中考作文主题训练18——快乐之源

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主题训练18

——快乐之源

I.主题词汇

the secret of happiness ,adopt an optimistic attitude towards life,the most precious thing, in different ways, instead of ,your good attitude towards ,similarly,a kind of feeling, face your mistakes ,be satisfied with ,a way you relax yourself,keep you power and courage ,under one’s control ,be full of happiness

II. 常用句型

1.I think the secret of happiness is...

2.I think ...is the secret of happiness.

3.The secret of happiness is just a way you relax yourself . I hope all of you will become happier!

4.The first secret of happiness is to be honest . What’s more, if you...you will...

5.Happiness exists everywhere in our daily life. The feeling of happiness is...

6.Maybe you will wonder how to keep happy. One of the best ways is to...Secondly

7.As the proverb says...

8.To find happiness , I think ...

9.“Seeing my mum laughing, taking her to places she wants to go, is the happiest thing in the world for me,”said Luo.

10.Here are the ways to help you be happier:

The secret of happiness is to enjoy the simple things in life, such as reading a good book, listening to your favorite music, or spending time with close friends.

The secret of happiness is also to be active. Going dancing or playing sports are good ways. III. 模拟试题

The secret of happiness

A.What is the secret of happiness?

B.Why? (give at least two reasons)

C.How can you keep happy?

要点分析

1、每个人对快乐的理解不同，所以首先可以用1~2句话表达对快乐的看法

2、理由应围绕着对“快乐”的理解来阐述。不能偏题，也不要答非所问

3、保持快乐的做法要具体阐述，可介绍2~3种方法。

写作思路

对“快乐”的总体概述

1.As we all know, happiness is very important thing.I think the secret of happiness is smiling all the time.

2.In my opinion , the secret of happiness is to be optimistic all the time.

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3.Happiness is the most precious thing in the world , which can be obtained in different ways.

I think health is the secret of happiness.

4.Happiness is for everyone. In fact,happiness is always around you.

●对“如何保持快乐”的一些建议

1. If you want to be happy,please remember these simple rules: Free your heart from hate .

Free your mind from worries. Live simply. Give more. Expect less. And help others. Then your happiness will increase every day.

2. Luckily ,there is a way to be happy. Think more about what we have than what we want.

Rather than wish you were able to have an enjoyable vacation on the beach,think of what fun you have had at home. Similarly ,instead of hating to do much homework, thank teachers for helping you get knowledge. Take a deep breath and think of everything you have ever had.

3. For example, your good attitude towards doing homework can bring excellent grades in

examination because practice makes perfect.

●总结性的话语

1.Pay more attention to what you have, and you’ll probably get more of what you want.

2.Satisfaction is a kind of feeling that needs to be felt from inside. It’s very important to be satisfied with what you’ve got if you enjoy the pleasure of the simple life, and good luck will follow you.

3.Start to focus on what we have . The more we feel satisfied , the more happily we’ll have .

4.Life is like a revolving door. When it closes, it also opens. If you take every chance, you can be happy all the time.

范文讲评

原文稿

Everyone wants to have a happy life, but do you know how to be happy?

The first secret of happiness is to be honest. No one wants to make friends with dishonest people. What’s more, if you lie to others , you will worry weather they will know the truth so that you will be not only very anxious but also unhappy.

May be you will wonder how to keep happy. One of the best ways is to tell the truth to your friends ,teachers and parents . Secondly ,you ought to face your mistakes. As the proverb says , “failure is the mother of success.” Don’t be afraid of your mistakes.

Generally speaking, I believe that we should be honest. Only in this way can we keep ourselves happy. Honesty, the first secret of happiness , how important it is!

点评与评分

文章开门见山，直奔主题。论据充分，所用从句和连接词恰到好处。按中考作文20分计算，属于第二档~第一档的文章，可得17分左右。需改进之处：

1.whether 和weather 同音不同意。在文中应用whether 表示宾语从句的“是否”

2.May be 是情态动词的用法，不能放在句首，此处用“maybe”

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3.最后一段中，作者运用了only in the way can we keep ourselves happy。表明诚实是保持快乐的唯一方法，所以最后应做改动。

修改稿

Everyone wants to have a happy life, but do you know how to be happy?

The first secret of happiness is to be honest. No one wants to make friends with dishonest people . What’s more , if you lie to others , you will worry whether they will know the truth so that you will be not only very anxious but also unhappy.

Maybe you will wonder how to keep happy. One of the best ways is to tell the truth to your friends, teachers and parents . Secondly , you ought to face your mistakes . As the proverb says, “failure is the mother of success.”Don’t be afraid of your mistakes.

Generally speaking . I believe that we should be honest. It is one of the best ways to keep ourselves happy. Let everybody around us be honest. I believe an honest brings our life happiness.

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1.Are you happy? If not, will you make any changes and let yourself be happy? So let me tell you some of the secrets about happiness.

First , I think the colorful life is the source of happiness. Because a lot of wonderful things must have appeared in your life . If you complain about the unfairness in life , you should face it and tell yourself “ I’m strong!” Then you will be more and more worried unless you are satisfied with all the things you have now.

The secret of happiness is just a way you relax yourself . I hope all of you will become happier.

2.As we all know, happiness is a very important thing. I think the secret of happiness is smiling all the time.

If you smile, it will make you happy and then you can get happiness . And remember to argue with others as seldom as possible . When you lose your temper, please tell yourself to smile, and then happiness will come.

To be a friendly person, a helpful person, and a generous person, you shouldn’t get angry or worried easily ,and then happiness will come to your life!

3.Long long ago, a man asked one hundred people what the secret of happiness was, and they all gave him different answers . In my opinion, the secret of happiness is to be optimistic all the time.

