food，品尝正宗的食品 from a specific cultural group，文化群体. Seek out restaurants that feature authentic food，提供正宗的食品 from a variety of countries. Whether a person wants to learn more about regions in Japan, the Middle East, Africa, or any other world culture,becoming familiar with its food is a giant step in the right direction. Food is an important part of different cultures and allows people to gain insight into a particular cultural group's way of life.

【10.21】

今天推送的是一个BBC的段落, 关于年轻人找工作

The survey highlights the gap between job ambitions，职业的追求 and a tougher reality

There is a \对职业的期望and the reality of the jobs available, a major survey of teenagerssuggests. It highlights the need for better careers advice, 就业建议says Nick Chambers, director of theEducation and Employers Taskforce, which published the survey. The study also indicates teenagers have a very weak understanding of，不熟悉 potential earnings fordifferent types of jobs.

There is a serious \

Confederation of British Industry president Sir Roger Carr said the report showed industry had to do more to show young people the \opportunities\，职场. Missing qualifications

The study, based on a survey of 11,000 13-to 16-year-olds, is an attempt to map the job ambitions of teenagers against theemployment market up to 2020.

It shows teenagers have a weak grasp of the，不熟悉 availability of jobs - and that large numbers will be aiming forjobs that are in shortsupply，短缺.

For instance, there are 10 times as many people aiming for jobs in the culture, media and sports sector than there arejobs likely to be available.

And even though almost a quarter of jobs，读数据的方法 are in the distribution, hotels and restaurant category, only about one in 40 youngsters，读数据的方法 are considering careers in these industries.

Fewer than one in 30 young people读数据的方法are considering jobs in banking and finance, even though one in five jobs are expected to be in this sector.

【10．20】

今天推送的是一个BBC的段落, 关于女性的角色

Working mothers with steady relationships，有稳定的关系 are the healthiest women - while housewives are the most likely to be obese, a UK study suggests. Experts followed 1,200 women from 15 to 54，读年龄的方法 in the Journal of Epidemiology and Community Health study.

Some 23% of those with multiple roles were obese, compared with 38%，静态图的读数据方法 among the long-term homemakers，家庭主妇.

The researchers say the findings show the short-termstress of juggling roles，处理不同工作 is outweighed by long-term benefits. You are what you eat and how much you exercise

They used data onwomen taking part in the Medical Research Council's National Study of Healthand Development, which tracks the long-term health of British men and womenborn in 1946.

The women's health at26 and at 54 was assessed using a questionnaire, while details were taken about employment history, marital status, and whether they had children, for everydecade from their mid-20s.

Their weight andheight were also measured at regular intervals. Different lifestyles

Analysis of theinformation showed that by the age of 54 women who had been partners, parents and employees were significantly less likely to report ill health than women who did not fulfil all three roles，充当三个角色.

【10.19】

今天推送的是一个BBC的段落

Food price rises 食品价格上涨 threaten millions more people with poverty A UN-sponsored report has called for urgent changes to the way food is produced, as soaring food prices食品价格上涨risk driving millions of people topoverty. The Unesco study recommends better safeguards to protect resources and more sustainable farming practices，环保的种植方法, such as producing food locally. More natural and ecological farming techniques should be used, it says. Haiti, Egypt, the Philippines and parts of West Africa have seen riots recently over the costs of rice, wheat and soya.

Unesco, a UN educational body, says increased demand for food，对食品的需求增加 in India and China, the growing market,市场不断变大for biofuel crops, 生物燃料and rising oil prices are some of the factors behind the rising prices.

A group of 400 experts spent three years researching the report, which was unveiled on Tuesday at Unesco in Paris.

?Progress in agriculture has reaped very unequal benefits and has come at a high social andenvironmental cost，带来环境的代价 [10.18]

今天推送的是一个OG上的范文的结尾段分析

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. others think that it is better towork for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion.

论述类的题目，要讨论换工作和不换工作的好处 结尾段

Although there are benefits to working for one organization, If eel that it is also valuable for an employee to be able to offer a wide range of experience having worked for different companies. As long as it is planned carefully, I feel that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee and the employer.

