大学英语四六级考试万能作文模板good

大学英语四六级考试十二句作文四级作文一般（不是所有）都要求三段式（要求三段式的，只写一段0-4分，只写两段0-9分）。我们算一下，如果我们在每一段中写上四句，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右，每一句十多个词，就又120-150个字。

It is very important to have good health. With good health, we can enjoy our lives and work efficiently. Without good health, we can do nothing.

There are four ways to keep fit for everyone of us. Firstly, we should have our breakfast (,such as milk, eggs, bread and so on,) in the morning. Secondly, we should have a (short) nap (,even 30 minutes,) at noon. Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary (for everyone and we can do some sports exercises) in the afternoon. And fourthly, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to music.

My own practices are as follows. In the morning, I have my breakfast. At noon, I have a nap. And in the afternoon, I always play football. In the evening, I usually listen to classical music. 万能作文模板

Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合]. It is estimated that [相关数据]. //Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. Besides, [原因二]. The third one is [原因三]. //To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解决办法一]. On the other hand, [解决办法二]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象]. 关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文如下：

Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers 枪手] in [China's examinations中国的考场]. It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers 5%的应试者是枪手]. //Why have there been so many [ghost writers枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. /The first one is [hirers' ignorance雇主无知]. Besides, [hirers' indolence 雇主懒惰]. The third one is [hirers' obtusity 雇主迟钝]. // To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers枪手] is due to [hirers' low IQ 雇主智商低]. It is high time that

something were done upon it. For one thing, [flagellation 鞭打]. On the other hand, [decapitation斩首]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers 枪手].

On Harmonious Society

Nowadays, harmonious society is becoming a hot issue in China. It’s estimated that every day there are at least 100 newspapers in China talking about it.

Why do we need a harmonious society? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that with a harmonious society, we will have a peaceful (domestic and international) environment to develop our economy （rapidly）. Secondly, strong economy (developed in a harmonious society) gives us great economic support （to develop our national defense, education, and research projects）. Finally, a harmonious society helps to build up happy and harmonious families (, which will eventually lead to the stability of the harmonious society).

To sum up, a harmonious society is not only necessary but also beneficial （to everyone）. It is high time that something were to be done upon it. For one thing, each citizen should do his or her own bit in keeping stable social environment. On the other hand, the government should do its best to settle down people's livelihood problems （in the course of promoting economic development）. All these measures will certainly contribute to a harmonious society. 英文写作必背句型

一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)

~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V

例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。） 例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的...）

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道...） 例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的...）

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 （...的优点是...）

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 （...的原因是...） 例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 （如此...以致于...）

例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。 十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然...） 例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

你的作文要求

On the Increase of Private Owned Cars

1. Present situation on the increase of private owned cars and your own opinions 2. Advantages/Disadvantages of the increase of private owned cars Solutions to solve problems

一． 一致性错误 1、

主谓不一致

主谓不一致错误是改错题的常见错误类型，主要表现为主语名词和谓语动词间隔较长，首尾不能相接等

Perhaps one in every seven deaths in Europe’s crowded cities were caused by the disease. 2、

名词单复数错误

常见的是将抽象名词当作可数名词

The government also affects the kind of works people do. 3、

and等连词前后名词单复数不一致

Few sensitive people have been in contact with their friend and acquaintances. 4、

代词与先行词不一致

代词的主要功能是指代已经出现的名词、词组或意群，因此代词的

出现必须有所指，而且形、数等必须与前面所在指代部分相符合 The new houses, typically in the suburbs, were often small and more or less identical, but it satisfied a deep need.

二． 形容词、副词使用错误 1、

误用形容词修饰形容词、动词

She says efforts are continuing to complete end the disease. 2、

误用副词作表语

I feel comfortably in his presence. 3、

混淆形近副词

The way to deal with one’s salary is a high personal matter.

三、连词使用错误

连词误用虽然属于传统的语法题，但是其用法主要依据上下文语义上的逻辑关系，即对上下问的理解。一般改错中的连接词错误都会使句子的逻辑关系发生变化，或造成句子的语义逻辑混乱。

（1）In 1860, because some of the farm population had moved to the city, yet eighty percent of the American population was still in the country.

(2) When U.S. soldiers came home before World War 2, for example, they dreamed of buying houses and starting families.

