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Writing 1

限时20分

假定你是李华，在美国的阿肯色州读书，你想在这个寒假找一份饭店服务员的工作。下面的一则广告引起了你的注意，请你给联系人写一封信，询问相关情况。信中需说明你的问题(广告下方已列出)。

Your questions：

1．Height and age limitation? 2．Working experience? 3．Part-time or full-time? 4．Work days per week? 5．Pay?

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达是一篇求职咨询类文章。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作时应注意勿遗漏要点，保持行文流畅。

标准范文：

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Dear Joseph Smith，

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in a high school in Little Rock. I happened to read your ad for a server and I am interested in it very much. But I still have a few questions about it, so I am writing to ask you something about this job.

Firstly, I am a boy of 17, and I am not sure whether you have some special requirements about height, age and working experience. Secondly, I wonder whether it is a part-time job or a full-time one. Thirdly, how many days will I work per week and how much is the pay?

I am looking forward to your early reply. Thank you and best wishes!

Yours， Li Hua

Writing 2

限时20分

假定你是李华，是红光中学的校学生会主席。最近你校林艳同学的父亲被查出患白血病，需要大笔的治疗费用。由于家庭较贫困，林艳面临辍学。现在请你写一封倡议书，号召全体同学伸出援助之手，帮助林艳同学渡过难关。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：leukemia n．白血病 Dear fellow students，

As we all know, Lin Yan is an excellent student in our school. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达是一篇倡议书，因此要把这位同学的情况表达清楚，用词要真诚感人。另外要注意字数要求，文章内容不能繁琐。可使用不同的副词来表达情感。

标准范文： Dear_fellow_students，

As_we_all_know,_Lin_Yan_is_an_excellent_student_in_our_school. She studies very hard and has been highly thought of by her teachers. Unfortunately, recently her father has been diagnosed with leukemia. As far as I know, it costs too much to recover himself from such a serious disease. What's worse, her family isn't a rich one. If too much money has been spent on a cure, there's no doubt that Lin Yan will be forced to drop out of school.

As chairman of the Student Union, I'll spare no effort to give Lin Yan a hand and donate some money to her. Here I also call on all of us to do the same to her. I just hope that our limited effort will make a difference to her family in need.

Writing 3

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限时20分

Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信。仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad用英语写一封回信，给出分析并提出合理建议。 Dear Brad，

I'm a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied...So I feel lonely sometimes. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours， Li Hua

注意：1.可适当增加细节； 2．词数120～150。 Dear Li Hua，

I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，

Brad

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达要求根据来信写回信，并提出适当的建议，因此考生在写作时应注意这两方面的要求。时态上应以一般现在时为主，要分层次叙述，从而使文章看起来结构清晰。

标准范文： Dear_Li_Hua，

I_feel_greatly_honored_to_be_trusted_with_your_personal_affairs.

I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents. Almost everybody has it or had it when they were in their adolescence. Therefore, it's a common problem shared by many, whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”．

As for my advice for you, first, don't hide your feelings. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents. Second, convince them you have tried your best. It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child. I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard.

Anyway, there is no one who love you more than your parents in the world. Whatever you are, they will always be there for you. Love them, and love can heal everything.

Yours_sincerely，

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Brad

Writing 4

限时20分

假如你叫李华，你将代表你市去英国参加一项文化交流活动。请根据以下要点提示给举办方写一封信：

1．告诉对方你的航班信息(航班号：CNY3080；到达时间：当地时间7月21日上午8：30)，并询问对方可否接机；

2．表达你对活动的期待。 注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam，

This is Li Hua from China._________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

Looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达要求写一封书信，这是全国卷中考查频率最多的一种形式，而且书信的格式及正文的开头和结尾已经给出，书信只是一个载体，重点在于考查考生组织语言材料和发挥的能力。从写作素材看，本文可以分为两段，第一段告知航班信息，并询问对方可否接机；第二段表达自己的期待。写作过程中要注意叙述的条理性和表达的准确性。

标准范文： Dear_Sir/Madam，

This_is_Li_Hua_from_China.As has been scheduled, I'm due to arrive in London at 8：30 a．m. local time on July 21st. My flight number is CNY3080. I wonder if you could get someone to pick me up when I arrive. After all, this being my first visit to England, I can't find my way to the hotel alone, nor do I hope to get lost the moment I arrive. Hope this won't bring too much inconvenience to you.

