广东省2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练(7)

广东省2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（7）附参考范文

短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右 边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as

66_________

far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful

67_________

if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school

68_________

looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in

69_________

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a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study

better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters,

71_________

photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons

72_________

and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but

73_________

unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a

74_________

little money, it can make our school a nicer place.

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参考答案、、短文改错

66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think 69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which 73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we

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高考英语书面表达常用词汇句型集锦

▲举例：for example，for instance，take?for example，such as，like，and so on，so on and so forth，and so on and on and on， etc.等。 ▲说明：that's to say，in other words，namely，等。 ▲因果： therefore，as a result，thus，because，because of，thanks to?，owing to?，due to ?等

▲递进：then，besides，in addition， furthermore，moreover， what's more等。 ▲顺序：

firstly， secondly，thirdly， finally；

in the first place，in the second place， in the third place， To begin with，then，furthermore，finally； to start with， next， in addition，finally；

first and foremost，besides， last but not least；

most important of all，moreover，finally（以上为时间顺序）

in the front of，in front of ?，before， behind， at the back of， on the right/left（of），to the right /left of?，on the other side of ?，in the center of ?，in the middle of ?，at the beginning of ，

at the end of ?，by the side of ?，on the top of ?，at the foot of ?，on the bottom of， inside，outside， upstairs， downstairs（以上为空间顺序）

▲转折：nevertheless，however，although， though， but，on the country，after all， oppositely等。

▲总结： in short， in a word， in general， generally speaking， finally，at last，as far as I know，in brief， briefly speaking， in the end， as a matter of fact， in reality， in fact， on the whole， in conclusion， on account of this， therefore等。

▲强调： really， indeed，certainly，surely，for sure， above all等。 ▲对比： in the same way，just as，in common with， compared with， on the one hand?，on the other hand，

for one thing? ，for another，similarly等。 ▲平行：and，both?and，as well as，as well，neither?nor?or，either?or，not only?but also

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正确使用时间状语从句的复合句、带宾语从句的复合句、强调句型、带定语从句的复合句、带主语从句的复合句、 条件句、让步或转折的句式等 1. 带时间状语从句的复合句

①It's also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. （2004北京卷）

这类时间状语从句不仅考得频繁，而且连词when， while， as， before， after甚至by the time都考到了，时态上现在时、过去时、过去进行时和过去完成时等都出现了。而且有些年份带时间状语从句的复合句还同时出现多次。因此我们建议广大考生应加强训练这类复合句，在高考中尽量少犯错误，注意时态。 2. 带宾语从句的复合句

①I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent， and how well you've learned Chinese. （NMET2004， I）

②I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III）

③I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future. （2004江苏卷） 3. 带定语从句的复合句 ①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004， I）

②As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. （2004北京卷） 4. 其他

▲强调句型 It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. （NMET1993） ▲带主语从句的复合句

①Here is how you can find us

②On the other side， where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.（NMET1999） ▲so that句型：

①I became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty. （2004广东卷）

②I am so sorry that I won't be able to ?tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III） ③The noise was so loud that I couldn't go on studying. （2004广东卷） ▲让步或转折：

①I don't know about others， but I used to have to work even at weekends doing homework and attending classes as well. （NMET2001）

②Although the city is modern and convenient， there are still some problems， such as air pollution， crowdedness and noise.

▲条件句：

①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004，I）

三、书面表达开头和结尾的写作

1.书面表达的开头俗话说万事开头难。其实，一点也不难。高考英语书面表达的开头句一般已为你写好。你要做的是分段缩进重起第二段。注意千万不要接着已写好的首句。一是不美观，二是不便于阅卷老师细览。那么你的起头句实际上是第二段了。开始句根据要求一

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般可以写的漂亮一点，即要用一些好的套语开始。比如： ①As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.（2004北京卷）

可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意，总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头，这是一大忌。有些开头可以以套语开始，或以俗语开始比较有力，这样就容易被老师看好。档位在开始时就已定得很高了。

2.书面表达的结尾：⑦⑧结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位，通常结尾都要算一个内容要求，所以，写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。好的结尾可以是一段，由一句或几句话组成，能使全文增色。例如：

①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help.（ 2004全国卷I）

②It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.

③What's more， some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program？ （2004福建卷）

④In short， the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.（2004湖北卷）

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中间段落句

1 ---人---tend to have a favorable attitude toward ------

2 Using bicycle contributes greatly to people’s physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。

3 The harder you work, the more progress you make.你越努力，你越进步。

4 Many people seem to overlook the basic fact:许多人似乎忽视了这个基本事实： 5 Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐能使我们放松。 6 On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge 我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。

7 There is no one but longs to.------人们都希望------

8 So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们不能浪费它。

结尾句

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although ——indeed bring us many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn’t be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管----很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。 From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____ .综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论??

It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much

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on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view,I find---- 在总体上很难说??是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于??的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现?

个人观点:

As for me, I’m in favor of the opinion that ———for the following reasons: 就我而言，我同意 观点。

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.

I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______. 完全同意??这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：

But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______. 但是，??和??都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，??，而??。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）??

号召：

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注??这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来??

