高考英语感谢信

英语试题写作“1.2.3”精析

假定你是新华中学的学生李华，在你的一个英国朋友Mary家里度过了愉快的一周，在回国之前，你想给Mary写一封感谢信。 内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.一周收获； 3.邀请她明年夏天到中国。 注 意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；词数120左右； 供： 1.表达谢意

2.感谢的原因，在英国朋友Mary家一周收获 3.邀请她明年夏天到中国。

需：写一封感谢信，词数120字左右。

结合点：把能够表达文章的意思的一些零散的词汇、短语、句型以及可以增添文章亮点的高级词汇和句型全部罗列出来，然后根据文章要求，把要表达的三个要意列成提纲放在三个自然段，有了提纲，文章在材料安排上才会层次分明，在此基础上，再把刚才想到的表达把提纲扩充，增加细节描述，并注重使用一些连接副词把文章串起来，使得文章流畅自然。最后达到我们题目的需求，呈现出一篇好的作文。

1. 审题：确定文章体裁：感谢信

人称：信一般以第一人称为主

时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主，讲过去的经历时还用到一般过去式 2. 确定文章结构： 第一段：表达谢意；

第二段：感谢的原因, 在英国朋友Mary家一周收获； 第三段：邀请她明年夏天到中国。

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3. 我们从供的内容可以挖掘出以下的一些要点： 文章可能会用到的一些高级词汇：

Gratitude benefit unforgettable experience improve appreciate look forward to等

文章可以用到的一些句型：

表达谢意的：

①Many thanks for your kind and warm help. ②Thank you for your generous hospitality. ③I＇m sincerely grateful for all your help in…

④Thank you for doing so much to make my trip interesting. ⑤ Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour. 另外，表示从对方的帮助中获益时，可以用： ① I benefited greatly from your help. ② Your help benefited me greatly ③ Thanks to your help , I achieved… 也可用虚拟语气来增强表达效果： ① Without your help， I couldn’t have… ② But for your help, I couldn’t have… 感谢的原因方面的：

1、During this week, I got a good knowledge of England , which introduced me to more about England culture. 2、In an environment exposed to English , my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly.

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3、Furthermore, I made some new friends, who helped me a lot. 表示邀请的：

① Welcome to my home town next summmer. ② I really hope you can come.

③ I do hope that you will be able to come. ④ I would feel /be honoured if you could come. 文章可能会用到的一些起连接作用的短语： 1.what’s more; furthermore; besides; 2.as a result / as a consequence; 3.so/therefore 4.meanwhile.

5.nonetheless

6.But it's a pity that...

7.However , the difficulty lies in...

8.Similarly, we should pay attention to.... 9.not(that)...but(that)...

10.In this respect, we may as well (say)

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4. 列提纲

1.本文是感谢信，用第一人称

一．确定文章的人称和时态 2.写一周收获时用一般过去时

3.表示邀请时现在时和过去时灵活选用

Dear Mary,

I am writing to express my gratitude for

已知 1.表示感谢 para1 your company while I was at your home,

（供） Thank you very much for… which

was an unforgettable experience for

I am so grateful for…

me and I benefited a lot from it. I would like to express my gratitude for…

During this week, I got a good 2.列举一周 knowledge of England, which introduced me para2 to more than England culture. In an

未知 二．正文要点 I benefited greatly from…

environment exposed to English, my English Thanks to your help, I achieved…

listening and speaking skills got improved （需）

(用虚拟语气增强效果) greatly. Furthermore, I made some new Without your help, I couldn’t have… But for your help, I couldn’t have

friends, who helped me a lot.

Welcome to my home next summer. I 3. 发出邀请 para3

will be your guide and you can experience

traditional Chinese culture and taste Chinese I do hope that you will be able to come to…

food. I am looking forward to your coming. I think it would be a good idea if you could come… I would be looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes! Yours, Li hua

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Dear Mary,

I am writing to express my gratitude for your company while I was at your home,which was an unforgettable experience for me and I benefited a lot from it.

Expressing Thanks

During this week, I got a good knowledge of England , which introduced me to more about England culture. In an environment exposed to English , my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly. Furthermore, I made some new friends, who helped me a lot.

Explaining reasons

Welcome to my home next summmer. I’ll be your best guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.

Sending invitation

I am looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes! Yours Lihua

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