雅思 G类书信&大作文写作讲义

新东方雅思强化精讲课程 张驰新 G类书信&大作文写作

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Task 1 (G)

Types of Letter 1. Complaint 2. Enquiry 3. Request 4. Apology

5. Acknowledgement 6. Suggestion 7. Job application 8. Recommendation 9. Self-introduction

10. Invitation

Tactics for Task 1 (General Training)

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Dear (name), ——friend/relative

Re: (position)——only for application letter

of your (identity) s, I am writing this letter to express my (emotion) ————informal

Question 1&2——explanation of the whole event and expression of some emotion

Question 3——offer your own solution

Looking forward to your early reply and thanks for your great effort to deal with it.

Yours sincerely (English name)

Emotion Words

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Complaint –说明意图+解释情况+解决方案

例：You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.

Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

1. I am writing to complain about…/that…

2. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something 3. I am most reluctant to complain, but…

4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a complaint about… Examples:

I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I took on August 16, 2001.

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the duty-free shop in your airport on February 14, 2005.

End of a complaint letter

1. I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience.

2. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of…/ within 14 days.

Writing task 1

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.

I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.

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Yours sincerely, Janice Kennedy

考生样卷：

Dear Sir, Dear Madam,

I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request to another accommodation next term.

My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my room-mate always has friends visiting. He also has parties, which usually ends early in the morning, several times a week. Further more he often borrows my things without asking me.

I cannot accept this situation any longer. Especially because I have very important exams next term and I really must study hard. This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me not having to share my room with someone else.

I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours faithfully Dee White

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request alternate accommodation starting next term.

The main problem is that I find it extremely difficult to study in my room because my roommate constantly has friends visiting and throw loud parties which often last until early morning. This does not just happen once or twice a month. He has these parties several times a week, ever since the beginning of the term. In addition, my roommate often borrows my things without asking me. Even after numerous polite requests, there has been no change in my roommate’s behaviour. It has now gotten to the point that we don’t even talk to each other. This has added a lot of undue stress, which has started to take its toll on my studies.

Because I have very important exams next term, I must request a new room, and I would like to have a single room, if that is at all possible. I would be very grateful if you would consider this request at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your help in this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

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Sam Zhang

Writing task 1

You have received your pay for your summer holiday part-time job, but your pay is less than you were promised. Please write a letter to the manager of the unit, clearly stating what work you have done and how long your work took. While explaining your case, put forward your demand and suggestion.

Dear Manager,

I have received the $800 cheque which you pay to me as a part-time software programmer in your company during my latest summer vacation. However, I am at a loss why the amount is $ 100 less than you promised to pay me.

It was contracted that a part-time software programmer’s weekly wage is $ 300. I signed the contract with you and consequently worked in your company for a total of 3 weeks. In the period, I went to and from work on time and to your satisfaction, I completed each task that you assigned me without any errors.

Also, no blame about me was ever heard in any aspect. So my total income should be $ 900, which is $ 100 more than that I gained from you. I firmly insist on your kind explanation of the difference and making it up as soon as possible. Your early reply would be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely

Janet Smith

Enquiry –目的+具体问题+（急切心情+感激+联系方式）

1. I am writing for information about…

2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding… 3. I would be most grateful if you could supply me with the following information.

End of an Enquiry letter

1. Thank you for your consideration

2. I am expecting your early reply.

3. I am looking forward to your immediate response.

4. In addition, if you could let me have details of … I would be more than grateful.

Writing task 1

As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any

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discounts available.

Dear Sir,

I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. This visit will be part of our school’s activities to encourage the students to take part in social surveys. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.

First of all, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the exhibition?

I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it?

I look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely, George Moore

Apology –目的+原因+再次表示歉意 / 补救措施

1. I am writing to apologize for … 2. I am terribly sorry, but…

3. Thank you for …, but I am sorry to say that…

End of an apology letter

1. I hope you can accept my apologies. Please allow me to say sorry again. 2. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.

3. I would be very grateful if you could tell me if there is any way that I can make up for it.

I do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you.

