2015届高考英语一轮近3年真题考点分类汇编《专题十九 短文改错》 Word版含解析

专题十九短文改错

高考试题

Passage 1

(2013新课标全国Ⅰ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.

答案

:I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to me on her knees and sing old songs.I was

only four when she away.She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very

.He was tall,with broad and a beard that turned from

black gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which

set apart from others in our small

town,

he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away they came over to

play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have known.

剖析:9e11d56aa32d7375a4178089ed to do sth.表示“过去常常做某事”。

2.此处描述过去的事情,因此应用一般过去时,与主句时态一致。

3.remember sth./sb.very well/clearly“很清楚地记得某事/某人”。

4.人有两个肩膀,因此应用复数形式。

5.turn from A to/into B表示“由A变成B”。

6.他的嗓音低沉,这使他与众不同。短语set sb.apart from“使某人与众不同”。

7.分析句子成分可知,逗号前后为两个并列的分句,且表示并列顺承关系,因此应用and连接。

8.in fact“事实上”,为固定搭配。

9.during为介词,后可接名词或代词,不能引导从句,故应改为when。when在此处引导时间状语从句。

10.我的爷爷是我曾见过的最温和的一个人。ever“曾经”,符合语境。

Passage 2

(2013新课标全国Ⅱ)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch a nd dinner,that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.

答案:The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, might not be served until

8 o’clock at night.This custom soon

another meal of

day.

,it had a connection the British porcelain(瓷器

) industry.Tea in China was traditionally from cups without handles.When tea

got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good

with handles to suit British habits.This made for the

in the porcelain industry.

剖析:1.read 为及物动词,其后不加介词。

2.此处应用动名词短语作主语。

3.which 在此引导非限制性定语从句,并在从句中作主语。

4.此处在介绍英国人喝下午茶这一习俗的形成,故应用一般过去时。

5.day 是可数名词,且在此处表特指,其前应用定冠词the 。

6.此处应用副词作评述性状语。

7.have a connection with/to 是固定搭配,表示“与……有联系”。

8.分析句子结构可知,应用过去分词构成被动语态。

9.此处cup 为可数名词,应用复数形式表示泛指,指各种各样的茶杯。

10.此处grow 要作介词for 的宾语,应用其名词形式growth 。

Passage 3

(2013陕西)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.

Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.

答案:My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

One Sunday morning we

fishing at a lake.We took fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived, so

we dropped the lines into the water. waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to

get .I wanted to give up, mygrandfather told me to wait a little

longer.Finally,there a

sudden pull at the pole and

fish was caught.Within the next few

,my grandfather also caught a fish.

hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.

剖析:1.句中出现了时间状语One Sunday morning 且整篇文章说的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。

2.修饰名词短语fishing poles 应用形容词性物主代词。

3.分析句子结构可知,此处是as soon as 引导的时间状语从句,so 多余。

4.根据句子意思可知,此处指的是在等了大约半个小时之后。故应用after 。

5.get 是系动词,后面要用形容词作表语。

6.根据上下文的意思可知,此处表示转折,而非并列。

7.在there be 句型中,be 的变化要和后面的名词保持一致。根据后面的a sudden pull 可知,谓语动词要用单数形式。

8.此处用不定冠词a,表示泛指。

9.few 后面跟可数名词的复数形式。

10.根据句子结构可知,feel 与其逻辑主语we 之间为逻辑上的主谓关系,故应用现在分词作状语,表示原因。

Passage 4

(2013辽宁)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜钱()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made hi m very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

答案:Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much

time his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so

he works from morning till night.Hard work made him very ill.“He has

ruined his .We are w

orried about him.” That

is other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid

visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside

room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I

into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the we had taken together.I understood

that he missed us just as as we missed him.

剖析:1.spend time/money on sth.“在……上花费时间/钱”,为固定用法。

2.因为该句逗号前面是介词短语,因此so 多余。

3.因为本句的主语hard work 是不可数名词,因此谓语要改为has 。

4.his 是形容词性物主代词,后面应该接名词,所以将healthy 改为health 。

5.引导表语从句,且在从句中作宾语,故用what 。which 有选择的意思,用在此处不准。

6.pay a visit to sb.表示“拜访某人”,为固定搭配。

7.根据上下文内容可知,此处应用his 指代M r.Johnson’s 。

8.根据前面的Yesterday afternoon,paid,was,had 等词可知应用一般过去时。

9.picture 是可数名词,some of the pictures 是多幅画中的一部分,所以picture 应该用复数形式。

10.修饰动词missed 应用副词much,much 在此用作程度副词,而many 只可用作形容词,所以应将many 改为much 。

Passage 5

(2013浙江)

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job,and as Mom explai ned,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share

a room with my

younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first

day of

school.I am awfully

tiring,but I know I’ll never fall sleep.

Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

Yours,

Rosemary

答案:Dear Diary,

Here I am in

the middle of a city,350 miles far

away

from our farmhouse.Do you want to

know why we last week? Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my ,my school just everything else I love in the world.To make matters

,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully ,but I know I’ll never fall .

Good night and remember,you,dear diary, my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

Yours,

Rosemary

剖析:1.far away 是不具体的,与前面的350 miles 相矛盾,故应去掉。

2.宾语从句的时间状语是last week,故应改为过去时。

3.又找到一份工作,又一个应该是another one 。

4.根据上下文可知是“同学们”应用复数形式。

5.此处是并列关系应改为and 。

6.上文讲到的不是什么好事,这里应该是“更糟糕的是”应用比较级。

7.first day 是特指的需要限定,故应加the 或my 。

8.tiring 是使人感到疲劳的,主语应该是物或事,故应改为tired 。

9.fall asleep 是固定搭配。

10.主语是you,被插入语dear diary 隔开了应改为are 。

Passage 6

(2013四川)

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每句不超过两个错误;

2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teacher’s office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn’t cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?

答案

:Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test

,but I tried to do it.Suddenly Mary,my

best friend,

me to let her to copy my answers.After for some time,I let her copy my answers.But

after the test,of us were called to the teacher’s office.The teacher was angry because we

had same

answers in the

.We were warned not to cheat again she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I

didn’t cheat.I

was just helping a friend.Why she punish me?

剖析:1.动词find后用形容词作宾语补足语。

2.表示“费力地”用副词hard,hardly几乎不,是表示否定意义的副词,不符合语境。

3.句中缺少谓语动词,故用asked(过去式)作谓语。

4.let后用不带to的不定式作宾语补足语。

5.介词after后用动词-ing形式作宾语。

6.根据语境可知此处指两人都,所以用both。

7.same之前需加定冠词the。

8.此处指一次化学考试,所以用单数形式。

9.根据语境可知此处应用连词or,表示“否则,要不然”。

10.全文是在讲述过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。

Passage 7

(2012新课标全国) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“That’s it.No more toys to you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.

答案

:I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and aggressive.From the time I was about

four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my

.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things /

wrong,I got angry and broke

.For a while

parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see

was happening.When I apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“That’s

it.No more toys

you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I make my toys to

last.My attitude changed from then on.

剖析:1.and连接的应该是两个并列的成分,前面是比较级more patient,后面也应是比较级,故将little改为less。

2.each of短语后为复数可数名词,故改toy为toys。

3.do wrong做错事。其主语一般是人,而此句中主语是things东西。go wrong出毛病;出故障,故可将did 改为went或在did后面加go表示对go的强调。

4.此处的代词指代前面的toys,故用复数形式,改it为them。

5.此处指的是我的父母,应在parents前加my。

6.此处表示“发生什么事”,故用what。

7.“撕毁”动作发生在过去,应用过去式,与said同时发生。

8.给某人买玩具应用for。

9.must在肯定句中表推测,语气最强,而此处语气较弱用might或could更合适。

10.根据使役动词make的用法,应将to去掉。make sb./sth.do sth.使某人/某事物做某事。

Passage 8

(2012浙江) 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Two years before,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody

knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.

答案

:Two years ,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.,I had an accident and hit

another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two

.I called my parents,I did not tell them what

had happened.I knew that

they be worried

about because I was

so away,and that my

mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As

a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.

剖析:1.由下文时态得知。

2.因为rent是及物动词。

3.此处是副词作状语。

4.前有two,故用可数名词复数形式。

5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折,所以用but。

6.由上下文时态得知。

7.此处是介宾短语,需宾格代词。

8.此处无表示比较之意。

9.interesting“有趣的”,修饰物,interested“感兴趣的”,修饰人,因为此处修饰stories,所以用interesting。

10.因为指代上面的真实情况。

Passage 9

(2012辽宁) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Diana,

Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend,Gina.Unfortunate,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the highway and,for a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.

