新东方SAT写作讲义

新东方SAT写作讲义

2009年SAT写作讲义

主讲：杜亮

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考试简介+经典范文+评分标准

1.简介 2.范文

3.评分标准

25分钟写一篇400个单词的议论文

1.thesis论点2.example论据3.reasoning论证三角关系

中文SAT作文题Prompt（题目）

Excerpt（摘要）:1993年11月16日，一个来自江苏省的农民俞敏洪，成立了北京

新东方学校。十几年来，新东方飞速发展，并于2006年9月7日在美国纽约证券交易所成功上市。俞敏洪提出“追求卓越，挑战极限，从绝望中寻找希望，人生终将辉煌！”的校训，要求新东方老师以德为本，RP至上。 Assignment（任务）:新东方老师是不是RP很好？SAT作文题1

Assignment

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Arepeoplemorelikelytobeproductiveandsuccessfulwhentheyignoretheopinionsofothers?Planandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservation.

Planandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyouronthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithandtakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservations.

Excerpt

Inordertobethemostproductiveandsuccessfulpeoplethatwearecapableofbeing,wemustbewillingtoignoretheopinionsofothers.Itisonlywhenwearecompletelyindifferenttoothers'opinionsofus—whenwearenotconcernedabouthowothersthinkofus—thatwecanachieveourmostimportantgoals.

SAT作文题2

Assignment

Istherealwaysanotherexplanationoranotherpointofview?Planandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservation.

Excerpt

Somepeoplebelievethatthereisonlyonefoolproofplan,perfectsolution,orcorrectinterpretation.Butnothingiseverthatsimple.Forbetterorworse,foreveryso-calledfinalanswerthereisanotherwayofseeingthings.Thereisalwaysa“however.”

SAT作文题3

Assignment

Isdeceptioneverjustified?Planandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservation.

Excerpt

Honestyisimportant,ofcourse,butdeceptioncanactuallymakeiteasierforpeopleto

getalong.Inarecentstudy,forexample,oneoutofeveryfouroftheliestoldbyparticipantswastoldsolelyforthebenefitofanotherperson.Infact,mostliesareharmlesssocialuntruthsinwhichpeoplepretendtolikesomeoneorsomethingmorethantheyactuallydo(“Yourmuffinsarethebest!”).如何审题

1.deciphertheprompt2.brainstormexamples3.decidetheviewpoint4.plan

structure

first,Assignmentthen,excerpt

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detailsoftheexample

…………………………………………………..……………………………………………….....…………………………………………………..theaboveisdeleted5.writetheessay

6.leavesometimetoreview

Onthetopic

GrammarandspellingOverusedvocabulary1~4:2mins5:22mins

takeadeepbreath6:1mins

范文1

Istherealwaysanotherexplanationoranotherpointofview?

Thereisalwaysa“however.”Eachsituationhasitsbenefitsanditsdrawbacks.Inthe

fieldofmarketfinance,wefindacompellingexamplethatsupportsthisthesis.

TheRoaringTwentieswasadecadeduringwhichtheAmericaneconomysawarapid

boom.Infact,America’sbullmarkets,suchastheNewYorkStockExchangehadbecomesofinanciallyinvitingby1927thatevenAmerica’smiddleclasspoureditsmoneyintoAmerica’sfinancialforums.Unfortunately,onOctober4,1929theBoomingTwentiescametoanabrupthaltwhentheNewYorkStockExchangecrashed.

Thecrashhadmanynegativeconsequences.Mostnotably,thestockmarketcrashof1929

launchedAmericaintotheGreatDepression,atimeofstarvationandunemploymentformillionsofAmericancitizens.Thewidespreadoptimismofthe1920’squicklyturnedintoanalmostsuicidalpessimism.Indeed,theGreatDepressionrepresentsacripplingconsequenceofthestockmarketcrashof1929.

However,FranklinDelanoRooseveltestablishedinstitutionsandregulationstoprevent

futureeconomiccatastrophes.CognizantoftheCrash’scauses,suchaspoolcorruption,overpricedstockvalues,andmarginbuying,RooseveltimplementedtheSocialSecurityAct,theFDIC,andstricterrulesmonitoringcredit.HisaggressivepoliciesnotonlyamelioratedtheuncomfortableclimateoftheGreatDepression,butalsolaidthegroundworkforasafer,moresuccessfuleconomy.