Writing task 1

One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you cannot manage to meet her at the airport on time. Write a letter asking her to wait for you at the airport and tell her how to identify you.

Dear Mary,

I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. Just think: after all these years of writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.

The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest I can get to the

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airport will be about an hour after you land. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge. You should be able to have breakfast there while you wait.

By the way, as we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me: I am medium height and have a small mustache. In addition, I will be carrying a copy of the morning newspaper tucked under my left arm.

Looking forward to out first meeting.

Yours sincerely, Harry

Acknowledgement –目的+原因+再次感谢

1. I am writing to extend/convey my heart-felt thanks/sincere appreciation/gratitude to you

for…

End of a thank-you letter

1. I must thank you again for your generous help / kind assistance. 2. Please accept my gratitude, now and always.

3. My true gratitude is beyond words. Thank you again.

4. If you need any help to …, please let me know. I shall appreciate it very much if you can

give me a chance to return your kindness.

Writing task 1

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks.

Dear John,

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.

The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and the bruises and cuts I suffered will soon be completely better. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.

Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your selfless action that you are an exception. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.

Yours sincerely,

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Ted

Writing task 1

You have just arrived in the city where you are going to spend two years for your master’s degree. You have a lot preparation to do before the new term starts, but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend you have newly acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties. Write a letter to express your thanks.

Dear Mary,

I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me. I was a perfect stranger when arriving at this city. Once I lost myself for not knowing the way in a downtown street, although I stopped to ask some people for direction. As you know this is the first time for me to come up to this big city.

I bought a guidebook, but there were still difficulties in going round the city. The streets and shops puzzled me so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance that has enabled me to go about the city without losing myself. I thank you very much for your kind help. Now I begin to know how to take the proper trolley buses. Yesterday I went downtown with some of my schoolmates to buy some stationery.

Lesson will begin in a few days. I will come over to see you some day next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.

Sincerely yours Julia Noel

Invitation –目的+具体情况（5W）+ 期待回复

1. I am writing to invite you to …

2. I would like to see your presence at …

3. I am sending you this invitation to … and I sincerely hope you can be part of it. 4. I am wondering if you could come to my birthday party in my new house this Saturday

evening.

End of an invitation letter

1. My family and I would feel honored if you could come.

2. We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.

3. Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come? I really hope you can

Writing task 1

You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually, elaborating on the reason why such a party should be held and what activities will be arranged for them.

make it.

RSVP (before April 1)

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Dear Susan,

I will hold a dinner party at my house on June 23, 2000(Saturday) to celebrate my father’s being awarded the Pulitzer Prize for journalism this year. As you are a close friend of our family, my parents and I would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.

The occasion will star at five o’clock in the afternoon, with the showing of the documentary film of the 1999 Kosovo war produced by my father, which secured the prize for him. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around eight o’clock, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.

If you do not have any prior appointment on June 23, my family and I look forward to the pleasure of your company.

Cordially yours, Jessica Louis

RSVP before June 19

Request –目的+解释原因+重申并表达感谢

1. I am writing to request to do something 2. I am writing in the hope that … End of a request letter

1. 2.

By the way, if you think it is possible …, I would like to …. I am sorry for the inconvenience this may cause you. I am looking forward to your reply.

Writing task 1

You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in New Zealand. You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had left your laptop computer in the family. Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality. Describe your computer and where it is and ask the host to send it back to you. You do NOT need to write your own address.

Dear Mr. Scoot,

I’m writing to express my gratitude for your entertainment during my stay in your house. I cannot forget your beautiful wife’s cooking.

However, due to my rashness, I left my laptop computer in the guest room that you had arranged for me, which causes many inconveniences both in my work and my life.

The above mentioned laptop computer is Model IBM 500 with gray appearance, half-new. I

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vaguely remember that I put it on the desk by the fireplace of the guest room. The laptop computer contains all the important data related to my job. I cannot live without it.

I really appreciate if you can find it out and send it to me by EMS as soon as possible. Enclosed with the letter is the return envelope with address, and a cheque of post.