Everyone meets difficulties and make mistakes. Optimism keeps you smiling and gives you power and courage when you face them. Once I failed to pass the Maths exam, my tears were falling, but my father told me, “ That’s the fact which you couldn’t change . But you can change your future. That’s under your control. Come on,be optimistic and have another try.” Finally, I became happy again. From then on, I always remember my father’s words and become happier and happier.

I want to say that to be optimistic isn’t difficult. Keep smiling is a simple way. Remember there are many people who lose more than you. “An optimist sees an opportunity in every trouble.” That’s my motto and I hope you can get some ideas from it. Happiness is easy just like it.

4.In fact everyone is happy,but sometimes people get confused by a lot of things , such as

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fame,money ,power and so on. Living a simple life is the secret of happiness . A lot of famous people often felt lonely when they were old because they fought for fame, power and money and forgot the important things in everyone’s life-----family,friends and children. They spent most of their time on their career. You can’t just begin to think about them until they are n longer in your life. Appreciate what you have right now to live happily in the moment.

I think the secret of happiness is living a simple life. Just appreciate everything you have and you will be the richest person in the whole world.

5.Happiness is the most precious thing in the world , and it can be obtained in different ways. I think health is the secret of happiness.

Only a healthy man can enjoy the pleasure of life. In other words, if you want to get happiness , you must take more exercise and eat healthily. However ,many people are lack of exercise now. They don’t think it’s important. Please remember taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy.

In a word ,to be healthy is to be happy.

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1.Learn to smile

Smile can make people happy. A mother’s smile is like a spring wind and can wipe the tears on her baby’s face. A teacher’s smile helps to encourage the failing students to stand up and work hard again. A friend’s smile shows his trust and understanding . Even the smile on a stranger’s face can make you warm and pleasant. So ,let’s learn to smile. When we give others a smile, we will feel happy,too. And next time, the person who received your smile will give it to you.

2.Happiness

Happiness is important in our life. When we fail in studies or some competitions, we need to be happy so that we can be more powerful to be successful next time. Being happy can make us live happily. We can also make more friends with a smile and a positive attitude . However ,what’s the key to happiness?

First, we should know that life is really complex. Sometimes, we may find some problems very easy to solve. However, there is also sometimes difficult. We should believe that failure is also an encouragement for us . We can be more powerful after that. Next,we should find some ways to get happiness . We can tell our good friends about our problems so that they can share some good ways to solve them with us . We can also play with them, such as going out to shop,sing, and have some sports . Finally, we can share our happiness with other people. It’s really a good way because it can help everyone around us be happy.

Happiness is really important to us. Let everybody around us to be happy and our life will be better,too.

3.How to be happy?

Happiness is the most precious thing in our life. “how to be happy?”you may ask. First, do things in accordance with your conscience. That is to treat others as you would like them to treat you. Secondly, pay more attention to your health, which is the root of happiness. Thirdly , worry and sorrow are of no use at all! When you meet with a hard situation, you must try to overcome it

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without any hesitation. Willpower is essential to happiness. Last but not least, adopt an optimistic attitude toward life. In this way ,true happiness can obtained.

4.Happiness is for everyone

Happiness is for everyone. In fact,happiness is always around you. When you are in trouble at school, you friends will help you. When you study hard at your lessons,your parents are always taking good care of your daily life and your health. When you succeed, your friends will say “congratulations” to you. And when you do something good to others, at the same time you will feel happy,too. All these are your happiness. If you notice them, you can see that your life is full of happiness.

Happiness is a feeling of your heart. So when you are poor, you can also feel happiness, because you have something else that can’t be bought with money. When you meet with difficulties , you can also say you are very happy, because you have more chances to challenge yourself. So you can’t always say you are poor and you have bad luck. As the saying goes, “life is like a revolving door, when it closes , it also opens.” if you grasp every chance, you can he happy all time.

5. Sharing brings happiness

Learning to share is a process to learn how to lead a happy life. I am used to sharing my secrets and favorite things my friends in order to my heart feel free and make me thoroughly forget sadness. When I am happy, I will share my smile with my friends, which brightens up all the faces around me. When I am sad, I will also share my sorrow with them. There seems to be a stream flowing in my heart, clearing up my pain. I gain happiness which is from not only myself but also others by sharing. As the saying goes , “sharing is a wonderful thing which can increase the pleasure and reduce sadness.” I believe sharing will be a resource of happiness if I can insist on doing so.

6.Doing sports brings me happiness

Doing sports beings e happiness. As we all know, sports and games do a lot of good to our health. They can make us strong, keep us healthy ,relax ourselves and so on. They can also make us gain knowledge and learn new skills. For these , I think doing sports brings me happiness. The old saying goes “ all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” More importantly, doing sports also teaches us much. I have learned the importance of unity when I was playing basketball with my classmates. This is also the reason why I think doing sports brings me happiness.

7.Helping others makes me happy

As a student, helping others is our duty. Once my classmates was in trouble , and he felt very worried . I helped him. Though it took me half an hour, I felt very happy. In public, I usually answer others’ questions and help them in time though they are strangers. I often gain happiness by helping others and I also know, when I am in trouble, I will be helped, too.

8.Reading newspaper is fun/helpful/happy

As we all know, newspaper are our good friends. They can bring us information as well as happiness. So I am interested i reading newspapers . There are different sections . The interestion stories make me laugh a lot. I often read newspaper after finishing my homework. It’s relaxing to read newspaper . The more we read, the more we learn. What great fun reading newspaper is!

相关主题

1.Happiness is the most important thing in my life

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2.Reading brings me happiness

A.Do you like reading?

B.Why do you like it?

C.What can you benefit from reading?

3.My family is full of happiness

A.How about your family?

B.How about your parents?

C.Give some reasons why your family is full of happiness.

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