随着社会的发展，??。因此，迫切需要??。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it%urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

严重影响社会秩序

seriously disturb social order 促进经济和社会发展 to promote economic 对健康有好处

make for good health 对健康有危害

a hazard to health 破坏环境、污染环境

poisoning the environment 环境保护

protect the environment

浪费时间、浪费金钱、浪费精力 a waste of money,time and energy 促进学习

facilitating learning 影响学习

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influnce one's study 提高自身水平 upgrade oneself 反对

disapproval 赞成

in favor of

★ 形容词：

1. 贫穷的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken 2. 富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off 3. 优秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding

4. 积极的，好的：good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous 5. 消极的，不良的：bad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable 6. 明显的：obvious = apparent = evident =manifest 7. 健康的: healthy = robust = sound = wholesome

8. 惊人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous 9. 美丽的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching 10. 有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous =animated 11. 流行的： popular = prevailing = prevalent= pervasive

★ 动词：

1. 提高，加强：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize 2 减轻: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten

3. 解决：solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with 4. 拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate 5. 培养: develop = cultivate = foster = nurture

6. 激发，鼓励：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur 7. 认为： think = assert= hold = claim = argue 8. 完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve 9. 保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold

10. 有害于：destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize

★ 名词：

1. 影响：influence= impact

2. 危险：danger = perils =hazard

3. 污染：pollution = contamination4. 人类：human beings= mankind = human race 5. 老人： old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens 6. 幸福：happiness = cheerfulness = well-being

7. 老师：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers

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8. 教育：education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing 9. 青少年：young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents 10. 优点：advantage = merits = superiority = virtue

11. 责任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability 12. 能力： ability = capacity = power = skill 13. 职业： job = career = employment = profession

14. 娱乐： enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment 15. 孩子： children = offspring = descendant= kid

★ 短语：

1. 充满了：be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with 2. 努力：struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for 3. 从事： embark on = take up = set about = go in for

4. 在当代: in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age 5. 大量的: a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of

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高考英语书面表达指导

英语书面表达经典句型必背

1.英语作文中常用关联词:

并列关系:and,as well as,also...

递进关系:besides,in addition,moreover,what’s more... 

转折关系:but,yet,however,although,otherwise,or,in spite of,despite,instead of,in the end... 

时间顺序:while,when,soon after,before,afterward,finally,first,then,next,as soon as ...

比较、对比:like,unlike,on the contrary,on the other hand...

总结:in a word,in general,in short,above all,after all,generally speaking... 进一步阐述:in other words,that is to say,for example,for instance,such as ... 

因果关系:as a result,so,thus,therefore... 2.常用句式 记事

①At first he didn’t hear anything at all.

②But then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.

③Following that came a man’s voice,saying,“Come out,or I will break in!” ④Several minutes later,he heard someone leave.

⑤Finally he got up,opened the door and looked around. 写人

①She is a girl of twelve years old.

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②She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.

③Being kind and helpful,she always enjoys helping others out.

④In her spare time,she spends much time listening to music and reading novels. ⑤She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes. ⑥There is a boy crying outside. 介绍某地

①Liaoning Province lies in the northeast of China.

②It is rich in many kinds of natural resources,such as coal and petrol. ③It has a population of 23 million.

④It is terribly cold in winter and very hot in summer there.

⑤The people there are friendly and hardworking and their hospitality will never fail to give you a deep impression.

⑥Our school covers 2.5 square miles.It lies in the north of the city.The teaching building stands in the front of the school,on its left is the administrative building,and on its right is a football field.After walking across a small bridge we can see our dining-hall.Four students’ dormitory buildings stand in line with a lot of trees around them and a river running by.

通知用语

①Attention,please!/May I have your attention,please!

②The sports meet to be held tomorrow is canceled due to the bad weather. ③A meeting is to be held in Room 203 at two o’clock tomorrow afternoon. ④Please take a pen and notebook with you and be there on time. ⑤That’s all,thank you! 写信

①Dear Tom,I’m very glad to receive your letter. ②I am fine but very busy recently,learning English.

③I have been strictly following the advice given by you in your last letter and have made some progress so far.

④Please remember me to your parents. ⑤Yours truly,Li Ming. 议论和高级句型

①In my opinion,I prefer traveling by train rather than by plane. ②For one thing,a train ticket is much cheaper than a plane ticket.

③For another,you can enjoy the beautiful views outside the train window. ④Above all,it’s safer traveling on a train than traveling in a plane. ⑤In a word,I will always travel by train if I’m not in a great hurry. 6.I hold the view that we should wear school uniform all day.

7.From this passage we can draw a conclusion that drinking a lot is bad for our health.

8.From this diagram we can infer/it can be inferred that in 2008 the number of mobile phones will be twice as big as that now.

9.There are 95% of the students who think it is not useful to stay up to study at night because the next day they will feel very tired.

10.The fact leads us to believe most of us do get a good result in the NMET this

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year.

11.I am not for/am against/oppose/don’t agree to/object to the idea of building a new highway because of the great cost.

12.What I want to emphasize is the fact that they are only children. 13.Being a Senior three student,he will never let his parents down(使父母失望). 14.Having finished his homework,he went to bed.

15.Running,biking and swimming are popular in summer.

16.It took us only five yuan to buy this pen.This pen just costs five yuan.I only spent five yuan on/(in) buying this pen.I only paid five yuan for this pen.

17.It is said/reported/considered/thought that the more pressure you have,the worse result you will get.

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