TheAmericanpublicalsorealizedthemanypositiveresultsofthestockmarketcrashof

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1929.Inparticular,AmericancitizensnowhaveanentirelydifferentfiscaloutlookfromtheonetheyhadbeforetheCrash.Speculatorshaveproventobemoreprudentandinsightful,astheyoftenresearchmarkettrendsbeforeinvesting.Perhapsmostimportantly,Americaninvestorsarenotaseasilyswayedbypopularoptimismandeageradvertisement.

Whilethestockmarketcrashof1929wastheembryooftheGreatDepression,theCrashalsosetthefoundationforasoundereconomy.IfwerecognizethegoodandthebadoftheCrash,wearedestinedtomakefewereconomicmistakes.

keywordrepetition

1.benefits,drawbacks2.boom

3.negativeconsequences4.institutionsandregulations5.positiveresults

6.GreatDepression,asoundereconomy绝对词汇不用论证

always/only/all/ever/best/most/more

SATScoringGuideScoreof6

Anessayinthiscategorydemonstratesclearandconsistentmastery,althoughitmay

haveafewminorerrors.Atypicalessay

effectivelyandinsightfullydevelopsapointofviewontheissueanddemonstratesoutstandingcriticalthinking,usingclearlyappropriateandother

itspositionexample:举例子reason:讲道理

example:3CPrinciple

critical(international) creative concrete

critical

MIT

creative

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concrete

Afrequentobservationamongteachersofwriting(andreadersofexaminationessays)isthatstudentwritersdonotprovideenoughTheyrarelyfeelthatastudentessayhastoomanyfacts.

Whythisessayreceivedascoreof5

Somelapsesinthespecificityofsupportpreventtheresponsefromearningahigherscore.Therefore,tomeritascoreof6,thisessayneedstoprovidetomoreandinsightfullydevelopthepointofview.

Whythisessayreceivedascoreof5

Althoughthisessayiseffective,inordertomeritascoreof6,thisessayneedstodemonstrateslightlystrongercriticalthinkingbyofferingsupportingtheexamplesprovided.

Whythisessayreceivedascoreof4

Tomeritahigherscore,theessayneedstodevelopthepointofviewmoreinsightfullyandbyprovidingsupport.

Whythisessayreceivedascoreof4

Whilethisessayadequatelydevelopsthepointofview,inordertomoreeffectivelydevelopthepositionandachieveahigherscore,theessayneedstoprovideratherthansimplyofferingthetwo"examplesofpeopleaccomplishingdeedsnotforfameormoney."

DoubleNPrinciple

“Apointworthnotingisthatpropernouns(i.e.,thosethatbeginwithcapitalletters)andnumbersareveryconcrete.”DoubleNPrinciple

Name NumberDoubleNPrinciplefactualerro

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isdemonstratingclearandsmoothofideas

introduction:body:conclusion:天净沙·秋思马致远枯藤老树昏鸦。小桥流水人家。古道西风瘦马。夕阳西下，

落霞与孤鹜齐飞，秋水共长天一色。

忆江南白居易

江南好，风景旧曾谙。日出江花红胜火，春来江水绿如蓝。能不忆江南!

One-exampleStructure七步成章(SevenSteps)Introduction

2

thesis

summarizetheexample

第1段

”Eachsituationhasitsbenefitsanditsdrawbacks.In Thereisalwaysa“however.however.”

thefieldofmarketfinance,wefindacompellingexamplethatsupportsthisthesis.

body

31stphase(TS+detail)2ndphase(TS+detail)3rdphase(TS+detail)

第2段

TheRoaringTwentieswasadecadeduringwhichtheAmericaneconomysawa

rapidboom.Infact,America’sbullmarkets,suchastheNewYorkStockExchangehadbecomesofinanciallyinvitingby1927thatevenAmerica’smiddleclasspoureditsmoneyintoAmerica’sfinancialforums.Unfortunately,onOctober4,1929theBoomingTwentiescametoanabrupthaltwhentheNewYorkStockExchangecrashed.

第3段

Thecrashhadmanynegativeconsequences.Mostnotably,thestockmarketcrashof

1929launchedAmericaintotheGreatDepression,atimeofstarvationandunemploymentformillionsofAmericancitizens.Thewidespreadoptimismofthe1920’squicklyturnedintoanalmostsuicidalpessimism.Indeed,theGreatDepressionrepresentsacripplingconsequenceofthestockmarketcrashof1929.

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第4段

However,FranklinDelanoRooseveltestablishedinstitutionsandregulationsto

preventfutureeconomiccatastrophes.CognizantoftheCrash’scauses,suchaspoolcorruption,overpricedstockvalues,andmarginbuying,RooseveltimplementedtheSocialSecurityAct,theFDIC,andstricterrulesmonitoringcredit.HisaggressivepoliciesnotonlyamelioratedtheuncomfortableclimateoftheGreatDepression,butalsolaidthegroundworkforasafer,moresuccessfuleconomy.