Much love,

Fiona 答案:

Dear Diana,

Thank you for the lovely day

we with you.It was so

kind you to let us bring Anne’s

friend,Gina.,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the

highway and,

a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six .In the end,we drove to a service

station and waited there

the road was clear.In the car park

Gina nearly got knocked over as car

drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own

way to home.

Much love,

Fiona 剖析:1.由下文可知此处应用过去式had。

2.此处kind修饰you,说明you的品质,故用介词of。

3.unfortunately为副词,修饰后面的句子。

4.as a result结果,是固定词组。

5.前面有six,故用复数名词miles。

6.until/till直到……,符合此处的语境。

7.在那儿的一个停车场,故用there。

8.car为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故用不定冠词a。

9.由后面的our可知,此处应用we。

10.home为副词,故前面不用介词。

Passage 10

(2012陕西) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

答案

:My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we Beijing last month.It is in

the downtown area,it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in

a double-room with a big bath.What I liked

best the free high-speed

Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also

shared my friends many

photos

in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local .

It is such

great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of who is going to Beijing.

剖析:1.由时间状语last month可知此处应用一般过去时。

2.前后是因果关系或并列关系。

3.anywhere是副词,前面不加介词。

4.作定语应该使用形容词。

5.what引导的主语从句作主语,谓语动词由宾语或表语而确定,故谓语动词用单数。

6.share with...和……一起分享、分担。

7.photos与take之间为被动关系,故用过去分词。

8.dish为可数名词,前面有several修饰,要用复数形式。

9.hotel为可数名词,要加不定冠词,构成“such a(n)+adj.+单数可数名词+that+其他”结构。great的发音以辅音音素开头故用a。

10.any friend of mine我的朋友中的任何一个,此处应该使用名词性物主代词。

Passage 11

(2011新课标全国) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

答案

:My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station a ticket to Hangzhou.I

was going to visit a friend

and after that I would go to Xiamen for

long holiday.I bought my ticket turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my

money my pocket,but the only clothes I

had those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without

any

.When I finally arrived at my he lent to

me lots of clothes.I very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

剖析:1.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station 是主系表结构的主干句,需要用buying 作状语。

2.去看望在杭州的朋友,远指用there 。

3.因为holiday 是可数名词,去度假习惯上说“go for a holiday”。

4.bought my ticket 和turned around 两个动作间是并列关系。

5.钱在口袋里,用介词in 。

6.be 动词的主语是clothes,又因为上下文都用过去时态,所以用were 。

7.luggage 为不可数名词。

8.arrived at(到达)的应当是朋友的家,my friend’s=my friend’s house 。

9.动词lend 的用法是lend sb.sth.或lend sth.to sb.。

10.此处表述“我”在当时得到朋友的帮助很高兴,应用一般过去时。

Passage 12

(2011辽宁)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per weeks.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.

答案:In early January this year,the rate of UFO

reports steady,around three

per

.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors outer space was shown on

television,there was immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding

officer,Wayne

Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided

to his findings known. wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft

movements. this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, the rate remained above the previous level.

剖析:1.因为句子的主语为the rate,是单数,所以谓语动词要用单数形式。

2.因为前面有per(每一),所以用单数形式week 。

3.来自外太空的……,所以用from 。

4.名词increase 为泛指,且其前有发音以元音音素开头的immediate 修饰,所以用不定冠词an 。

5.who 引导的定语从句中缺少谓语动词。

6.不定式to 后用动词原形。

7.因为代替的是一个人Wayne Tyler,所以用He 。

8.副词naturally 作状语修饰动词explained,不需要加介词for 。

9.现在分词短语作状语,drop 与follow 之间为逻辑上的主谓关系。

10.前后句子间为转折或让步关系,所以用表转折或让步的连词。

Passage 13

(2011陕西)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by th e time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!

答案

:Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew

a new film with one of my favourite

.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, I rushed back home to get

.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen

.I was

really and about to leave when he walked

out a building.He was right

there in the front of me!I cou ldn’t believe my luck—not only did

I my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!