学习点1：学习两个句子， there are benefits to doing something

I feel that it is valuable for …

学习点2 ：结尾用了折衷的写法，先说反方的优点，然后说自己的看法。因此，大家要认识到西方人是没有“立场坚定”这种观念的。

学习点3：experience表示工作经历或者所有生活经历的时候不可数，而如果指单个的生活遭遇或者体验就是客户素名词。

【10.17】

今天推送的是一个OG上的范文的主体部分第二段分析

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. others think that it is better towork for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion.

论述类的题目，要讨论换工作和不换工作的好处

主体部分第二段：说在一间公司工作的坏处和换工作的好处

However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same organization is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year. In some cases, this can lead to boredom and disillusionment. Moving from one organization to another can be a strategic decision in order to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience. A friend of my father started out as a sociology teacher, he then joined the Social Services and is currently managing a care home in Western Australia. This has made him incredibly knowledgeable in a range of related fields and, in my view, has provided him with a much more interesting working life.

学习点1：学习一下常用的句型one of the drawbacks of … isthat…

学习点2：moving from one organizationto another类似于change jobs 学习点3：很多同学经常问我this指代什么，就是指代前面说过的一个事情

学习点4：第二句和第三句话事实上出现了对比，本来是在一个公司工作，然后说到了换公司，但是没有出现in contrast, by comparison, 这样的传统连接词。 学习点5：一些词伙的使用，disillusionment with work, 对工作失望

acquire a range of skills and experience 增加技能和经验 an interesting working life，有趣的职业生涯 related fields，相关行业

学习点6：很多同学问我为什么喜欢写三段话。你会发现2段话最大的挑战就是你要写得比较长，而且还要比较有逻辑，对于很多学生是个挑战。因为大部分学生不能驾驭很长的段落。如果用firstly, secondly, finally, 又落入了模板的危险。

【10．16】

今天推送的是一个OG上的范文的主体部分第一段分析

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. others think that it is better towork for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion.

论述类的题目，要讨论换工作和不换工作的好处 主体部分第一段：说在一间公司工作的好处

People who stay with the same organization have the advantage of thoroughly understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with thestaff and processes. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likelyto be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.

学习点1：thoroughly understand 和becomefamiliar with 去替代我们常用的

have a good understanding of

学习点2：people who stay with thesame organization 去替代我们熟悉的状语从句。这是我们上课讲过的技巧。

学习点3：段落的第二句和第三句事实上是并列的观点，但是范文没有用任何连接词。正如我平时说的，“in addition”，“moreover”是中国学生的一种心理依赖。 学习点4：学习一些词伙 promotion prospects, 升职机会

Job security, 工作稳定性 A good pension, 丰厚的退休金 Long-term employees, 资深的员工 Reward schemes, 奖励机制

【10.15】

今天推送的是一个OG上的范文的开头段分析

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. others think that it is better towork for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion.

论述类的题目，要讨论换工作和不换工作的好处 开头段

For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whetheror not they will remain inthe same organization throughout their working life. If they decide to change, they needto consider how this will impact on their career overall.

学习点1：这个开头段第二句话不是立场，而是一个类似于建议的东西。这样大家可能就更清楚了雅思作文的开头段是很灵活的，无所谓什么固定的结构。

学习点2：remain in the sameorganisation去替代work for the same

organization

Working life 去替代career

学习点3：their, this的代词用法

[10.14]

今天推送的是一个BBC的段落，关于一个英国大学生做手机应用的商业经验。你可以用在很多的口语PART2， 譬如说你朋友的成就，一个mobile phone app，一个project等等

How the boss of a popular phone app，手机应用 gotthe idea

Inspiration for a successful business idea，成功的商业创意 can come from anywhere, 创意无所不在but for Jermaine Hagan, it was very much the result of personal need （个人需要）.

Back in his final year，最后的一年 atuniversity, the Londoner found that he had little time for revising, or even going to lectures，去上课 in the first place. This was because Mr Hagan, now 24 and thefounder of popular mobile phone application Revision App, was at the time running a successful clothing business，经营一个成功的生意from his student bedroom.

And while his college friends would attendclasses and hit the library, 一头扎进图书馆he would sit, surrounded by boxes, and spend hours putting jumpers and other clothes into parcels, ready to be posted out to customers.