四、时态、语态错误

1、 时态错误

时态错误题在四级改错中常出现，考生应掌握与特定时态连用的时间状语：

（1） 与一般现在是连用的时间状语有：every day ,always, usually,

sometimes, often

（2） 与现在完成时连用的时间状语有：recently, lately, since, already,

so far, these days, for a year

（3） 与过去完成时连用的时间状语有：by/up to…,between…and… （4） 与将来完成时连用的时间状语有: by(year),up to 22nd century 2，语态错误

改错中最常见的是被动语态被误用为主动语态。由于汉语表达习惯有时不加“被”字也能表示被动，因而考生对被动语态不敏感。另外，不及物动词不能接宾语，因而也就没有被动语态。如： Even today, people still threatened by asthma.

五、非谓语动词使用错误 1．

不定式与动名词混淆

Jessica has been used to ask her classmates around to enjoy her holiday. 2．

现在分词形式与过去分词形式混淆

Thank you very much for showing me many interested places. 3．

非谓语动词与谓语动词混淆

I want to go to school and reading some books.

六、虚拟语气错误 1．

主句或从句的动词形式未用虚拟语气

If we worked harder last night, we would have finished our job. 2．

采用虚拟语气时出现事态错误等

The girl insisted that she went home first.

七、 逻辑错误 1、

反身代词前后不一致

We should know what they are going to do with oneself 2、

人称代词或物主代词的误用

A man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. 3、

文章前后内容矛盾

Since there remains the slightest possibility of adverse consequence and since it is clear, they should think of ways to deal with it.

综合改错题应对策略

改错也是一项综合测试题型。虽然形式不同，但其测试重点与完形填空所覆盖的测试内容大致相同。在解答改错题时，

应主要从以下几个方面进行观察和判断：

固定搭配――考查动词词组、介词词组、形容词词组、动宾词组等固定搭配的用法；

语法句法――考查单复数、虚拟语态、从句等语法现象；

语义逻辑――考查上下文的语义关系，常利用反义词来混淆视听；

关系连词――考查句子内部或句群之间的逻辑关系，例如因果关系、转折关系、递进或并列关系、总分关系等； 指代关系――考查人称代词、物主代词、反身代词与被指代的名词的对应关系；

词汇用法――与完形填空相比较而言，改错部分考查的对象除名词、动词、形容词和副词等实义词的用法外，也经常考查一些功能词的用法，如介词、连词等。 解题技巧

1)首先，通读全文，把握文章全貌，抓住文章主旨大意；

2)然后，根据上述5类改错题中常见的出题点，按图索骥，对号入座。注意一时拿捏不准的题目可先跳过； 3)最后，再通读一遍全文，做好扫尾工作，解决难题，复查做好的题。 4.实战演练

一、词汇用法错误

1．固定搭配错误：主要是一些常用介词短语、动词短语、形容词短语的误用，另外，一些固定句型中词汇的搭配也容易出错。对付此类错误的方法是大量记忆，熟悉这些固定的搭配。 例1：．．．about an American who had been invited to an Arab meal at one of the countries of the Middle East．（2000年6月第75题） at应改为in，in the country为固定介词短语搭配。

例2：．．．，but such reasons are totally dependent in the

balance of risks and benefits for the patients．（1993年6月第75题）

in应改为on，dependent on为固定的形容词短语搭配。

例3：However，a second person thought that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good

manners．（2000年6月第73题） as应改为than，

more．．．than．．．为固定句型搭配，表示“与其说……不如说……”。

2．单词的混用：这种错误是指误用了某个在形式或意义上与正确的单词相似的单词。

例1：Between sunrise and sunset，streets and highways are a constant source of voice from cars，buses and

trucks．（1995年6月第 73题） 原文讲述噪音污染，所以，此处的voice应改为noise。

例2：Immediately before him was a very flat piece of bread that looked，to him，very much as a napkin．（2000年6月第78题）

此处as应改为like，as与like都可作介词用，表示“像……一样”时，应用like，而as表示“作为……”。 二、篇章理解错误

1．语意的颠倒：这类错误多指在语意表达上用了相反的词，造成上下文逻辑推理上的自相矛盾。做题前如先阅读全文，领会上下文承接关系与语意关系将裨益无穷。

例：If he was present because of sickness， there was often no job for him when he returned．（1994年1月第76题）

显然，将present改为absent才合乎逻辑。

2．指代关系的错误：这类错误主要指由于人称代词、物主代词及指示代词的误用，导致指示不清、逻辑混乱，甚至前后矛盾。细心推敲和全局观念是破解此类错误的杀手锏。 例1：A break in their employment，or a decision to work part time，will slow its raises and promotions．（1996年1月第75题）