Actually, I've been waiting anxiously to begin the trip, and have made some preparations. I look on the trip as a good chance for me to get a glimpse of British culture, and hope that you can learn something about Chinese culture in this program.

Looking_forward_to_seeing_you_soon.

Yours_faithfully，

Li_Hua

Writing 5

限时20分

假如你是李华，因为你忙于准备后天的一门重要考试，所以明天不能赴约去你的朋友

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John家共进晚餐。请你用英语写一封致歉信，要点包括：

1．感谢对方的邀请；

2．遗憾地告诉对方你无法赴约并说明理由；

3．祝对方及家人度过一段愉快的时光，并询问是否可另约时间相聚。 注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear John，

Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening._____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达要求写一封致歉信。时态应以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。注意语言的运用，言辞应恳切，且应涵盖所有要点。

标准范文： Dear_John，

Thank_you_for_your_invitation_to_dinner_at_your_home_tomorrow_evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I am fully occupied with an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that you and your family enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don't hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you.

Please allow me to say sorry again.

Yours_sincerely，

Li_Hua

Writing 6

限时20分

假设你是李梅，你的好友Kathy给你发了一封邮件。请你根据下面的邮件内容给Kathy写一封回信。

内容：1.具体描述一次你勇敢面对挑战的经历； 2．给出合理的建议。

注意：词数不少于120。短文的开头及结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。 Dear Li Mei，

I have a problem, and I don't know what to do. Our school is going to hold an English Drama Contest. I am interested in it and I have signed up for it. But now as the contest is drawing near, I feel more and more nervous and anxious and I even

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want to quit. Have you ever had such experiences? If you faced challenges, what would you usually do? I would be very grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours， Kathy

Dear Kathy，

I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

Yours， Li Mei

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达是半开放式写作。写作时，根据所给的材料，需要包含两个方面的内容要点：(1)具体描述一次勇敢面对挑战的经历；(2)给出合理的建议。写作时，应使用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；同时使用第一人称和第二人称。恰当地使用连接过渡词和高级句型，这样可以使行文更加流畅，提高作文的逻辑性和得分档次。

标准范文： Dear_Kathy，

I_feel_greatly_honored_to_be_trusted_with_your_personal_affairs. You are not the single person who has had such an experience. I still remember that Monday afternoon two years ago when I participated in a speech contest. When waiting for my turn, I became more and more nervous and anxious, and I even had the thought of withdrawing from the contest. After a painful struggle, I decided to face up to the challenge. And finally I made it, overcoming my fear and anxiety and showing my confidence on the stage. You can never imagine how delighted I was then. It was through this challenge that I realized the importance of being brave and optimistic. Without this experience, I wouldn't be so strong-minded now.

Every challenge is our opportunity to grow, no matter how difficult it is. So my suggestion is that you should face this challenge bravely because we know that on the other side of a challenge, there is always hope. As long as you have tried your best, you are great, whatever the results.

Yours， Li_Mei

Writing 7

限时20分

生活中我们都需要朋友，我们该结交怎样的朋友，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

A true friend is a source of strength and hope.