With exams looming, Mr Hagan's only hope ofpassing his degree was to borrow his friends' revision notes，复习笔记.Thankfully they agreed, and he was able to graduate from London's BrunelUniversity. [10.13]

今天推送的是Official test Guide的一个范文的结尾段落。

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is

therefore necessary for governments to imposea higher tax on this kind of food.

To what extent do youagree or disagree with this opinion?

观点类题目 结尾段

In conclusion, imposing a higher tax on fast food does not seemto be the answer. If the government chose to do this,it would only lead to greater poverty and families facing further hardship.

学习点1：很多学生经常问我作文可否折衷，而这个文章的作者是先写自己不赞成的观点（加税的好处），然后再写自己赞成的观点（加税的坏处）。充分说明，外国人对立场是否“坚定”没有任何的偏好。

学习点2：seem to be “看起来”，用这种相对不确定的语气去体现客观性。 学习点3：chose to do this 虚拟语气，作者认为政府是肯定不会加税的。

学习点4：lead to families facing …分词结构，很多同学经常写lead to people do

something那是错误的，因为那样就会有两个动词

学习点5：两个词伙，impose a higher tax on 加税

Face hardship 遇到困难 [10.12]

今天推送的是Official test Guide的一个范文的第二个主体段落。

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to imposea higher tax on this kind of food.

To what extent do youagree or disagree with this opinion?

观点类题目

主体部分第二段（折衷段）

However, we also need toconsider which socio-economic group consumes fast food as the main part of their diet. Statistics indicate that low income groups eatmore of this food than wealthier people. One possible reason for this is that fast food is far cheaper than fresh produce. This is because many governments offer large subsidies to farmers who

provide products for the fast food industry, such ascorn, wheat and beef. Fruit and vegetables, on the other hand, are not subsidized.Research suggests that many families simply cannot afford to buy healthy food or pay higher taxes on fast food. For them, fast food is not a choice but a necessity.

学习点1：一些词伙 socio-economic group, 社会阶层

Low income groups, 低收入介词

学习点2： Fresh produce去替换fruit and vegetables，事实上也就是healthy

food

学习点3：大家可能会发现这段话的论述是先说结果，再说原因的 第二句话：低收入群体吃更多快餐 第三句话：因为更便宜

第四句话：因为快餐的供应商有补贴

这个论述过程给大家的启示可能就是：firstly, secondly 或者inaddition, moreover的方法其实是很单调和死板的。

可能的问题：这个段落出现了statistics indicate that…research suggests that这种套句，在现在的雅思作文考试，特别是大陆考区的学生，严禁使用

[10.11]

今天推送的是Official test Guide的一个范文的主体段落。

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to imposea higher tax on this kind of food.

To what extent do youagree or disagree with this opinion?

观点类题目 主体段落第一段

From an economic point of view,higher tax may seem sensible. In countries such as the USA, Australia and Britain, the healthcare system spends a large part of its budget on people with diet-related health problems.It could be argued that these people have caused their own illnesses because of their choice of food. In this case, why should they

expect the state to pay fortheir treatment? The tax could help fund the healthcare system.

学习点1：学习一些词伙 from an economic point ofview, 从经济的角度

diet-related health problems,和饮食相关的问题

学习点2：spendbudget on .. 去替换fund….

学习点3：注意这段话代词的使用，these people, their 等。这个和我们上课的内容是一样的。我们从来不教学生people, citizens, human beings这种中国式的替换 可能的问题：OG我一直不是很推荐学生去学习，因为标准不是很清晰。譬如说这里出现问句，其实并不是书面语可以接受的。还有论述的时候其实有两个观点：1 自己吃东西导致生病，不该国家买单， 2 交税可以去给医疗系统钱。然而这个范文没有很清晰的连接。 我们学习一些好的替换表达和词伙还是可以的

【10.10】

今天推送的是BBC关于博物馆的文章。很久没考了。

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to imposea higher tax on this kind of food.

To what extent do youagree or disagree with this opinion?