剖析:1.a crew 与make 之间存在逻辑上的主谓关系,用现在分词短语作后置定语修饰crew 。

2.“one of+可数名词”结构中,应用可数名词的复数形式。

3.句子的前后之间为因果关系,用so 。也可用and 表顺承关系。

4.get 表示“(去)拿来”时为及物动词,需加宾语,it 指代前文中的camera,避免重复。

5.整篇文章以一般过去时为主,finish 这个动作发生在got back 之前,故用过去完成时。

6.否定句中应用anywhere 来表示“到处”。

7.表示人感到失望时应用disappointed 。

8.walk out 后接宾语时需加of,表示“从……中走出来”。

9.在事物的前面用in front of...,in the front of 表示在事物内部的前面。

10.倒装句中did 表示过去,已提前,had 应用原形have 。

Passage 14

(2010新课标全国)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought t he price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced:“I’ll take them.”

答案

:My friend Nick told me

story about his experience back in the US,which was very .One

day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door by to help.As the old man looked over the

things

that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden for Christmas trees.On the box was a

card :“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the

price to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s

delay, neighbor picked up the

box

announced:“I’ll take them.”

剖析:1.story为可数名词单数,表泛指,应用不定冠词a。

2.主语为物,应用interesting。

3.故事发生时间为one day,句子时态为过去时,故用came。

4.考查固定搭配,on the ground和in the yard。

5.a box of golden balls“一盒金色的球”,应用可数名词复数。

6.saying为现在分词作伴随状语。

7.整篇文章都在叙述过去发生的一件事,故应用一般过去时态。

8.副词用错,语意矛盾。价格从原先的每个25美分降到每个10美分。

9.代词用错,人称不合适。由第一句的his及第二句的he可知用his。

10.此处表并列动作,应用and。

Passage 15

(2009海南、宁夏) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mrs Winthorp,

So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.

I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far a way from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.

W ell,I had better to stop now.I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for I’ve got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.

Best,

Carol

答案:

Dear Mrs Winthorp,

So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know things are going.

I’m glad to say that has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away

me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my

from the lifts as possible and they

with them so that we can help each other the course work.Everyone

course here and I plan to make

else seems very nice and here.

Well,I had better to stop now.I’m going to

attend first lesson this afternoon,I’ve got some

preparation to make.Keep in touch.

Best,

Carol

剖析:1.表示让对方知道情况进展如何,应该用how来代替what。

2.“一切进展顺利”中“一切”应该为everything;anything为“任何事情”之意,常用于否定句和疑问句中。

3.考查时态,该句谈论的是在大学的第一周所发生的事,属过去的事情,所以用过去式。

4.序数词second前应该有定冠词修饰。

5.make friends with sb.为固定结构,意为“与某人交朋友”。

6.help sb.with sth.与help sb.(to) do sth.均为固定结构。

7.系动词seem后用形容词作表语。

8.had better do sth.为固定结构,意为“最好做某事”。

9.mine为名词性物主代词,后面不能再接名词lesson,所以必须改成形容词性物主代词my。

10.该句表示结果,而不是原因,应该用so。

模拟试题

Passage 1

(2013银川一中高三第二次模拟) When you go aboard,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of every new culture you must adopt to: the language,the food and the clothing.The best thing to do is to do how the people of the country do.Unless they eat snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may find difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can always get off cultural difficulties by visiting some old great museum.Don’t spend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend some time make friends.In this way you could learn about the new culture and have fun.

答案:When you

go ,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of

every new culture you must

to: the language,the food and the clothing.The best thing to do is to do

the people of the country do.they eat snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may

find

difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can always get cultural difficulties by visiting some

old great .

Don’t spend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend so

me time

friends.In this way you learn about the new culture and have fun.

剖析:1.此处表示出国,故应用abroad。

2.adapt to表示“适应”。

3.此处为what引导的宾语从句。

4.此处为假设的一种情况。if如果。

5.此处并非表示“敢不敢”,而是表示“跟从”。

6.find与difficult之间缺少形式宾语it。

7.get round/ around在此处表示“顺利应付或克服”。

8.museum为可数名词,应用其复数形式。

9.spend some time (in)doing something 花费时间做某事,为固定表达。

10.此处不是表示过去,而是表示将来的事。故不用can的过去式。

Passage 2

(2013海口高考调研测试) It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop,waited for Bus No.601 to go to school.After the while,the bus came and she got on it.There are many passengers in the bus.Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help pu sh the bus.” When we heard this,Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus.They worked hardly together,pushing the bus slowly backward.Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.

