(浙江专版)2017高考英语二轮复习专题限时集训4概要写作训练2

专题限时集训（四）概要写作

训练2

A

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago, he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchas ing it ，the salesgirl said ，“ Oh, look，the game box has n't even bee n ope ned yet.That might be worth some mon ey. ”

Peter exam ined the box and ，sure eno ugh ，it was completely covered in factory

-sealed plastic.A nd he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.

“ You should put that up for auction（扌白卖）on the Internet , and see what happens，” the salesgirl said.

“Yes，you're right.People like something rare ，” Peter agreed. “I can't imagine there being very many un ope ned boxes of this game still around 40 years later. ”

“ Don't forget to tell me if you sell it ，” the salesgirl smiled.

“ No problem，” Peter said.

After he got home ，Peter went online to s everal auction websites looking for

his game.But he could n't find it.Then he typed in the name of the word game and hit search.The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes

of the game.Over the years ，the game had b een produced using letters in different

sizes and game boards in differe nt colors.He also found some lists of game fans

look ing for various vers ions of the game.Peter emailed some of them ，telli ng them what he had.

Two weeks later ，Peter went back to the shop.

Hello.Do you still remember the un ope ned word game ？

The salesgirl looked at him for a sec ond ，then recognized him and said ，“ Oh, Wow” the salesgirl cried out. "Tha nk you.I n ever expected it.

hi ！

rve got someth ing for you Peter said. “ I sold the g ame and made $1 ，OOO.Tha nk you for your suggesti on. He handed her three $100 bills.

Wow” the salesgirl cried out. "Tha nk you.I n ever expected it.

【写作指导】

通读所给文章可知，本文属于记叙文。首先要点一应表明主人公Peter 一个月前买到了

一款稀有的文字游戏；要点二要交代在售货员的建议下，Peter将此款文字游戏挂到网上拍

卖；要点三讲的是故事的结果：文字游戏卖了 1 000美元，Peter拿出300美元给售货员作

为答谢。由于本篇短文为记叙文，只需按照故事的情节发展进行写作即可。写作时要把握好

要点，全面准确地呈现短文内容，并注意语法结构和词汇的准确性。

【参考范文】

One month ago，Peter bought a word game and found it was made about 40 years

ago and had n't bee n ope ned yet ，which means it was rare and valuable, 要点1） He followed the salesgirl's suggesti on and put it for auct ion on the Intern et.（要点2） The word game was sold at $1，000 and Peter gave the salesgirl $300 in return.（要点3）

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B

（2016 -宁波市镇海中学质检）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Why do pare nts have such a difficult time to com muni cate ope nly and hon estly

with their tee ns? For this , there are many reas ons but most of them stem from not

being able to properly understand their teens.lt is a dangerous gap because parents will have to com muni cate with their tee ns about a wide variety of issues duri ng the most important years of their lives.Thus , parents must know how to communicate openly and hon estly with their tee ns.

Here are a few tips to make communication easier between parents and teenagers.

As parents , you should listen to what children said carefully and pay much

attention to it.Make them feel as if their views really matter , which not only helps your discussions with your teen but brings you closer to him.Meanwhile , try to remember some of the n egative feeli ngs you experie need as a tee nager and apply it to your tee n's situati on. Never make n egative remarks to your tee n about what she

has said or done.Remember how much courage it would have taken for your teen to come

and talk to you about his pers onal issues.So liste n respectfull y.lf your tee n is

unusually angry , it may be time to spend a bit of quality time with your teen to

determine what is wrong and where it is coming from.

It is , therefore , n ecessary for pare nts to strive to keep lines of com muni cati on open at all times with their teens.Try to remember what it was like to be a teenager and how vulnerable（脆弱的）you felt.Then you will be well on your way to helping your tee n com muni cate more ope nly and hon estly.

【写作指导】

本文首先提出问题：很多家长不会和孩子公开、诚实地沟通。接着就该问题提出几点建议：认真倾听孩子的心声；学会联系自己儿时的经历和孩子换位思考；学会尊重地倾听。最

后总结：学会倾听，和孩子好好交流。

【参考范文】

There are various reas ons for a difficult com mun icati on betwee n pare nts and

their teens.（要点1）Here are some tips : Try not to talk down to your teens.lmagine what it would be like to be a teen.Listen respectfully to your teens.Don't ignore your tee ns' feeli ngs.（要点2）As long as you keep lines of com muni cati on ope n and remember what it was like to be a tee nager , you will be well on the way to com muni cat ing with your teens.（要点3）

C

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

During all kinds of holidays ，millions of people will buy gifts for loved

on es.Which is great —except that tons of those people will make the same glari ng mistake ，and buy the wrong gift.What's going on?