—Jonathan Lockwood Huie 内容要求：1.你对该引语的理解；

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2.你的相关经历； 3.恰当的结尾。

注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 3.词数100左右。 This

quotation

from

Jonathan

Lockwood

Huie

tells

us

that

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【写作指导】 本篇写作要求考生根据引语进行写作，所以考生要正确理解该引语的内容，并用一般现在时来表达。在叙述自己的经历时应用一般过去时。在结尾段再总述一下自己的观点，提升主题。

标准范文：

This_quotation_from_Jonathan_Lockwood_Huie_tells_us_that real friends can give us strength and hope when we are in trouble and real friends can benefit from each other. We need such friends who can point out our mistakes directly and who have the same life goals as us. Once I failed again and again in my math and lost interest in it, and it was my best friend who encouraged me not to give up and offered help in time. With his kind and selfish help, I gradually caught up with others.

So I say we need friends but what we most need is a friend that can enrich our life.

Writing 8

限时20分

上课铃响了，你班同学却纷纷走出教室，开始打扫校园。假设你是李华，请根据下面的提示，给某英语报社投稿，介绍你们的这一活动。

1．各班轮流，停课一天打扫卫生，该传统已持续20年； 2．各方意见不一； 3．你的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头已写好，不计入总词数。

At the sound of the bell for class, the students in my class pour out of the classroom. ______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【写作指导】 本题要求考生给报社投稿。从给出的开头看，本文应该以第一人称叙事，然后围绕汉语提示，通过合理的想象与发挥展开论述，因此应该以一般现在时为主。叙述时可以首先描述打扫卫生的情况，然后讲述社会各界的不同观点，最后再表达自己的看法。

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标准范文：

At_the_sound_of_the_bell_for_class,_the_students_in_my_class_pour_out_of_the_classroom. It's our turn to clean the school. For a whole day, we'll have no classes. Instead, we'll set about cleaning our school.

Though the practice has been on for two decades, it has aroused mixed reactions in society. While some think highly of this practice, others say that the time should be devoted to our lessons rather than wasted doing some cleaning.

Believe it or not, such a practice is very popular among us students. For one thing, it has given us a chance to stay away from our learning for a while, which can help us to get refreshed for our studies. Meanwhile, it can make us aware of the significance of labour and the importance of protecting the environment.

Writing 9

限时22分

假如你是高三学生李华，高考即将到来，周围很多同学既有学习上的巨大压力，又有成长中的诸多烦恼。就这些问题，请你给某英文报社写一篇英语短文，给出自己的建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As the college entrance examination is drawing near，__________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【写作指导】 这是一篇半开放性作文，要求考生提出目前存在的问题，给出合理的建议。时态应以一般现在时为主；人称应以第一人称为主。写作时要学会恰当地使用过渡词和复杂的句子结构，文笔要连贯流畅。

标准范文：

As_the_college_entrance_examination_is_drawing_near,_ we senior 3 students feel stressed and annoyed. What should we do?

First, we should take a positive attitude. To live up to the expectations of our teachers and parents, we should keep up a good state of mind. We should regard pressure as a challenge and take the coming examination with a light heart. Second, there exist various problems. We should know complaining is of no help. Finding a proper solution is the only effective way. We can turn to our teachers, parents or friends for help. I think we can be the winner in the end.

To sum up, everyone should keep healthy and optimistic, especially in our senior year.

Writing 10

限时22分

一年后你将成为一名大学生，请以“我的大学生活”为主题写一篇短文。内容应包括对

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理想的大学的描述以及你在大学里的学习和课余活动等。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

One year later, I will be a freshman in an ideal university, _________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达要求考生根据话题进行写作。叙述自己对以后大学生活的展望时，应用将来时。另外根据要求表述要全面，不能遗漏任何方面。

标准范文：

One_year_later,_I_will_be_a_freshman_in_an_ideal_university,_which is larger than my senior high school and I can ride a bicycle to attend classes.

In a sense, it is obvious that knowledge and technology are very important, so it is vitally important for me to learn from the educated professors. I must make full use of every minute to learn so that I can contribute to society in the future.

I will also meet many new friends coming from different cities, who can share their diverse life with me. I will own more free time to do what I want to without much limitation, such as playing football and enjoying music. In short, only in this way will my university life be different and colorful.