第5段

TheAmericanpublicalsorealizedthemanypositiveresultsofthestockmarket

crashof1929.Inparticular,AmericancitizensnowhaveanentirelydifferentfiscaloutlookfromtheonetheyhadbeforetheCrash.Speculatorshaveproventobemoreprudentandinsightful,astheyoftenresearchmarkettrendsbeforeinvesting.Perhapsmostimportantly,Americaninvestorsarenotaseasilyswayedbypopularoptimismandeageradvertisement.

Conclusion

7

concludetheexamplestepfurther(suggestion)

第6段

Whilethestockmarketcrashof1929wastheembryooftheGreatDepression,the

Crashalsosetthefoundationforasoundereconomy.IfwerecognizethegoodandthebadoftheCrash,wearedestinedtomakefewereconomicmistakes.

七步成章(SevenSteps)

1

introduction

coherence:句子连接e-rater

progression

Paragraph3:crash（顶针） 大肚能容，容天下难容之事 开口便笑，笑世间可笑之人 Paragraph4:however

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Paragraph5:alsocoherence

infactnotonly,butalso suchasinparticular unfortunatelyas mostnotablymostimportantly indeedwhile

exhibitsskillfuluseoflanguage,usingaandvocabulary varied:多样 accurate:准确 apt:活用

variedvocabulary

finance financially financial 变化词性

RoaringTwenties BoomingTwenties 变同义词accuratevocabulary

Decade/score/halfancentury/threequartersofancentury bullmarket/bearmarketaptvocabulary

Sheme.

theAmericaneconomyarapidboom theuncomfortable theoftheGreatDepression

demonstratesmeaningfulinsentencestructure1.长短句的变化2.句子开头变化3.句子结构变化4.以主动句为主

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Weareendeavoringtoconstructamoreinclusivesociety. Wearegoingtomakethiscountryinwhichnooneisleftout. Wearetryingtomakeeveryoneequal.varietyinsentencestructure

Thereisalwaysa“however.”

Eachsituationhasitsbenefitsanditsdrawbacks. Inthefieldofmarketfinance,wefindacompellingexamplethatsupportsthisthesis.

isingrammar,usage,andmechanics

grammarandspelling

可数名词(冠词/复数) 主谓一致(三单)

时态一致(过去/现在)语法书

《实用英语语法》 《无敌英语语法》 《薄冰英语语法》Scoreof6

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文章结构

两个例子的结构三个例子的结构 introduction:

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body:conclusion:一个例子的结构七步成章

thesis

summarizetheexample1stphase(TS+detail)42ndphase(TS+detail)3rdphase(TS+detail)concludetheexample7stepfurther(suggestion)两个例子的结构

Assignment:Arepeoplemorelikelytobeproductiveandsuccessfulwhentheyignoretheopinionsofothers?

standoutandmakeone’sowndecisions,taketheadviceofothers.thedemiseofKingLearheshouldnothaveignoredKent’swarningtonotdisownCordelia.TheignominiousloseofSwedenintheGreatNorthernWarothersshouldlistentotheiradvisers.

ListeningtohisadviserswouldhavesavedLearfrommakingapoordecision.In

Shakespeare’splayKingLear,Leardecidestodividehislandamongsthisthreedaughtersaccordingtohowmucheachdaughterlovedhim.GonerilandRegan,thetwowickeddaughters,exaggeratetheirloveforhim,whileCordelia,theyoungestdaughter,claimstoloveLearonlysomuchasadaughtershouldloveherfather.LearbecomesfuriouswiththisbluntansweranddisownsCordelia,leavingGonerilandReganwiththemostland.Thesetwosisters,whoarethenewrulersofthekingdom,mistreattheirfatheruntilhegoesinsane.IfLearhadonlylistenedtohisadviserKent’swarningnottodivideupthelandthewayhedid,Learwouldnothavesufferedsuchamiserablefate.

