高三英语新题型写作

高三英语写作

江苏省泰兴中学

杨莉

高三英语写作

Lead in New Writing Form【写作内容】 (1)以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容， 不得引用原文里的句子。 (2)然后以约120个词以“ ”为主题 写一篇短文。

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Problems

时态错误！照抄原文！

A man doesn’t have a job. He wants to ask the manager to give him a chance. It’s the courage and strong belief in his eyes that motivated the manager to give him a job.

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Problems

细节多余！

Pearman was out of work. One day, he wanted to wash a hotel manager’s windshield to earn some change…

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Problems

故事主角错位!

Hotel manager Robert Fredy offered a chance to Pearman and helped him while training him. Finally, Pearman succeeded in his career and repaid Fredy’s loans.

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Problems

未紧扣主题！

Pearman was a lucky man. He met with a manager and was offered a job , getting a chance to change his life thoroughly.

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Problem-list时态

说法转换叙述角度 ★

要点组合 ★扣题 ★

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SampleThe story is about an unemployed man, named Pearman, who got a job and succeeded in his life. He was offered the precious second chance because he never lost courage and hope to life.

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Let’s sharpen our skills!

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Small practice---实践出真知Main idea of each paragraphPara1: It’s quite natural that children look at the same problem differently from our parents. (省例子，换说法) Kate and Paul had a disagreement about eating salt. (变间接引语) She brought home a lot of books to read during the vacation. (用概括词)

Para2:

Para3:

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概括口诀： 缩间短，省细例。间—间接引语， 短—简短关联词， 细例—细节和例子。

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Skills building 1---读要求 【写作内容】 1)以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内 容，不得引用原文里的句子。 2)然后以约120个词以“ ”为主题 写一篇短文。 the hidden meaning of the story

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Skills building 2---找要点 When 记叙文 Where narrative ★Who Key information ★What for your summary How 解意 ★Meaning

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缩间短，省细例

Output 1.

读要求，找要点

Summarize the practice part!

Three key points for the summary: (1)An eagle was hatched by a hen. (2)He wanted to fly high,but chickens discouraged him. (3) He had no confidenceand didn’t find his potential.

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Skills building 3—有效整合

How to organize them effectively?

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Polish up连接词 介词短语 定语从句 非谓语动词 动词短语︰ ︰

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Sample An eagle, hatched by a hen, wanted to fly high, but was discouraged by his fellows. He failed all his life due to his lacking self-confidence.

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Output 2.

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