九年级上册英语书面表达试题(有答案和解析)及解析

九年级上册英语书面表达试题(有答案和解析)及解析

一、英语书面表达

1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：

1.个人基本情况介绍

2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：

1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

【答案】My junior high school life

My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.

I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！

要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100 词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.

As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.

Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.

Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well

I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．书面表达

李华所在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动，假定你是李华，请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节，内容包括：

1. 今年庆祝时间（6月18日）

2. 节日由来：纪念（be in memory of）屈原

3. 吃粽子，赛龙舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）……

4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日

注意：1. 词数80~100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

4.开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear fellows,

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.

_____________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________.

【答案】Dear fellows,

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the

fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We welcome to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间，接下来介绍端午节的由来以及庆祝活动，最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面表达

每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。

A（n） _________ I have

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I have

Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.

In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.

When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.

Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!

【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。

写作亮点：

这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），

上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。

5．书面表达

难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。

注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺;

3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

6．假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。

提示词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate

提示问题：Where are you going?

What will you do there?

When and where will you meet?

【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Le t’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。

假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。

提示词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing

提示问题：

Why is it important to be confident?

What experience made you more confident?

How can we become more confident?

It's very important to be confident

【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.

When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalle d the

speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.

To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.

【解析】

本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of；know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

8．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计

划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：

1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。写作要求：

1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.

I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.

【解析】

试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。

9．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear f rom you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________

Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a

famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her so n, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.

If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。

10．书面表达

根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文

In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时常、气温、旅馆情况。食物等相关信息，要求考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。虽然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。熟悉英语的表达方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。

写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。对于城市A 的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可

以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。

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