Gift buying has become a deceivingly selfish pursuit.We don't actually look for things people want to receive."stead ，and to many of our gifts' detriments ，we tend to look for things that we want to give .I t's a subtle ，but pretty sig ni fica nt problem.

Research has show n that givers tend to value the gifts they buy con siderably

more tha n recipie nts.Gifts are valued roughly 10 to 33 perce nt less by recipie nts

than what givers paid for them ，Joel Waldfogel no ted in Scrooge nomics：WhyYou Should n't Buy Prese nts for the Holidays，his 2009 book on gift -givi ng.

The discrepa ncy seems to come from a simple misplaced belief that thoughtful

prese nts are the best prese nts.They are no t. In fact prese nts.The more thought you put into a prese nt

，they might just be the worst ，the more likely you are to stray

from buying what the pers on you're buying the prese nt for actually wan ts.

In other words , people let their gift - giving egos get in the way of great

prese nts.Especially

whe n the recipie nt is some one they want to show they know really well.Fortunately , the answer to our collective insistenee on guessing what people

want is simple : stop it.

If that's too callous , or impersonal , there's

another helpful rule of thumb .In stead of buying restrictive gifts , like gift cards for specific stores

, buy gifts that allow for flexibility , like gift cards that can be used more broadly （or , better yet , cash ） . People tend to prefer gift cards to actual gifts , and cash to both , Steffel

explained.Steffel's latest research

, which focuses on gift card giving , points to exactly this point

— that versatility is the key to better gift

givi ng. 【写作指导】

通读全文可知，本文是一篇议论文， 按照提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的顺序来组织 文章。文章第一段提出问题：许多人会买错礼物；

第二至四段分析问题：购买礼物者往往只 会考虑自己的感受而忽视接受礼物的人的感受， 考虑得越多则越容易买错礼物； 最后一段提 出解决问题的方法： 礼物的灵活性和多用途性是解决问题的关键。

写作时，学生应当全面呈 现这些要点，确保不遗漏。

【参考范文】

Although many people will buy gifts during holidays ， some of them may buy the wrong gifts.（ 要点 1） They buy what they want to give ， in stead of what the recipie nts requires ；（要点 2） they tend to value the gifts they buy considerably more than

recipients do.（ 要点 3） The thoughtful presents might be the

should stop it.（ 要点 4）Instead of buying restrictive gifts flexible

ones — versatility is the key to better gift giv in g.（

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D

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60词左右的内容概要。 Is there a way to turn back the clock on your age? A new study says yes.Exercise

can make you youn ger.At least it can lower your fitn ess age of how well your body works.

worst presents ，and we ， we are supposed to buy 要点5)

—that is the measure

A study of athletes in the National Senior Games found that their fitness age was more tha n 20 years youn ger tha n their chrono logical age.The games took place in the Midwestern state of Minn esota.

Tony Diam ond took part in the games.Every morning he went to a local park and walked fast for an hour.Then , the retired navy captain ran for an hour.

Two or three times a week , he went to a gym for muscle training.Mr.Diamond won three medals at the 2015 Nati onal Senior Games.

“ My current age is 86 years old , and my fitness age is 44.1 think I have such

a good nu mber because I do a lot of exercise duri ng my life .I have bee n exercis ing since I was a little boy. ”

Helen White is a basketball player.She also teaches the sport to senior groups.A nd she plays pickleball.She won a sliver medal in pickleball at the 2013 Nati onal Senior Games.

"I'm 62 years old and my fitn ess results showed that I was 32 years. ”

Ms White and Mr.Diamond are some of the 5 , 000 Senior Games participants who

took part in the fitn ess age study.

Pamela Peeke was an assistant professor of medicine at the University of Maryland.She worked on the study with Ulrik Wisloff at the Norwegian University of Science and Tech no logy.Mr.Wisloff developed a fitn ess calculator.

An online calculator is available for anyone to use for free.Ms Peeke says there are ben efits from using this test.

The Nati onal Senior Games take place every two years .It is a competiti on for athletes older tha n 50.The games are a variety of sports.

This year the average age of the people competing was 68 , but their average

fitn ess age was 43.

【写作指导】

本文是一篇议论文。议论文通常包括论点、论据和结论，因此写议论文的概要时，最重

要的是要找出主题句（the topic sentences）、支撑句（supporting sentences）和结论句

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