高考英语作文强化练习

高考英语作文练习------冒险经历

本单元的写作是描述一次冒险经历属于记叙文文体。在文章里要写出自己做了什么，自己看见了什么，以及自己的感受。

[基本框架]

1．开头(beginning)——交代经历发生的时间地点

2．主体(body)——介绍经历的过程

3．结尾(ending)——写出经历的结果以及你自己的观点

[常用词块]

1．save the earth拯救地球

2．take the time machine 乘坐时光机

3．fly past the stars飞过星球

4．be transformed into an insect变形成了昆虫

5．be eaten by a monster 被怪物吃掉

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．When it comes to the adventure story，the Magic schoolbus came into my mind first.

一说到冒险故事，我首先想到的就是《神奇校车》。

2．Speaking of the adventure，I experienced one three years ago.

说起冒险，我三年前经历了一次。

3．If you want to experience the travel in space, let's read the following story together.

如果你想感受太空旅行，我们一起来读读下面的故事吧。

★丰满主体

1．We flew through the tunnel and got into the time machine.

我们飞跃隧道，进入了时光机器。

2．I was swimming in the sea when a big shark appeared several meters away from me.

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我正在海里游泳，突然一条大鲨鱼出现在离我几米远的地方。

3．They jumped into the tree hole and then shrank into a little man of the same size as a mouse.

他们跳入树洞，然后缩成了和一只老鼠大小的小人儿。

★余味结尾

1．The little girl came to herself and found she was still sleeping under the tree.

小姑娘苏醒过来，发现自己依然睡在树底下。

2．Till now I still feel frightened at the thought of that adventure.

直到现在，一想起那次冒险我依然感到恐惧。

3．The hero in the movie saved the people in trouble and taught me to be kind and helpful to people around me.

电影中的男主角拯救了苦难中的人们，教会我要对周围的人善良，要乐于帮助他们。

你是新华中学的李华，今年暑假和父母去了夏威夷。期间经历了人生第一次潜水探险。请以日记的形式描述自己的这一次冒险经历，并写出从中自己的所思所想所获。

1．潜水地点是普普克阿海滩公园(Pupukea Beach Park)；

2．我刚开始听说这里有时会出现鲨鱼，有点担心，但因为它们一般不会主动攻击人类，我尝试下水；

3．这里是一个海洋生物保护区，海里的鱼类非常丰富，还有海龟；

4．因为海里全是礁石，需要注意安全；

5．建议想要去的朋友最好选择每年的夏季，海面平静且海浪很小的最佳浮潜季节。

要求：1.词数：80左右；

2．内容积极向上，可适当增删细节以使行文流畅。

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Today the adventure story is my first diving experience.In the early morning my

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parents and I went to Pupukea Beach by bus and then to an island by boat.

Hearing the basic dos and don'ts including the information of sharks，I dare not to jump into the sea.After the coach's explanation I jumped in with the guide.At first I didn't see any fish but some corals and seaweeds.Soon I found groups of fishes of all kinds and the turtles.What shocked me most was that I should see some sharks running after the fish groups with my own eyes.

Diving experience is impressive and unforgettable.We should be kind to the sea creatures and live in harmony with them.

经历感受类写作

该类写作描述个人经历，常以短文或日记等文体呈现；以一般过去式为主，按照事件发展的顺序来记叙。可以用一些与时间相关的副词如then，later，next串联句子。至于感受部分，同学们平时可以多积累相关的单词或短语。

[基本框架]

1．开头(beginning)——引出主题

2．主体(body)——介绍事件

3．结尾(ending)——发表感受

[常用词块]

1．an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历

2．to my joy/delight 令我高兴的是

3．see sb.off为某人送行

4．a five-day tour 为期五天的旅行

5．live a．..life过着……样的生活

6．win the first prize获得一等奖

7．think highly of高度赞扬

8．set a good example for sb.给某人树立好的榜样

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．Last week I went to mount Emei in Sichuan province with my family.

上周我和家人去了四川省的峨眉山。

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2．I will never forget the experience when I went to Beijing last year.

我永远不会忘记去年去北京的经历。

3．Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.

昨天晚上我正忙于准备考试，突然我听到一个很大的声音。

★正文佳句

1．On the hot afternoon of last Saturday，Li Yu went downtown and waited from one store to another.

上周六的一个炎热的下午，李玉去了市中心，从一家商店到另一家商店。

2．I looked in the direction of the call and saw a boy falling into the river.

我朝呼叫的方向看，看见一个男孩掉进河里。

3．Throwing the fishing pole，I dashed over like an arrow，jumped into the river and swam very quickly towards the boy.

我扔下钓竿，像箭一样冲了过去，跳进河里，飞快地向男孩游去。

★余味结尾

1．However，maybe all of my efforts are not made in vain.

然而，也许我所有的努力都没有白费。

2．How I wish I could go back to enjoy middle school life once more!

我多么希望我能再次回到中学生活中去！

3．But they will remain a happy memory all my life.

但它们会成为我一生的快乐回忆。

学以致用

你的美国笔友Bob对钓鱼很有兴趣。请你根据以下要点，写出你和你的爸爸暑假期间某天去钓鱼的经历，通过电子邮件发给Bob，让他分享。要点包括：1．所带器具和食物等；2．钓鱼过程；3．一天的收获和感受。

注意：1．词数：80左右2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：沙蚕clam worms鱼钩fishhook

Dear Bob，

How are you！I'm glad to write the letter to tell you something about fishing.

On a sunny morning in summer，my father and I drove to the seaside to fish.We took some clam worms，some bread and water as well.On arriving at the seaside，I felt

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comfortable.Bathed in the sea wind，I felt relaxed.Then we took our fishing poles out，put clam worms in the fishhooks and threw them into the sea.Then we waited patiently.After a while，father got a fish.However，I lack such knowledge of fishing.So my father constantly gave me some advice，which benefited me a lot.Then I fished a lot.

At five o'clock，we returned home，feeling very happy.

Yours，

Li Hua

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