CharlesXIIofSwedencouldalsohaveavoidedabadoutcomeofeventsifhehadnot

actedsoimpulsivelyintheGreatNorthernWar,whichbeganin1700.Inthisconflict,RussiawenttowarwithSwedenoverafootholdontheBalticSea.Swedenwasthefavortowin,anddealtRussiaahumiliatingdefeatattheBattleofNarva.PetertheGreatofRussia,however,tookthisearlylossasawake-upcallandbuiltuphisnavy.Whilehewasdoingthis,CharlesbecameambitiousandmadethepoordecisiontoinvadePoland,thusdividinghistroopsandresources.Hedidn’tpayanyattentiontohisadvisers,whourgedhimtostaythecourseofthewarhewasalreadyin.SwedenendeduplosingtheentirewarbecauseofCharles’actionsatthefinalBattleofPoltavain1721.Charleswouldhavesucceededifhehadnotignoredthesuggestionsofothers.

madeirrationaldecisionsthatcouldhavebeenpreventedifthey

hadnotsostubbornlyactedbytheirownintuitionsalone.taketheadviceofothersandappreciatetheadvantagesindoing

1

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so.

Introduction1.thesis

2.summarizeexampleA3.summarizeexampleB

1.thesis

Althoughitisgoodtostandoutandmakeone’sowndecisions,sometimesitisbeneficial

totaketheadviceofothers.

2.summarizeexampleA

WecanseethroughthedemiseofKingLearthatheshouldnothaveignoredKent’s

warningtonotdisownCordelia.

3.summarizeexampleB

TheignominiousloseofSwedenintheGreatNorthernWaralsodemonstratesthatothers

shouldlistentotheiradvisers.

Conclusion

1.concludetheexamples 2.stepfurther(suggestion)1.concludetheexamples

BothLearandCharlesmadeirrationaldecisionsthatcouldhavebeenpreventedifthey

hadnotsostubbornlyactedbytheirownintuitionsalone.

2.stepfurther(suggestion)

Inordertosucceedinthisworld,wemustlearntotaketheadviceofothersand

appreciatetheadvantagesindoingso.

Body

1.TS

connectexamplewiththesisBody

3.reasoning

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connectexamplewiththesis

TSA

ListeningtohisadviserswouldhavesavedLearfrommakingapoordecision.reasoningA

IfLearhadonlylistenedtohisadviserKent’swarningnottodivideupthelandtheway

hedid,Learwouldnothavesufferedsuchamiserablefate.

TSB

CharlesXIIofSwedencouldhaveavoidedabadoutcomeofeventsifhehadnot

actedsoimpulsivelyintheGreatNorthernWar,whichbeganin1700.

reasoningB

Charleswouldhavesucceededifhehadnotignoredthesuggestionsofothers.Body

2.example narrative

150words(evenly)

DoubleN(name,number)

InShakespeare’splayKingLear,Leardecidestodividehislandamongsthisthree

daughtersaccordingtohowmucheachdaughterlovedhim.GonerilandRegan,thetwowickeddaughters,exaggeratetheirloveforhim,whileCordelia,theyoungestdaughter,claimstoloveLearonlysomuchasadaughtershouldloveherfather.LearbecomesfuriouswiththisbluntansweranddisownsCordelia,leavingGonerilandReganwiththemostland.Thesetwosisters,whoarethenewrulersofthekingdom,mistreattheirfatheruntilhegoesinsane. 细节

Shakespeare KingLear Generil Reagan Cordelia Kent

Inthisconflict,RussiawenttowarwithSwedenoverafootholdontheBalticSea.

Swedenwasthefavortowin,anddealtRussiaahumiliatingdefeatattheBattleofNarva.PetertheGreatofRussia,however,tookthisearlylossasawake-upcallandbuiltuphisnavy.Whilehewasdoingthis,CharlesbecameambitiousandmadethepoordecisiontoinvadePoland,thusdividinghistroopsandresources.Hedidn’tpayanyattentiontohisadvisers,whourgedhimtostaythecourseofthewarhewasalreadyin.SwedenendeduplosingtheentirewarbecauseofCharles’actionsatthefinalBattleofPoltavain1721. 细节

GreatNorthernWarin1700 CharlesⅫofSweden PetertheGreatofRussia BalticSea

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BattleofNarva Poland

BattleofPoltavain1721progression/coherence

also/similarly/besides/moreover/whatismore/furthermore/inaddition/likewise/like

A

Body

TSexamplereasoning

Youaskmewhatmyaimis.Icanansweritinoneword.Itisatallcosts,inspiteofallterrors,howeverlongandhardtheroadmaybe;forwithoutthereisnosurvival. ---WinstonChurchill三个例子的结构

Assignment:Isdeceptioneverjustified?Introduction1.thesis

2.summarizeexampleA3.summarizeexampleB4.summarizeexampleC

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Deceptionissometimesjustified.Whensomeoneistryingtoachieveanend,heorshemustsometimesusedeceptionasameans.Onatleasttwooccasions,theConfederateArmyuseddeceptioninanattempttooverthrowthemorepowerfulUnionArmy.Alsoinliterature,JayGatsbyusesdeceptiontowinoverhistruelove.