I am looking forward to your kind reply. Sincerely yours

Suggestion–目的+建议（2~3点）

1. 2.

I got to know from … that …. I am writing to give you some advice about it. I am writing in response to … to suggest ways in which …

End of a suggestion letter

1. 2.

I would appreciate … and will be more than happy to expand on any of the comments I have made here.

I wish you a nice stay here.

Writing task 1

You have a friend who is about to enter university, and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in --- history, in which he is very interested, or computer science, which offers better job prospects.

Dear John,

You have asked me for my advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university, and I will try to make some useful suggestions.

You must keep in mind that, above all, your university training is a preparation for your future career. Therefore, your first consideration should be to study a subject which will best equip you to earn a living. There is no doubt that the field of computer science offers far wider job opportunities than history.

Besides, we are now in the age of the high-technology revolution. For the foreseeable future, not only will it be necessary for everyone to be computer-literate, it will also be necessary for them to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn a living! History, I’m afraid, however fascinating it may be, offers few career prospects.

Of course, you don’t have to devote all your time at university to studying computers and nothing else. On the contrary, I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time. That way, you will find that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computer science.

Yours sincerely

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James

Writing task 1

A friend who lives abroad will shortly be visiting your university and has asked you to make arrangements for his stay. Write a letter informing him of what you have done.

Dear Mr. Smith,

I have received your letter dated April 5, 1996 in which you have asked me to make arrangements for your stay here. I am glad to tell you that all relevant things have been arranged as follows:

First of all, I will meet you at the airport when you arrive here. Then I will take you to our university reception where I have booked a room for you. On the second day of your arrival, you will be invited to attend our teaching activity in a small group. In the afternoon, I will take you to visit our students’ design work of architecture. On the third day, I have arranged a lecture at which I hope you could give us an introduction to the teaching features of architecture at Cambridge. In the evening, I will have a small party for you at which you will have more chance to communicate with our student as well as our staff. On the last day I will see you off at the airport.

If there is anything inconvenient for you in this schedule, please let me know as soon as possible.

I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a pleasant journey.

Yours respectfully Robert Kennedy

Application –目的+个人陈述（2~3点）

1. 2.

End of an application letter

1. All these give me enough confidence to say that I am the right person for the position. I

2.

shall appreciate it very much if you could give my application its due attention. I am looking forward to your favorable reply.

I am writing to apply for the position of … you advertised in … on …

I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for …

Writing task 1

You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mr. Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.

Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary.

Dear Mr. Moore,

Re: Waitress position

I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress. Enclosed

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with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous work experience and qualifications.

Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages. In my last waitressing job, I had over a dozen repeat customers each day. And, the fast-paced environment of waiting on tables suits me well, because I thrive on working under pressure. In fact, my former boss was surprised at both my stamina and efficiency in dealing with customers’ orders.

I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant. I can be reached at 463-9234 during the day and 924-6868 after 6 p.m.

Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.

Yours sincerely Martha Scott

Writing task 1

From an advertisement you learn that a company has the position vacant in an engineering department. You are a postgraduate student with a master’s degree from Mechanical Training Program as Programmer Trainee. You have just arrived in the United States and you want to have the job. You’ll enclose your resume with details of academic courses in your letter. You should ask to have an appointment.

Dear Sir or Madam,

From your advertisement on New York Times, March 24, I have learned that you need an engineer in your mechanic department. I have been seeking a position in the engineering department in which I may use my training in computer sciences to solve engineering problems and I would be interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining such a position within your firm.

I received a master’s of science degree in mechanical engineering from Qinhua University in June 1995. Since September 1997 I have been participating, through my university, in Professional Training Program as Programmer Trainee and have gained a great deal of experience in computer applications. Details of the academic courses that I have taken are contained in the enclosed resume.

May I have an appointment for an interview with you to discuss my qualifications in detail? Please write to me at my home or telephone me at (317) 668-5792 any weekday.

Yours sincerely Mary Jones

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Recommendation–目的+解释原因+重申

1. I have learned from your advertisement … that you are looking for …. I am writing to

you to recommend …

2. As…, I earnestly recommend … for the position that you advertised … End of a recommendation letter

1. 2. 3.

Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend … as an ideal candidate for the post. I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring her. I would like to lend my support to…for his…

Before concluding this letter, I would again apply myself to convincing you that…

Writing task 1

One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned form your newspaper advertisement that your center is organizing an international summer camp for overseas teenagers, and you are looking for a bilingual assistant tutor to work with the children. I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Helen Wang, for this post.

Helen used to be my classmate at Beijing Normal University, where she was already a very active organizer and participant in extracurricular activities. With her outstanding leadership skills and cheerful personality, she was elected chairperson of the Student Union several times.

Busy as she was, she passed the college English Test Band Six and completed her major—teenager psychology—with an excellent school record. Upon graduation she was assigned to be a teacher in an international high school in Beijing, where she has been teaching bilingual lessons for five years. What’s more, she loves her job and enjoys working with children. This has won her great popularity among her students.

Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised. I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring her.

Sincerely yours Victor Li

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最新雅思写作题目集锦

普通培训类小作文（书信类）

1. You are going to London for a visit, and you would like to spend two days in visiting a library

as you are doing a research project. Write a letter to the library assistant, asking him/her for help and specifying your requirements.(Request)

2. When you were painting your rented apartment, you accidentally damaged something in one

of the rooms. Write to your landlord, explaining the reason for writing the letter and how the whole thing happened. Finally, you should suggest how you can compensate for the damages.(Apology)

3. You are an international student who studies in a college without sports facilities. Write to the

manager of a sports club nearby, inquiring about what procedures are needed before you can

join the club.(Inquiry)

4. During your travel overseas, you left a handbag on the passenger plane. Write a letter to the

airline company, explaining the situation and describing the handbag. Also, indicate the way they can possibly solve the problem.(Request)

5. You bought a CD player from a local store a few days ago, but now it doesn’t work. Write a

letter to the manufacturer, asking them what the problems are and complaining about the attitude of the shop assistant. Also tell them how they can handle the situation.(Complaint)

6. You are a local student who has moved to a new neighborhood where there is an extremely

large tree just in front of your doorway. Write a letter to the local authority, complaining about

the problems the big tree has brought to your life.(Complaint)

7. Write a letter to invite one of your friends to attend a large celebration at your home. State the

reasons why the celebration is held and all the details about the celebration. Also, ask your friend to do a favor for you.(Invitation)

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8. One of the pen friends overseas is going to visit you. However, for some reason, you cannot

meet him/her as previously arranged. Write about your reason, the place where you want him to wait for you, and how he/she can recognize you.(Apology)

9. You are a college student taking part in a research project. Write a letter to a local museum,

asking them to provide essential materials. Give the details of your project and specify the required materials.(Request)

10. During your business trip to another city, you met an attendant on the train who treated you

with very impolite manners. Write a letter to the railway authority, complaining about the bad attitude and poor service of that attendant.(Complaint)

11. You have just received good news related with your family. Write a letter to one of your

friends, explain the reason for writing. Also, tell him/her the details of the good news and why you are so excited about it.(Explanation)

12. You are an international student who has been arranged by your university to live with a local

family. However, for some reason, you are not satisfied with the accommodation. Write a

letter to your university, explaining about the situation and asking for a rearrangement.(Request)

13. You are organizing a business meeting, and you should write to people from other companies

and tell them the changes of the meeting (time, location, etc.). You can (1) explain why you have to make changes, (2) tell them the changes, and (3) apologize for the changes. (Apology)

14. Someone wrote an article in the newspaper criticizing a new movie. Write a letter to the author

to express your disapproval, explaining why you disagree with his or her opinion.(Explanation)

15. You have a friend who will go on holiday to a town which you know very well. Please write a

letter to him/her including these contents: (1) recommend a place to live (2) what things

he/she can do there (3) the weather conditions there.(Recommendation)

16. You want to ask a friend of yours to visit you for the first time and live at your home for a

short period. Write a letter of invitation, suggesting him to bring essential things and what he

can do during his visit.(Invitation)

