2011年高考英语作文

2008年小作文真题Section Ⅲ Writing

Part A

51. Directions：

Do not write the address. （10 points）

Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter

to

1）make an apology, and

2）suggest a solution

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead.

Do not write the address.

命题解析

今年小作文相对简单，预计全国平均分5－6分之间,略高于07年的4.93分。自2005年开考小作文以来，今年第四次考察了书信这一题型，再次印证了考研小作文的重点还是书

信作文,而备忘录、摘要、报告、告示只需简单准备即可。

05年考察辞职信＋道歉信,06年考察请求信,07年考察建议信。今年则再次考察了道歉信,充分表明真题是考研的根本,写作也不例外。只要充分重视真题，,必将受益匪浅。我们

的写作教材中附有教育部公布的历年真题高分作文,历年经典句型均可借鉴。 需要注意的是,根据08年教育部最新大纲，考研小作文无需书写日期,最好使用缩进式,段间不空行，每段首行缩进4－5个字母。称呼需要顶头写,由于题目中出现了人名，写成Dear + 人名即可。正文中务必客气,礼多人不怪。表示感谢的句型不可或缺,感谢房东对你的

热情照顾。同时表示道歉和提出解决方法两点提纲务必写到。

落款写在稿纸中间偏后的位置，Yours sincerely,或Sincerely yours，均可,注意大

小写和逗号。署名要写Li Ming,不能出现自己的真实姓名。

参考范文

Dear Bob,

I am a tenant from China who had been living in your house in Canada for two weeks. I am writing the letter to inform you that I wish to extend my sincere

apology to you.

First and foremost, I take this opportunity show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me during my stay in Canada. In addition, I borrowed one CD of Beethoven''s symphonies from you in Canada. Unfortunately, when I returned home, I found to my surprise that CD in my personal baggage due t

o my carelessness.

To solve the problem, I would like to send this CD to you by Express Mail Service. Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconveniences I h

ave caused. I hope the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

52. Directions：

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）

08大作文真题 Part B：

Directions：

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your ess

ay, you should

1)describe the drawing briefly，

2)explain its intended meaning, and then

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on Answer Sheet 2.

(图略)

文字说明：你一条腿，我一条腿；你我一起，走南闯北。

二、命题解析

(一) 图画形式

不出所料，08年考研大作文再次延续了图画作文的考试传统，自1998年之后，在考研写作历史上第10次考察了图画作文。再次印证了这一规律：图画作文是考研写作的特色。

同时，除02、06两年考察照片之外，今年也是考研历史上第8次考察漫画形式。

(二) 考察主题

图画中两位残疾人扔掉拐杖，互相搀扶，大步流星，奔向远方。文字说明：你一条腿，我一条腿；你我一起，走南闯北。显而易见，图画的主题是合作，一个老掉牙的话题。再次印证了考研写作的重点是人们普遍关注并且具有永恒价值的当代社会话题，并非当年最热门话题。2008年，教育部考试中心出版的最新大纲明确规定：考研写作只要与图画相关、能够自圆其说即可，观点无所谓正确、错误之分。今年写成与主题相关的互相帮助、取得共赢均可，但如果写成个人与组织机构的关系，或联系到残奥会则有些跑题。即使有的同学真的有些跑题，只要语言精彩、结构严谨、没有跑题太远，仍然可以取得基本的分数，不必杞人

忧天。

(三) 真题渊源

2003年，考研写作主题是温室花朵经不起风雨，呼吁独生子女要勇于接受社会的考验。2004年，主题是终点又是新起点，呼吁年轻人不要停止取得进步。2007年，考察缺乏自信的主题，呼吁年轻人面对困难、拥有自信。2008年考察合作主题，其实与多年考题一以贯之，都是考察年轻人修身，提高自身素质，勇于面对困难和挑战的社会话题。只要认真研究历年教育部公布的高分作文，做到滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出，很多相关表达可以轻而易举地进行

借鉴。

(四) 关于模板

05年全国大作文平均分10.88，相对较高。06年平均分10.13，比05年低了0.75分。07年平均分8.18，成为史上得分最低的大作文之一。近三年考研写作得分逐渐降低，充分表明全国各地的考研写作阅卷教师对考生英语写作的真实水平要求越来越高，而且有一种日益严重的反模板化倾向。模板句型可以使用，但切忌太多太滥，否则可能导致低分。阅卷教师不会因为模板句型加分或减分，关键还是通过考生在考场临场发挥的语言评定分数。大家可以换位思考，如果你去批改小学生的中文作文，只需一两眼，就可判定该生的写作水平。