观点类题目 开头段

The growth of the fast food industry has,without doubt, impacted on the eating habits and the health of many societies around the

world.Diabetes, high cholesterol, heart and respiratory problems are all on the rise due to fatty and sugar-rich food.However, the question is whether higher tax would improve the situation or not.

学习点1：很多学生经常问我观点类题目的开头段要不要表明立场，这个范文的开头段是没有清晰立场的。

学习点2: fatty and sugar-rich food去替代题目的fast food 学习点3：通过改变句子结构来改写题目，

题目是people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating fast

food

那么开头段就调换了顺序，快餐写到最开始，然后说影响健康，再说人

The growth of the fast food industry (快餐) Has impacted on （影响健康） The health of many societies(人)

学习点4：其他的一些词伙

Eating habits，饮食习惯 Respiratory problems, 呼吸问题 Improve the situation，改善问题 【10.9】

今天推送的是BBC关于博物馆的文章。很久没考了。 Thousands flock to，涌去 UK museums

A young visitor enjoys the robot dinosaurs exhibit

Natural History Museum: Among thoseoffering free entry，免费入场 Thousands of visitors have poured into，涌入 Britain's top museums over the weekend，周末 after entrancefees，门票 were scrapped.

The introduction of free entry had beenhailed as \heritage，文化遗产\ Antony Fenwick, from the Science Museum,said a large number of people had visited the attraction in South Kensington,London.

\ Thenearby Natural History Museum said about 10,000 people had passed through its doors on Sunday which compared well with the large crowds which flocked to seeits Tyrannosaurus Rex exhibition earlier this year.

Aspokeswoman for the attraction added: \with the attendance，入场人数.\

TheNational Railway Museum in York told BBC News Online attendances were up by121% from the same weekend last year.

Itsspokeswoman said: \out about the scrapping of entrance fees.

London's Natural History Museum saw a big increase in visitors，人数的大量增加

【10．8】

今天我推送的是剑6的考官范文的结尾段的解析。

题目

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree ordisagree?

结尾段

I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world.

学习点1：overuse computers去替代前面的spend too much time on the

computer, sit in front of a screen for too long

学习点2：两个词伙 sit at home, 呆在家里 live in a virtual world 住在虚拟世界 学习点3：I think很简单，很多老师会给很多复杂的替换表达，I concede that, I

maintain that等等，其实都不重要，真正体现词汇的地方是后面那些内容

学习点4：learning是个分词结果，修饰主语children。很多同学在写作中硬是写

thereby+doing，很多时候都不恰当。不要为了用语法而用语法。

学习点5：很多学生经常问我“结尾要不要总结主体部分的观点”，这个考官范文显然没有总结，只是说了立场。

[10.7]

今天我推送的是剑6的考官范文的主体部分第三段的解析。

题目

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree ordisagree?

主体部分第三段

In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young people cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore, it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and

with confidence as they need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.

学习点1 中心句深深地震撼了多少中国学生的脑袋，原来观点类文章是可以写反面观点的。原来说完电脑的坏处是可以说好处的。原来雅思是可以“立场不坚定地”。

学习点2 the world is changing constantly in terms of technology 去替代我们用了一万年的with the development of technology

学习点3 it is important that 去替代我们常用的it isimportant for … to do

something…

学习点4 学习一下词伙 at an early age 从幼年

Throughout studies andworking lives 学习和工作生涯

学习点5 knowledge, information, equipment 都是不可数名词，不能加复数

[10.6]

今天我推送的是剑6的考官范文的主体部分第二段的解析。

题目

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree ordisagree?

主体部分第二段

Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends,it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important partof a child’s development that cannot be provided by a computer.

学习点1：很多学生在写作的过程中最痛苦的就是拓展，我们看看考官拓展的两个方法：1 举例 such as getting information or emailing friends, 2 并列 spending

time…and sharing ….

是不是又是我们上课的东西？

学习点2：is an important part of 替换我们经常用的play an important role

in …

学习点3：一些词伙

substitute for humaninteraction 替代当面的交流 share non-virtual experiences 分享现实生活

学习点4：我们复习一下such as 的用法特点

1 在句中出现，而不是句首

2 后面加名词或者动名词，不能加句子或者是动词（getting information而不是getinformation）

3 such as 后一般不加逗号，直接加名词 4 一般加两个名词或者是动名词 【10.5】

今天我推送的是剑6的考官范文的主体部分第一段的解析。

题目

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree ordisagree?