从原文看，此处指妇女涨工资、被提升的速度会大大地减缓。所以，its应改为their（妇女的）。

例2：．．．，he finds it pleasing he is influencing people：they are drawn to them．（1995年1月第78题） 从文中看，them应改为him，指人们为他所吸引。

3．连接词与关系词的错误：这类错误主要出现在定语从句与状语从句中，正确地分析句与句之间的逻辑关系，才能选择合适的连接词与关系词。 例1：It appears that we all find company in sound，if we all demand a little quiet from time to time．（1995年6月第80题）

原文讲述噪音污染，从上下文看，前后两句之间应为转折关系，而非条件关系，所以，连词if应改为but或though。

例2：Instead，this other person told us a story，it he said was quite well

known．．．（2000年6月第74题）

后半句显然是一个非限制性定语从句修饰story，所以，应将it改为关系词which。

一般而言，做综合改错题可遵循以下步骤： 速读，把握主旨

看标志行，找词汇错误

找语法错误分析逻辑，推理错误的可能性

重读全文，检查复核文字是否正确、合理。

总之，要想从根本上提高做综合改错题的能力，考生就要打好扎实的英语基础，有丰富的词汇用法、固定搭配及句式结构知识等。同时，在平日英语学习的过程中，要多多阅读，培养英语的语感，提高语篇理解能力，增强自己辨错、纠错的能力。

Error Correction (15 minutes)

Directions: This part consists of a short passage. In this passage，there

are altogether 10 mistakes, one in each numbered line. You may have to change a word, add a word or delete a word. Mark out the mistakes and put the corrections in the blanks provided. If you change a word, cross it out and write the correct word in the corresponding blank. If you add a word, put an insertion mark(∧ ) in the right place and write the missing word in the blank. If you delete a word, cross it out and put a slash( /) in the blank.

Crime has its own cycles, a magazine reported

some years before. Police records that were studied 1.__________

for five years from over 2400 cities and towns show

a surprised link between changes in the season and 2.__________ crime patterns.

The pattern of crime has varied very little over a long period of years. Murder reaches its high

during July and August, as does rape and other violent 3.__________

attacks. Murder, however, is more than seasonal: it is a 4.__________

weekend crime. It is also a night time crime: 62 percent

of members are committed between 6 p.m. and 6 a.m. Unlike the summer high in crimes of bodily harm,

burglary has a different cycle. You are most likely

to being robbed between 6 p.m. and 2 a.m. on a Saturday 5.__________

night in December, January, or February. The most

uncriminal month of all? May--except for one strange statistic. More dog bites are reported in this month

than in an other month of the year. 6.__________

Apparent our intellectual seasonal cycles are 7.________ completely different from our criminal tendencies.

professor Huntington, of the Foundation for the Study of Cycles, made extensive studies to discover the seasons when people read serious books, attend scientific meetings, make the highest scores on examinations,

and to propose the most changes to patents. In all 8._______ instances, he found a spring

peak and an autumn peak

separated by a summer low. On other hand, Professor 9.__________

huntinton's studies indicated that June is the peak

month for suicides and admissions in mental hospitals. 10.__________

June is also a peak month for marriages!

参考答案

1. before → ago

2. surprised → surprising 3. does → do

4. however → moreover 5. being → be 6. an → any

7. apparent → apparently 8. to(1) → /

9. On ∧ other → the 10. in → to

Why are so many people so afraid of failure? Simply because no one tell us how to fail1

so failure becomes a growing experience.2

We forget that failure is a part of the human condition and that every person has the right to failure. Most parents3

work hard in either preventing failure or shielding4.

their children out the knowledge that they have failed.5.

One way is to lower standards. A mother describes her child’s hastily made table as “perfect!” even if6.

it’s clumsy. Another way is to shift blame.

If John fails math, his teacher is unfair or stupid.

The trouble with failure prevention devices are that they7.

lead a child unprepared with life in the real world.8.

The young need to learn that no one can be best at everything, no one can win all the time and that it is impossible to enjoy a game even when you don’t win.9. A child who does not invited to a birthday party,10.

feels terrible, of course. But parents should not offer a quick consolation prize or say, “It doesn’t matter”, because it does.