书面表达策略探究(七)

议论文模板

1．正反观点式议论文模板

导入：第1段：Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题) Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧) 正文：第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点) Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2～3个赞成的理由) 第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点) Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What's more... In addition...(列出2～3个反对的理由) 结论：第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)

2．“A或者B”类议论文模板

导入：第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages. 正文：第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that.... Another reason is that....(赞同A的原因) 第3段：Of course, B also has advantages to some extent.... (列出1～2个B的优势) 结论：第4段：But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed

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above, we may finally draw the conclusion that....(得出结论)

3．观点论述类议论文模板

导入：第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对) The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下) 正文：第2段：First of all.... Secondly.... Besides....(列出2～3个赞成或反对的理由) 结论：第3段：In conclusion, I believe that.... (照应第1段，构成“总—分—总”结构)

4．“How to”类议论文模板

导入：第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题。正文：第2段： Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all.... Another way to solve the problem is.... Finally....(列出2～3个解决此类问题的办法) 结论：第3段：These are not the best but the only two/three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to....(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

Writing 1

限时20分

[2016·黄冈中学模拟]假如你是李华，你叔叔因为生意上的伙伴来中国参观，需要一个临时英语翻译，想让你帮忙。因此周四的口语课你就不能上了，只好给你的外教Mr. Smith写个便条请假，向他解释原因并请求准假。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Smith，

____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

Yours， Li Hua

【写作指导】 本篇书面表达要求写请假条。文章应涵盖两个要点，即首先要解释原因，为什么要请假，其次请求准假，考生应注意语言的运用，保持语句优美，行文流畅。

标准范文： Dear_Mr._Smith，

I'd like to know if I could ask for leave from your oral English class this Thursday morning.

You always tell us that we should seize as many chances as possible to practice our oral English. Here comes a chance for me. My uncle is doing a business with a man who comes from England. Someone who is good at English is badly needed to help

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him. You know, my oral English is excellent, making me the suitable person to satisfy his need. In addition, I am always longing to communicate with other native speakers in English. What's more, my uncle phoned to ask me to do him a favor. If you can approve of my leave, I will be grateful for your kindness.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours， Li_Hua

Writing 2

限时20分

[2016·全国卷Ⅰ]假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【写作指导】 1.本文为半开放式作文，体裁为书信。人称为第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时。

2．文章要点包括告诉对方你的情况(想去一家外资公司兼职)和要求(帮助修改申请书和个人简历)。

标准范文： Dear Ms Jenkins，

I'm one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. I'm writing to ask for your help. This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. Firstly, I'm wondering if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help.

I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

Writing 3

限时20分

[2016·四川高考]某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：

1．你最喜欢的季节；

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2．你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．题目已为你写好； 3．行文连贯，语篇完整； 4．文中不得透露个人真实信息。

The Season I Like Best

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【写作指导】 1.本文人称主要用第一人称，主体时态为一般现在时。 2．文章要点包括：(1)你最喜欢的季节；(2)喜欢该季节的两条理由。 标准范文：

The Season I Like Best

When it comes to the season I like best, spring will always occur to me in no time.

There are many reasons why I like spring best, the most romantic one of which is that it is comfortable for me to walk in the rain in spring. What's more, after a long cold winter, everything begins to come to life. So whenever there is a chance for me to go to the countryside, where there is beautiful scenery, I will never hesitate to pack my bags and leave for the land.

In a word, I like everything in spring, especially the feelings bathed in the rain and sunshine.

Writing 4

限时20分

[2017·河南开封期末]假如你是李华，是一名高三年级的学生，自从进入高三以来你妈妈不允许你上网，她认为上网不仅浪费时间而且还耽误学习。你不同意她的看法，为此你感到很苦恼。请你用英语写一封信向校英语报的编辑王老师求助。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Wang，

____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________

Yours， Li Hua

【写作指导】 本文属书信体文章，向校英语报的编辑王老师求助，故人称应为第一人称，时态应以一般现在时为主。

标准范文： Dear_Mr._Wang，

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I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in our school. I'm sorry to disturb you, but I have to ask a favor of you in the hope that you will be so kind to help me.