主体部分第一段

However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the “hero” of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centred and insensitive to others.

学习点1：一些词伙computer activities 电脑活动

Electronic games 电子游戏 Insensitive to others 对别人不感冒

学习点2注意exposure这个单词，表示“接触”的意思，很多同学写contact是错的 学习点3 注意单词的替换，children这个词并没有替换，用了两次，但是中间出现了一个player，这和我们上课说的一样，换表达，而不是换词！

结构是电脑吸引小孩--- 游戏很暴力---小孩当自己是英雄---变得自私和冷漠

【10.4】

今天我推送的是剑6的考官范文的开头段的解析。

题目

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree ordisagree?

开头段第一段

I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting infront of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child,regardless of what they are using the computer for.

学习点1：sitting in front of a screen for too long 可以替代spend too much

time on the computer.

学习点2：考官上来说了立场后，直接开始论述。从这一点也可以看出，雅思对于开头段并不需要你写“背景句+改写题目”，这只是很多老师的一个套路而已。 学习点3：physical posture 体态

Damaging to the eyes 影响视力

[10.3]

今天我推送的是SImon的范文的结尾段的解析。

Teachers should give pupils lessons in how to cope with life, 应付生活问题 and be happy, a government advisersays.

Professor Lord RichardLayard, from the London School of Economics, believes the central purpose ofschools should be to teach \ He is calling for anew generation of teachers specialising in what is known as \

Teachers' leaders saythey do all they can to promote children's well-being，提升小孩的幸福健康 and the timetable is already crowded，课程很紧.

Lord Layard said people were no happier today than they were 50 years ago and that there had been a sharp fall in the numbers saying they trusted other people. \which have failed.

Schools are tests and exam factories，考试机器 these days \

scientifically-evaluated programmes which have halved depression in teenagers.\ He said schools should follow programmes in \children couldlearn how to manage their emotions，管理情绪 and look at attitudes to work and money，对金钱的观念.

[10.2]

今天我推送的是SImon的范文的结尾段的解析。

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?

What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular to each individual, but I believe that our basic needs for shelter, food and company need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.

学习点1比较地道的表达：it is particular to each individual，因人而异 学习点2 词伙fulfillbasic needs 满足基本的需求，而前面是meet basic survival needs

学习点3 happiness is difficult to define和前面的it seems impossible to give a precisedefinition of happiness 对应 学习点4：the needfor company，需要人的陪伴

学习点5：结尾段只是简单总结了立场，用but连接两个句子，使其变得复杂 [10.1]

今天我推送的是SImon的范文的主体段落第二段的解析；今天是国庆，我不想破坏大家的心情，但是我想说的是，我早上起来就在批群里学生的作业，还有为后天开始的新班的同学设计句子翻译。 我相信什么样的老师就会有什么样的学生。

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?

What factors are important in achieving happiness? 主体部分第二段

Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people would agree that there are some basic

preconditions to achieving it. Firstly, it is hard for a person to be happy if he or she does not have a safe place to live and enough food to eat. Our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant life. Secondly, the greatest joy in life is usually found in shared

experiences with family and friends, and it is rare to find a person who is content to live in complete isolation. Other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose inlife. 学习点1：Lead a pleasant life 过快乐的生活 Content 去替代happy 这些替换的表达 学习点2：一些词伙

A precise definition 准确的定义 Basic preconditions 基本的前提 A safe place to live 安全的地方居住

Meet basic survival needs 满足基本的生存需要 Shared experiences with family 和家人共享的快乐时光 Live in complete isolation, 自己生活 A sense of purpose 有目标

学习点3：两个不错的句子，it seems impossible to … It israre to find a person who ….

学习点4：注意连接词firstly, secondly, other factors ….

学习点5：虽然是多观点的段落，可以看到考官的范文很注意拓展，第一个观点用了举例（食品和住房），第二个观点用了对比（自己住的人不快乐） 学习点6：很多学生经常喜欢写most of people ，那是错的，应该是most people

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