答案

:It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop,for Bus No.601 to go to

school.After while,the bus came and she got on

it.There many passengers in the bus.Some were

talking some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help push the bus.”

When heard this,Li Hua and the

other got off the bus.They

worked together,pushing the bus

slowly .Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.

剖析:1.在具体某一天的上午要用介词on。

2.wait 与主语之间为主动关系,故应用其现在分词形式。

3.after a while 一会儿,为固定短语。

4.前后时态应保持一致。

5.前后句之间是对比关系,而非转折关系。

6.此处表示汽车抛锚,无需被动,没有强调人为造成的。

7.前后人称应保持一致。

8.passenger 为可数名词,此处应用复数形式。

9.hardly 表示“几乎不”;hard 表示“努力地”。

10.众人在推车,故车应该向前(forward)行。

Passage 3

(2013吉林白山第一中学高三第二次模拟)

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.

As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers.They must be charged with law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.

Yours,

Wang Ming

答案:

Dear Editor,

I’ m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my

ate a bag of food from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their

faces pale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.

As some illegal businessmen

only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, seldom care about the necessary safety measures or

care happens to consumers.They must be

charged law.Meanwhile,I do

hope whole society can realize

the of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.

Yours,

Wang Ming

剖析:1.由下文可知,此处并不是一个邻居。

2.buy 与food 之间为动宾关系,应用其过去分词作后置定语。

3.前后时态应保持一致。

4.call 作“打电话叫”讲时,为及物动词。

5.be interested in...对……感兴趣。

6.此处指代前面的商人,故用they 来表示。

7.what 引导的宾语从句表示发生在顾客身上的事情。

8.受到法律的惩罚应用介词“by”,表示动作的主使者。

9.the/our whole society 表示“整个社会”。

10.此处表示重要性,应用important 的名词形式。

Passage 4

(2013吉林实验中学高三第二次模拟)

In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates,richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,that is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and researching the computer software.An old saying go,“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl.I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs.To meet me curiosity,I read in English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English exam.Interest is the key of success.

答案:In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates, richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard

University,is the most famous in the world.He set up a company

and the computer

software.An old saying ,“Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl.I

got interested in foreign

cultures customs.To

meet curiosity,I read in English stories ever y day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As a result,I always did

very well in English

.Interest is the key success.

剖析:1.形容词最高级前应加定冠词the 。

2.that 不能引导非限制性定语从句。

3.set up 与research 之间为并列关系。两个动作同时进行。

4.单数名词作主语谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。

5.副词修饰形容词。

6.此处cultures 与customs 之间为并列关系,而非选择关系。

7.此处需用形容词性物主代词。

8.read 为及物动词,其后无需加介词。

9.此处指多次考试。

10.the key to 表示“……的关键”。

Passage 5

(2013吉林四校联合高三第一次诊断)

It i s important to know that a parent can do to help reduce children’s stress.If you notice that your child is becoming nerve,he may have problems at the school.He may has trouble sleep.He may be depressing and begin to

suffer from headaches.You should talk him to try to discover the cause of her stress.You can spend extra time help him.In short,you need to be complete supportive and encouraging all the time.

答案

:It is important to know a parent can do to help reduce children’s stress.If you notice that your child is

becoming ,he may have problems at the school.He

may

trouble .He may

be

and begin to suffer from headaches.You should

talk him to try to discover the cause

of stress.You can spend extra

time him.In short,you need to

be supportive and encouraging all the time.

剖析:1.what 引导的宾语从句,而且在从句中作宾语。

2.此处需要nerve 的形容词形式,与become 构成系表结构。

3.at school 在学校,为固定表达。

4.may 后面跟动词原形。

5.have trouble (in) doing sth.做某事有困难,为固定短语。

6.表示人的心情应用depressed 。

7.talk to sb.和某人谈话。

8.前后人称不一致。

9.spend some time (in) doing sth.花费时间做某事,为固定短语。

10.副词修饰形容词。

Passage 6

(2013哈尔滨第六中学高三第二次模拟)

Mrs. Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and was tired during the day to do anything,even the simple things that she used to enjoy doing.She had headaches more often,it prevented her from reading or watched TV .The more she thought about her conditions,the more worse she felt.At last she went to see her doctor,whom she had known for year.The doctor listened to his heart and said,“There is nothing serious wrong with you,and I accept the fact that you don’t feel well.Now,I will give you some pills that will 9e11d56aa32d7375a4178089e tomorrow morning and tell me how you felt.”