Ever since last month, my mother hasn't allowed me to surf the Internet. In her opinion, it is a waste of time to surf the Internet and it also affects my study. However, I don't agree with her. With the Internet I can easily find the information I need; I can compare notes with my classmates if I meet with problems in my study, which helps me a lot. Also I can share something that worries me with my friends, which reduces my stress. Faced with my mother's rigid attitude, what should I do?

I really need your help!

Yours， Li_Hua

Writing 5

限时20分

[2015·浙江高考]在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一篇100～120个词的短文。要求如下：

1．从以上两种做法中选择一种； 2．以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。

注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。

When I Have a Different Opinion

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【写作指导】 该篇写作要求考生写出自己的做法并加以阐述，属于半开放性作文。写作中应注意：(1)主要用第一人称，第一段表达观点用一般现在时，第二段说明具体事例用一般过去时；(2)观点鲜明，二选一，并说明理由；(3)所写的事例要有说服力。

标准范文：

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

Writing 6

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限时20分

[2016·北京高考]假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：

1．该人物是谁； 2．该人物的主要贡献； 3．该人物对你的影响。 注意：1.词数不少于50；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim，

____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

Yours， Li Hua

【写作指导】 1.本文属书信体文章，向对方介绍自己喜欢的中国历史人物，时态用一般过去时和一般现在时。

2．文章要点包括对自己喜欢的中国历史人物的简介、该人物的主要贡献及该人物对自己的影响。(1)第一段：按照书信的格式礼貌地回应对方；(2)第二段：应对方要求介绍自己喜欢的历史人物及该人物对自己的影响；(3)第三段：结尾，希望给对方提供更多的帮助。

标准范文： Dear_Jim，

It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.

Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!

Yours， Li_Hua

Writing 7

限时22分

[2016·浙江高考]“Planning is good, but doing is better”是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100～120词的短文。要求如下：

1．简述你对这句名言的理解； 2．用一个具体事例加以说明； 3．给出恰当的结尾。

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注意：1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数)；

2．文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better

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【写作指导】 本文属于半开放类文章，文章分三部分，基本时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。(1)第一段表达观点，简述对名言的理解，用一般现在时；(2)第二段说明具体事例用一般过去时；(3)第三段为结束语，注意语言要恰当。

标准范文：

Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

Writing 8

限时20分

[2016·昆明质检]假定你是李华，2月8日到英国旅游，在伦敦希思罗机场(London Heathrow Airport)出口处拾到一个手提箱，你把它交给机场工作人员，他们非常感谢你，同时请你写一份情况说明。

要点如下：1.拾者简明信息； 2．事情经过；

3．物品描述(样式、颜色、大小等)。 注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

I'm Li Hua，______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

Li Hua

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【写作指导】 本文为说明类文章，人称为第一人称，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。文章应包括以上要点，切勿遗漏，可适当发挥以使行文连贯。

标准范文：

I'm_Li_Hua,_a high school student from China. I'm here in Britain for my holidays. At around 8：30, on the morning of February 8th, I found a lost suitcase near the exit of London Heathrow Airport. I waited there for some time, but nobody came for it.

I handed it in to the information center. It is a black suitcase of rectangle shape. Its size is just as big as a school bag. When picked, the suitcase was half open and there were some documents and a camera in it.

I wish the owner could come back soon and get it!