17. You are an international student who has rented an apartment on campus. Recently you

damaged something in one of your rooms. Write to the school authorities, explaining how the damage was caused, offering some solution and apologizing for the inconvenience.(Apology)

18. Your company is going to have a working weekend in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel staff

about what you need. You need to introduce yourself, tell them your plan and requirements of

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the accommodation.(Request)

19. You have been working for a company for several years. However, you are dissatisfied and

disappointed with it. Write a letter of resignation, explaining the reason why you want to leave and making some requests or suggestions.(Resignation=Complaint)

20. One of your neighbours wrote you a letter, complaining about the annoying noise you made in

the neighbourhood. Write a letter to him/her in which you should explain the situation, apologize for the noise you made and tell him/her about the action you will take to deal with the problem.(Apology)

21. For some reason, you cannot attend a course you have already paid for. Write a letter to the

professor, indicating the reason and tell him/her what you plan to do.(Request)

22. A company is organizing a trip abroad for language training to a number of limited places.

Please write a letter, expressing that you want to join, why you think you should join, and why

the organizer select you.(Application)

23. You are a college student and feel very unhappy about having to live outside the campus.

Write a letter to the college authorities, introducing yourself, explaining why you are unhappy, asking for on-campus accommodation, and telling them why it is better to live inside the college.(Request)

24. You went to computer shop last week to have your broken computer repaired. However, you

are not satisfied with their service. Write a letter of complaint to their manager, explaining the

situation and the reason why you were unhappy, and telling them what should be done about it.(Complaint)

25. Last weekend, your watch was lost in an English-speaking friend’s home during your visit.

Write a letter to your friend, thanking his/her kindness, describing how you lost it and asking

for his/her help.(Acknowledgement)

26. You are moving to an English-speaking country with your family. Write to an accommodation

agency to seek a house for your family. Please tell them what type of house you are looking

for and some detailed requirements.(Request)

27. You had a long distance flight and found there were some problems on the plane. Also the

crew was not helpful. Write a letter to the airline to describe the situation, tell them what happened during the journey and give some suggestions.(Complaint)

Task 2

文章出题部分最后一句话为写作指令句

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Rubrics: 1) 2) 3) 4)

Discursive:

1) To what extent do you agree (or disagree) 2) How far do you agree (or disagree) 3) What’s your opinion towards the statement?

4) Discuss both opinions/statements (and give your own one) 5) Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Discursive的写法： 1. 单边同意一个观点 2. 单边反驳一个观点

3. 两个观点一起论述，在开始就给出自己支持的观点，支持观点可以多写一点（有倾向性）。 4. 同时论证两个观点，表示中立。（无倾向性） Discursive段落数：

1+2(3)+1=4(5) 单边写法

1+2(A)+1(B)+1=5 双边写法（有侧重点） *A表示你支持的观点 *B表示你不支持的观点 1+1(A)+1(B)+1=4 中立写法

Agree or Disagree

Which opinion do you prefer to? 段落数：

1+2(3)+1=4(5) 单边写法

PRR

Reason : Recom=6:4 or 5:5 PRR段落数

1opening+2 reasons+ 1recom+1ending=5para

A&D 中立文章的写法 1+2(A)+2(D)+1=6 A: Advantage D: Disadvantage

题型判断：

1）Some people think the food has been changed and improved by technological and scientific advances, but others worry that it is harmful to eat this kind of food. Describe both sides and give your opinion.

Discursive 50%

Agree or Disagree 20% PRR(Why + What) 25% A&D 5%

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2）Nowadays, computer is used more and more in education. Do you think in which areas computer is more important and in which areas teachers are more important？

3）Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, and only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4）The best way to decrease the crime rate is to extend the period of sentence for criminals. However, there may be other solutions to alleviate the problem. Compare the sentence-extension with other solutions and state which do you think is the best way for public security

Structure for Task 2 Opening

General situation--topic

Writing objective--specific topic How to solve it initially

people are getting isolated and this opinion?