Body

TSexamplereasoning

theUnionappearedtobewinningthebattle,GeneralStonewallJacksonwaswaitingwithreservetroops.Infact,hesurprisedtheoverconfidentUnionArmy,anddrovethembackwithhisdelayedattack. Sincethey

lackedresourcesandthemanpoweroftheNorth,theyhadtomakeduewithwhattheydidhave---cleverness.TheyusedtacticssuchasfiercerebelyellingandfalsereportstomaketheNorthbelievethatthereweremoreConfederatetroopsthanthereactuallywere.GeneralMcClellanoftheNorthoftenhesitatedtotakeactionbecausehewasalwaysconcernedaboutsendinghismenintocertaindeath. Tohim,hisonlygoalinloveistowinherover,whichgoaldriveshimtobecomewealthyandbuyahugemansion.HeholdshugedrinkingpartiesmerelyforthesakeofattractingDaisytohislove.Gatsby,however,doesnotfitintohighsociety.HemerelyusesthesethingstoattractDaisy.Conclusion

1.concludetheexamples 2.stepfurther(suggestion)

Fordeceptiontobejustifiedtheremustbesomeendthatisnecessarytoachieve.However,deceptionmusthaveagoodcause.Enron’srecentdeceptionwasunjustified,becausetheirendwastostealandtoembezzle.

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TheconfederacywasdefendingitswayoflifeandGatsbywasinpursuitoftruelove.Althoughdeceptionwasjustifiedinthesecases,mendacityingeneralshouldnotbeencouraged.Lyingandstealingareformsofdeceptionthatlackajustend.Therefore,deceptioncanbesometimesjustified,butatothertimesnot.

文章结构

一个例子的结构 两个例子的结构 三个例子的结构Scoreof6

1.example 2.structure http://www.77cn.com.cnnguage

词汇要求

词汇要求

1.书面化(standardwrittenEnglish)2.准确化(accurate)3.多样化(varied)4.活用化(apt)1.书面化1.1拼写完整

lab bike math TV

lab→laboratory bike→bicycle

math→mathematics TV→television

Writingmakesanexactman. ---FrancisBacon1.2不用缩写形式

I’m→Iam don’t→donot can’t→? A:cannot B:cannot

cannot:不可以

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cannot:可以不 A:Icannotopenit. B:Icannotopenit. e.g.

→forexample i.e.

→thatistosay etc.

→andsoon1.3不用符号

&---and $---money ∵---because ∴---so

1.4不用网络用语

ASAP

=assoonaspossible

2Bornot2B,thatisa?

=Tobeornottobe,thatisaquestion.

2.准确化2.1拼写准确

方便

convenient 上网方便

haveeasyaccesstotheInternet pasttime? pastime

entertainment/recreation/amusement/distraction/fun nowaday? nowadays

atpresent/currently/recently/inrecentyears/thesedays/today/now explain explanation maintain maintenance

数字：100以内使用英文

14

fourteen 40 forty

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19

nineteen 90 ninety 第九 ninth desert dessert diary dairy2.2用词准确

learnknowledge?

gain/develop/accumulate/increase/enlarge/obtain/acquireknowledge2.3不用生僻单词

reprimand omnipotent rambunctious

3.多样化钱

现金 钞票 票子 银子 人民币 老头票 孔方兄 大团结3.1动词:刺激

stimulate/motivate/inspire/drive/urge/spur3.2形容词:大

big/huge/great/vast/giant/gigantic/enormous/immense/tremendous/titanic大AB

bigtit

titanic

3.3名词:计算机

computer laptop?

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上义词

修辞

desktop?machineinventiondevice

learnedteacherefficientassistantmachinerylover

4.活用化

Sheme.

Isitimportanttoquestiontheideasanddecisionsofpeopleinpositionsofauthority?词汇要求

1.书面化(standardwrittenEnglish)2.准确化(accurate)3.多样化(varied)4.活用化(apt)

背单词

单词书

背单词的顺序

顺序背词法 逆序背词法 乱序背词法顺序背词法

abandon 放弃 abash 羞愧 abhor

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憎恨 abnormal 变态乱序背词法

most:s，1/6~1/5 hard:stcdeip easy:quvwxyzrandomwordlist背单词的时间

临睡前 早起后背单词的遍数

通常7遍 忘了再背 快速多遍背单词的方法点面结合

点：注意词的深度 面：每天背3个list点：注意词的深度

sound =healthy comparable =similar save =except spring =leap

面：每天背3个list

1.冷水刺激法2.同龄人压力

玩命地背单词

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