答案

:Mrs. Smith was unable to fall

at night and was tired during the day to do anything,even the simple things that she used to enjoy doing.She had headaches more often,

prevented her from reading or

TV .The more she thought about her conditions,the more worse she felt.At last she went to see her doctor,whom she had known

for .The doctor listened

to hear t and said,“There is

nothing

wrong with you,I accept the fact that you don’t feel well.Now,I will give you some pills that will 9e11d56aa32d7375a4178089e

tomorrow morning and tell me how you .”

剖析:1.fall asleep入睡,为固定短语。

2.此处为too...to...结构。

3.which引导的非限制性定语从句。

4.read与watch为并列成分一起作from的宾语。

5.worse本身就是比较级,more多余。

6.for years意为“好多年”。

7.前后人称应保持一致。

8.修饰形容词wrong应用serious的副词形式。

9.前后句之间为转折关系,而非顺承关系。

10.前后句时态应保持一致。

Passage 7

(2013哈尔滨第九中学高三第五次月考)

I like music very much,pop songs particularly.Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home,I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the colourfully world of music.Now and then I stopped to follow the songs.Sometimes,my mother comes in,asked me to fix my attention to my homework.She does not like the pop music.Like most grown-ups,she enjoys folk songs,because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young.It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

答案:I like music very much,pop songs particularly.Every

evening I am doing homework and at

weekends when I at home,I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.The familiar patterns

of notes attract me into

the world of music.Now and then

I to follow the

songs.Sometimes,my mother comes in,

me to fix my attention my homework.She does not like the

pop music.Like most grown-ups,she enjoys folk songs,because the peaceful music reminds her of beautiful

life when she was young.It is a

truth people of

different understand music differently and enjoy

different kinds of music.

剖析:1.此处为when引导的定语从句。

2.主语后缺少系动词。

3.应用形容词形式修饰名词world。

4.上下文时态应保持一致。

5.ask与主语之间为主谓关系,故用其现在分词形式作状语。

6.fix one’s attention on把某人的注意力放在……,为固定短语。

7.pop music为专有名词,其前不需要加定冠词。

8.前后人称不一致。

9.此处为that引导的主语从句。

10.形容词different后应跟名词的复数形式。

Passage 8

(2013辽宁大连高三第一次模拟) It was my first day of high school,and I was late.My next lesson,French,scared to me,for I just can not speak that language.At the door,a hand reached out and shook me firmly.I looked up.The man with a smile and welcoming words eased my fears.That year,I enjoyed his classes a great deal because I learned more than just French.Sometime he told us interesting stories.After school his room always filled with students and he would listen to and chatted with them.He taught me what every person is worth your times.How fortunately I felt being his student!

答案:It was my first day of high school,and I was late.My next lesson,French,scared to

me,for I just

not speak that language.At the door,a hand reached out and shook firmly.I looked up.man with a smile and welcoming words eased my fears.That year,I enjoyed his classes a great deal because I learned more than just French.he told us interesting stories.After school his

room always filled with students and he

would listen to

and with them.He taught

me every person is worth

your

.How

I felt being his student!

剖析:1.scare使某人害怕,为及物动词。

2.前后时态应保持一致,此处需用can的过去式could。

3.此处用名词性物主代词mine来表示我的手。

4.此人第一次出现,故用不定冠词。

5.sometimes意为“有时”。

6.be filled with意为“充满”。

7.chat与listen to 为并列谓语,都用动词原形。

8.that引导的宾语从句。

9.句意:每个人都值得你去花费时间。所以此处用time。

10.应用形容词形式作felt的表语。

Passage 9

(2013辽宁五校协作体高三第二次联合模拟)

A few years before,Jack and I had a quarrel over score in a football match.From then on,we didn’t speak to each other any longer.

One day,when I was standing by a tree read,a ball flew to me and I kicked it back with looking at the

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