审题不偏题——观点必须切中细分主题(specific topic) Idea:必须切中文章的Specific Topic Topic: 1st sentence

Specific Topic: 2nd sentence Broad Topic:球

Topic——computer

Specific topic— personal communication, socializing Broad topic—Science and Technology

必须作outline，保障Argument的关键 Arguments三宗罪

1) 2)

Body Material

parallelism 平行架构 redundancy 累赘，冗余 sequence disorder(lack coherency)

From physical to mental

3)

如何做OUTLINE？ solution 3 minutes

1) 2)

brainstorming 1.5min >5 combination 0.5 min

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3) reorganization 0.5min

3)有论据和例子，论据比例略大于例子

CQ的要求：

论证层次安排：（Body层次安排）

English:演绎 China:归纳 1) 2)

Topic Sentence(simple and potent)

Supporting Sentences—Arguments (at least 2)

3) Minor Example(at most 2 sentences) 4) Flow-back Sentence—Explanation of Minor example 15X6=90 Opening 50 Body 180

Ending 30

论证质量——refer to TBT,

VSS

SS—Band 6必须写从句 at least 3 Vocabulary—Band 7 Versatility (Variety) Difficulty X

题型写法 1.

Discursive/Agree or Disagree

The progression of going to university is inevitable and undeniable. What is under controversy//dispute//controversial//thorny is whether students should spend one year working or traveling around before university life. To be frank, I am in high of the possibility that the situation has both merits and demerits.

unavoidable irresistible irreversible irrefutable

unassailable=invulnerable incontrovertible *indispensable

Paraphrase的方法： 1) 改同义词 2) 改词性

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3) 4)

改句型 用典故

There ｃｒｏｐｓ ｕｐ／arises a social dilemma/ambivalence over the issue/hot potato of _________

Ｐａｎｄｏｒａ＇ｓ ｂｏｘ Ｊｕｄａｓ ｋｉｓｓ 2. PRR

1st sentence=discursive 1st sentence 第一句话导入文章的问题(P)

The issue of __(P)__ is inevitable and undeniable.

Simple Version:

过渡句（情感让步）

(Although) diverse contributing factors can be identified, 观点句

I would like to pore over some of the obvious ones and specify the alternatives in the following.

Complicated Version:

Despite the variety/versatility/multifariousness/polypolarity and difficulty/complexity/intricacy of the instruments/factors, I would put forward/ pose/ pore over/ demonstrate/ analyze/ excavate/undercover/specify/ponder over/bring up/moot/mirror/voice/meditate on some of the most important/striking/significant/potent/brief/ superficial/in-depth/penetrating ones (and offer the alternatives afterwards).

3. A&D—impartial discursive neutral impartial

There arises a social dilemma over the issue of ______. For me, I highlight the co-existence of the pros and cons of _______.

1) soft/indirect tone

I am impartial toward _____. *Both opinions are reasonable. can hold water//are water-proof. Neither opinion has loopholes. *reasonable

2) hard/direct tone

I advocate/assert/maintain/affirm/

reiterate/attest/aver/avow/highlight/air the co-existence of and of _______.

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advantages and disadvantages benefits and dangers/drawbacks merits and demerits pros and cons positive and negative strength and weakness virtue and shortcoming blessing and curse shining and dark sides

Achilles’ heel=weakest point

3) simile and metaphor ___ is like a two-sided thing. Each coin has two sides. NO

a double-edged sword x

a concave-and-convex-sided nutshell（仲夏夜之梦） <Bible> Old Testament

an immortal-and-perishing-sided spell a real-and-virtual-sided life

One heart

Each cloud has a silver lining.

Each dog has its day.凡人皆有得意日

Each jade has its freckle. Impeccable is impossible.

Flawless is meaningless.

Every society has a Forrest Gump

Every society does not hate a Johnny Depp

Body

Structural Transition

*Firstly, to begin with, initially, most important of all

What strikes/impresses us most/potently is What’s of top priority is No 1 on the priority list is (PRR) First off, For beginners,

*secondly

On second thoughts 顺接和转折 As a (two-sided thing)

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