Li_Hua

Writing 9

限时22分

[2017·合肥质检]在国外某知名学习论坛上，一位署名为Jack的中学生认为许多同学不会合理安排时间，于是邀请网友参与讨论。假设你对此话题感兴趣，现请你用英文回帖，分析合理安排时间的重要性，并分享自己在学习生活中安排时间的经验或教训。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2．适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

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【写作指导】 本文为半开放类文章，既要求考生分析合理安排时间的重要性，同时也要分享自己在学习生活中安排时间的经验或教训，故人称应为第一人称，时态应以一般现在时为主。

标准范文： Dear Jack，

It's due to the inappropriate assignment of time that we often find it difficult to fulfill tasks in time, which often leads to low efficiency and failures.

But, as a matter of fact, we can take certain steps to help ourselves out. The following is how I usually arrange my time. Firstly, I list all the jobs that must be done and decide which one requires immediate attention. Secondly, I divide the work into separate parts so it will be easier to see whether each part is being accomplished as desired. Finally, I assign each task a certain amount of time so that it will be carried out systematically.

If we assign our time appropriately, we'll find all the work will be done in time and a sense of accomplishment will replace the anxiety at first.

Writing 10

限时24分

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[2016·江苏高考]请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 In recent years, Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”．

Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers' daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

写作内容：1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2．用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。 写作要求：1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．不必写标题。

评分标准：内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【写作指导】 1.本文为读写作文，以第三人称为主，时态主要为一般现在时。 2．文章要点：用约30个词概括原文，阐述对网络投票的看法，并提供2～3个理由或论据。

标准范文一：

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold

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a positive attitude towards on-line voting.

标准范文二：

Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.

In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don't want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.

In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.

书面表达策略探究(八)

书面表达题的解题步骤与方法

要做好书面表达题，首先必须掌握好解题的基本步骤、方法。其基本方法可归纳成以下几点：

(1)合理地安排好整个考试时间。

高考试题量大、覆盖的知识面广，部分题目难度高，一时不易准确地判断出答案，如不合理地划分好各部分解题的大体时间，往往会出现在时间分配问题上前松后紧的现象。所以解题应根据先易后难、先简后繁的原则，在答第一卷试题时保持一定的速度。留下25～30分钟来完成书面表达。

(2)细心审题。

在动笔写草稿之前，花2～3分钟，把试题细读两遍。这样才能透彻地理解题意，弄清楚试题要求。历届考生中，不看清题意，动笔就写从而犯了不该犯的错误的考生大有人在。

(3)抓住中心，列出要点。

在细读试题，领会了题意，明确了要求之后，下一步应围绕文章中心，把内容要点一一列出。列要点时，要紧扣试题内容要求，不增也不减。与此同时，考虑好可以表达要点的词汇、句型等。

(4)根据试题要求和列出的内容要点，写出初稿。初稿要求内容全面，语言规范。 (5)精心修改，扬长避短，灵活处理。

反复细读初稿，注意从文章形式与内容两个方面去改进。在形式上，要注意标题、格式规范、分段合理，起承转合、层次清楚等；在内容上，一定要用自己最有把握的词、词组、句型去表达，要用英语思维来行文，不能逐字逐句硬译。

(6)认真书写，保持卷面整洁，准确。

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修改好后，在答卷纸上抄上答案。根据以往的阅卷经验，抄写答案时要注意三个问题： 1)注意英语书写中的大小写问题。 2)注意书写的格式与拼写正确性。

①字母书写要工整、正确，如u，v，q，a，h，k等，首先要做到写得工整，让阅卷老师一眼看得出来。如对连写不太熟悉，不能乱连写一气，让老师无法辨认内容的卷子是无法评分的。

②词与词之间要留一个字母的间隔，句子开头一行应比第二行缩进去五个字母的空间，每行书写要对齐，不到万不得已，不断开字母移行。如一定要在一个单词中间移行，要遵守移行规则。

③单词中不能涂去字母，在其上方补上一个字母。如单词拼错，用橡皮擦去该字母，在原位改，或去掉整个单词，在其上方补上一个完整的单词。

3)注意正确地使用标点符号。

(7)反复检查。誊写完毕，应反复检查，力求无误。

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