全国的大学英语教师也是这样批改考研作文。

(五)首段写法

提纲第一段已是考研写作中第10次考查图画描述段落。有趣的是，08年的图画与04年相似，同为跑步。加上05年养老足球赛、06年崇拜贝克汉姆、07年缺乏自信的足球赛，近五年图画均与体育运动有关，可谓间接考察了奥运话题。根据最新大纲，最好根据三点提纲写成三段，每点提纲各写一段，各占三分之一的分数。第一段如果没有描述，图画只字未提，扣7分；如果只描述1句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。其实，阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一段，也是最难写的段落，盲目套用模板、空发议论，容易导致低分。阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是首句总体描述图画，点出人物、动作和环境；次句挖掘细节词、串连成句，将图中细节一网打尽；末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表议论，最好不要太多。

(六)二段写法

继2000年之后，本题第二段第9次考察图画的意义阐释段。首句一般可以点出图画主题，然后可以使用因果论证、举例论证、统计论证、正反论证等多种论证手段进行论证，切

忌套话不要太多，最好针对主题现场发挥一些句子。

(七)尾段写法

继1992年之后，提纲第三段第15次考察建议措施段，写成归纳结论亦可，只需总结自己的结论、或提出建议即可。尾句最好包装结尾、展望未来，使用倒装句、强调句、虚拟语

气、名人名言等精彩句型，给阅卷教师留下较好的印象，帮助自己赢得高分。

三、参考范文

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, supporting each other with their powerful hands, two handicapped adolescents are continuing their new journey on the ground. Crutches left behind, they have successfully cracked the hard nut of lameness which might have confused the majority of the disabled. The caption indicates, You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we ca

n travel all around.

Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to attract our attention to the issue of cooperation. According to a survey conducted among a group of people who were in the same college class 10 years ago, those who are ready to give their cooperation to others all become rich or managers of all field, while not a single young man having difficulty in getting along with their classmates becomes an executive or boss. Why those who are excellent in team work tend to be managers or own their own enterprise in their later life？ The answer seems self-evident. On the one hand, if you are competent in profession, but have difficulty in getting along with your colleagues and even your boss, you can hardly survive the corporation. On the other hand, your chances of success are much higher with wide circle of friends who are willing t

o cooperate with you to provide information and resources.

It is my view that, first of all, we can frequently use the drawings to enlighten the juvenile to learn to cooperate successfully with each other. On the other hand, whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and team work are nearer to success. Just as John Adams, the second U.S. president quoted from the ancient Greek Aesop''s Fable

s, United we stand, divided we fall.

09模拟试题

第一篇

51. Directions:

Suppose Wang Ming, one of your friends, is ill. Write a letter of consolation. Your letter should include:

1) your purpose of writing this letter

2) your true feeling and best wishes

You should write about 100 words. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Hong” instead. You don’t need to write the address. (10 points)

Part B

52. Directions:

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should

1) describe the drawing

2) interpret its meaning and

3) give your own comments

You should write about 160 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

Section IIIWriting

答案

Part A

51.Sample Writing

Dear Wang Ming,

I feel awfully sorry indeed that you have been ill for a couple of days. I have learned from your roommate that you are recovering well and that you will go out of hospital within three days. I am really relieved to know this exciting news.

In the following few days I sincerely hope you should take a good rest, have an excellent state of mind, and follow the doctor’s advice strictly. Just take it easy and don’t worry about the study. I shall help you make up the content you have missed while you are in hospital. With the best wishes for your quick and complete recovery.

Yours ever

Li Hong

Part B

52. Sample Writing

As is vividly depicted in the drawing, a mother reminds her daughter to make some preparations for the interview. However, the daughter answers by saying that she is making up for it. It is apparent that she expects to impress the interviewer by her appearances, which is contrary to her mother’s. Simply designed as this drawing seems to be, the phenomenon it subtly indicates is pervasive in our community.

What the painter conveys is that currently folks, especially young girls, pay too much attention to their looks when hunting for jobs. There is an increasing cult for outer beauty but our individuals ignore the pursuit of inner beauty such as ability and knowledge.

A couple of reasons can account for this strange trend. To begin with, interviews have become important means for judging a qualified applicant. Interviewers will be influenced consciously or unconsciously by what interviewee look and wear. In addition, girls in great numbers tend to worship their appearances, convinced that beautiful features and dresses will help them succeed in their life. Some girls even go to have surgical operations to look prettier before graduation. Last but not the least, many beauty competitions give rise to the illusion that beautiful looks can help them become famous, successful and wealthy so easily.

In my personal sense, what counts most for us in life is knowledge and ability. It is essential for us to be clean, neat, and good-mannered in jobhunting. Too heavy make-up will merely produce negative effects on interviews. Too much concern about appearances can solely bring about harmful consequences. Only by constantly improving our capability and enriching our knowledge can we succeed in achieving what we desire.

第二篇

Part A

51. Directions:

You get the information from the newspaper that XX Company is employing an English interpreter. You should write an letter for the job. Your personal information is as follows：

1) Age，30;height，1.80m; health condition，well; hobbies，swimming, singing, dancing.