The youngster should be allowed to experience disappointment and then be helped to master it. 1.【答案】tell改为tells

【解析】本题考查语法规则。句子主语是“no one”,谓语应该使用第三人称单数形式，故应将“tell”改为“tells”。 2.【答案】so后加that

【解析】本句考查语义逻辑及固定搭配。若本句中“so”表示“所以”之意，句意就应为“只因没有人告诉我们怎样失败，因此失败成为经验的累积。”这显然与文意不符。应在“so”之后加“that”,使用“so that”表示目的，句意为“只因没有人告诉我们怎样失败，从而使失败成为经验的累积。” 3.【答案】failure改为fail

【解析】本题考查语法规则及词汇用法。句意为“每个人都有权利失败”。句中“失败”应用动词形式，而“failure”是名词，故应该改为“fail”。

4.【答案】in改为at

【解析】本题考查固定搭配。“努力学”或“努力做”应为“work hard at...”而非“work hard in...”。

5.【答案】out改为from

【解析】本题同样考查固定搭配。动词“shield”的用法与“prevent”相似，“shield sb from...”意为“让某人接触不到，让某人避开”。把“out”改为“from”之后句意通顺。

6.【答案】if改为though

【解析】本题考查词汇用法。“even if”与“even though”均可表示“尽管”，但“even if”用于假设的情况而“even though”用于现实。本句意为“有位母亲把孩子摆得乱七八糟的桌子说成完美。”此句描述的情况是实际发生的事情，作者以此为例说明家长的一些不正确的态度，因此不能使用表示假设的“even if”,应把“if”改为“though”。 7.【答案】are改为is

【解析】本句考查语法规则。需要注意的是本句的主语是“trouble”而非“failureprevention devices”,所以谓语动词应用单数形式。

8.【答案】with改为for

【解析】本题考查语义逻辑与固定搭配。练习前文可知，句意应为“家长对待孩子失败的不正确态度会使得孩子对于真实的世界没有准备”。应使用词组“prepare for”表示“为……作准备”。

9.【答案】impossible改为possible 【解析】本题考查语义逻辑。不难看出作者的观点是即便不能获胜，参与的过程也是有趣且有益的，故应把“impossible”改为“possible”。

10.【答案】does改为is

【解析】本题考查语法规则及语义理解。通过理解整句的意思可以发现，主语“child”与动词“invite”之间应为被动的关系，意为“一个没有被邀请参加生日宴的孩子会觉得难受”，因此应该把“does”改为“is”,用“is invited”构成被动。

学生作文修改：

Good Health

It is very important to have a good health. If we have a good health, we may do something well, but if not, we will be hard to do anything.

There are many ways to keep fit. For example, eating, you have to pay attention to your eating habit, we have three meals one day. You cant miss anyone, and you should eat some nutrient food. And drink water. Don’t eat so much junk food. Because it will gain your weight. Besides, you should do some proper sports, for example, playing basketball, runing and so on. For me, I often go for a walk often eating, it can keep my weight. Everybody. Take actions!

Summary:

1、 每段首句空四个（四个字母）。 2、 可数名词和不可数名词混淆：

have a good health 3、 重复、累赘：It is very

important to have a good health. If we have a good health, 4、 多义词词性混淆：we will be

hard to do anything 5、 句子结构过长，该断句时不断

句：There are many ways to keep fit. For example, eating, you have to pay attention to your eating habit, we have three meals one day. 6、 人称应保持一致

7、 单词拼写：cant, runing, go for

a walk often eating (粗心！！) 8、 连接词误用：Don’t eat so 9、 10、11、12、

much junk food. Because it will gain your weight. 中文式英语：Because it will

gain your weight. 定语从句：For me, I often go

for a walk often eating, it can keep my weight. 句子不连贯：For me, I often go

for a walk often eating, it can keep my weight. Everybody. Take actions! 三段作文写成四段 Good Health

As our society’s development, the life of people become more and more enrich. Therefor, the key of keeping good life is good health. As we known, we can’t do anything well without good helth. So it’s very important to keep fit.

Many people keep fit through doing more exercise. Certainly, that’s good advice. And then we should eat something “Green-Food”. For example, some vegetable, it contains rich vitami. What’s more, we should have healthy psychological when we face to huge compete pressure.

As to me, I often go to walk with my classmates at nightfall. This way is not only practice our body, but also increase our friendship. however, I keep eating three meals on time. Of cause, good sleep especially important.

In a word, we should have good health whatever environment we lived.

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Good Health

As we know, it is important for us to have a good health. First, good health is the base to make our lives happy. Secondly, by good health we can do something we want. you know, having bad health can’t do everything. Above all, we need good health.

There are many ways to keep fit. I think there are two way are the most effective. One is to eat healthy. The other one is to do more sports. Through this ways, we can keep ourselves fit and healthy.

In order to keep good health, I do this things everyday…I have a variety lunch. There are vegetable, meat, rice, fish and some drink…I hope everyone can do something to keep fit. because good healt is realy very important for us.

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