2) Resume: graduated from Peking University in 1994，worked in Nantong Middle School.

3) Specialty：good at English，especially spoken English，translated many Chinese books into English，understand Japanese.

4)Tel：3654731

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)

Part B

52. Directions:

Study the following charts carefully and write an article. In your article, you should cover the following points:

1. Describe the picture.

2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture.

3. Suggest your counter–measures.

You should write about(160-200)words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

答案

Section Ⅲ Writing

Part A

51. Dear manager,

I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire an English translator. I’m interested in this job very much. I’d like to get this job.

Now I’d like to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Ming. I’m 30 years old and 180 cm

tall. I’m healthy. I like swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time. I graduated from Peking University in 1994. Then, I went to work in Nantong Middle School. In 1996，I began to work in Suzhou Middle School and I have worked there until now.

I work hard and I can get along well with others. I’m good at English and especially my spoken English is very good. I’ve translated many Chinese books into English. I can understand Japanese and I can talk to foreigners in Japanese freely.

If I can be the lucky one to be admitted, I’ll work hard and try to be a good translator.

Your prompt response would be kindly appreciated. I live at No.1 Renmin Road, Suzhou city. My telephone number is 3654731.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

Part B

52. In this picture a man rudely opens a garbage can and violently throws all kinds of waste into it. However, the box is not an ordinary trash can, but is, as a matter of fact, the Earth. It is where survive, breed, and prosper. But as the drawing indicates, Earth does not receive an equal repayment. Quite the contrary, one of the biggest “gifts” humans return to Earth is an unbelievable amount of trash.

The picture purposefully points out a kind of pollution that arouses little public attention, that is, garbage. The past century has witnessed an unprecedented increase in garbage output, most of it technological products that are difficult to be decomposed through natural processes, such as plastics and glass. Furthermore, a recent report released that several major Chinese cities are already surrounded by circles of trash in the suburban areas, polluting air, water, and earth.

Hence, the issue of waste pollution needs to be addressed as one of the priorities that demand social efforts. Only through a holistic system of trash disposal can this problem be fully solved. Moreover, we should advocate a more frugal lifestyle so as to reduce the growing scale of waste pollution.

第三篇

Part A

51. Directions:

You will have an English class next Friday, but you can’t attend it. Write a letter to your English teacher, Mr. Wang, to ask for leave. Tell him:

1) why you ask for leave,

2) what you will do to make up for it.

You should write about 100 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name. Use "Li Ming" instead. (10 points)

审题谋篇

本题要求写一封请假条。请假条是便条的一种形式，包括病假条、事假条、续假条等。写请假条主要把请假原因和请假时间写清楚，请假的理由要讲充分。同时注意内容简单明了，开门见山说明情况，不必赘述。如果有证明请假原因的证据，如医生证明、电报等最好随条

附上。

该请假条应包括：(1)请假原因(2)你的补救措施。

参考范文

Dear Mr. Wang,

I very much regret I was unable to attend your English class next Friday.

As you may know, we senior students have been busy looking for jobs since the beginning of this semester. Luckily, I have got an opportunity to be interviewed by a well-known large public company, which I have longed to enter. Unfortunately, the interview is scheduled for next Friday. I really don’t want to miss this valuable chance, so I have to ask for leave. I know mid-term exam is approaching, and next Friday’s class is important. In order to make up for it, I will ask a classmate to copy your PPT and take notes for me. I will study them carefully and hand in all the homework on time.

I shall be very much obliged if you can approve my application. Sorry for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Part B

52. Directions:

Read the following saying and write an essay in which you should

1) interpret the saying,

2) give your comments onthe saying, and

3) write a title for your essay.

A woman’s career, particularly if it is successful, is often blamed for the break-up of a marriage, but never a man’s.

You should writ 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

参考范文

A self-evident prejudice is made clear by the given saying that a woman’s career, particularly if it is successful, is often blamed for the break-up of a marriage, but never a man’s. Those who support the saying attribute the break-up of a marriage to the successful career of the wife. In their eyes, a successful woman devoted to her career will certainly neglect her duties to her husband, her children and thus results in the break-up of the family. This accusation is unfair and absolutely unacceptable.

The prejudice lies in the fact that it has been branded in our mind that women should be inferior to men and they should be at home to foster children and to support their husband. In fact, women should be entitled the rights to have their own careers. They have the rights to get the satisfaction from work besides that from their families. This accusation ignores the fact that the responsibilities for break-up of a marriage should be taken by both parties instead of one. Cleary, to blame a carrer woman for the break-up of a marriage is groundless.

As a conclusion, what has been traditionally taken for granted in our mind should be replaced by more rational ideas. From now on, it should be prescribed in our mind as law of various nations that everyone is born equal and they should be on equal terms.

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