拓展训练16 自然类故事2(解析版)-2022年高考英语一轮复习能力拓

2021年高考英语能力拓展之读后续写16

自然类故事2

1.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

In 2000, when I was around seven years old, my parents, sister, brother, and I were coming back from a picnic. That was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway. There, we saw two adult geese (鹅) and a young goose. The adults were surprised by our return and flew away, but their baby was still too young to fly and couldn’t follow. We are no strangers to the ways of wildlife, so we knew to avoid physical contact with the young goose out of fear that it would stay with us and be lost to its family forever.

Hours passed, and night fell. With it came the coldness. The tiny little thing was walking around our yard and it was clear that the goose needed protection and warmth. At that point, we knew we had to help, аnd wе brоught h?m ?ntо оur bасk роrсh (门廊).

We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to shoo (赶走) the goose to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and they wouldn’t come close enough to take him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. By then, the young goose had clearly decided we were his new family, so we had to give him a name. My sister Joanna called him Peeper, because he would follow us around the yard making a peeping noise, nonstop. We also decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right.

Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months until almost a year passed. Peeper slept in our back porch each night. My dad would clean all the goose droppings daily. He would throw Peeper up into the air so he could fly a loop (圈) around the house, coming back again once the porch was clean.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

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2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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One evening, my dad threw Peeper up in the air as usual, but this time, Peeper just flew off.

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It came as a total shock to me when, in 2019, an aging adult goose made his way back to my family home.

【答案】

One evening, my dad threw Peeper up in the air as usual, but this time, Peeper just flew off. Everyone was very, very sad. It was dark, and we were worried. We looked for him for days, calling his name, but he didn’t come back. We hoped he went off on his natural way. Again, days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months, then years. I missed Peeper. I would call for him every time I saw a group of geese fly by in V-formation. Eighteen years passed, and Peeper became a happy memory for my family.

It came as a total shock to me when, in 2019, an aging adult goose made his way back to my family home. At first, I thought it was just another goose. And yet, something about him seemed strangely familiar to me. The goose came back repeatedly. He did all of the same things Peeper used to, like trying to come in through the front door and sleeping in our back porch. Besides, this goose also responded to the name Peeper. Much to my surprise, my old best friend had returned, 18 years later.

【解析】

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【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章讲述了作者小时候发生的一件难忘的事。

【详解】

通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲述了作者小时候在野餐回家的路上遇到了一只和家人走散的小鹅，作者和家人想让小鹅去寻找它的父母，而小鹅却把作者一家当成了新的家人，最终作者一家人接受了它，并愉快的生活在一起。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一天晚上，我爸爸像往常一样将Peeper扔到空中，但这次Peeper飞走了。续写部分应该描写在Peeper飞走后，作者一家人的心情如何。续写中可以按照时间线进行描写，即Peeper刚飞走时我们的心情如何；Peeper飞走几天、几周、几个月后我们的心情如何；Peeper飞走几年后我们的心情如何。第二段开头是：在2019年，当一只年老的成年鹅回到我家时，我完全震惊了。续写部分应该描写这只成年鹅回到我家后的行为，并通过把它的行为和Peeper进行对比，最终确定它就是我们的老朋友Peeper，并表达作者和Peeper重逢的感觉。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇、高级短语和高级句子。如：memory, strangely, repeatedly,

respond等高级词汇；look for, turn into, come back, to one’s surprise等高级短语。文章恰当的使用了宾语从句，如We hoped he went off on his natural way.，使文章表达更加地道。

2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

I sat at the breakfast table with my four-year-old son, Matthew, trying to ignore the ache in my stomach. “Mama, want to play?” “Not today, baby,” I shook my head. These days I could barely get out of bed. I was still recovering from a surgery. I hoped for strength and happiness. But

the future seemed so hopeless.

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Suddenly, Matthew jumped up from his spot on the kitchen floor. “Bird!” he shouted, rushing to our courtyard. Sure enough, there was a white dove seated in a rubber tree. It sat there for a few moments, and then flew away. Strange, I'd never seen one in our neighborhood before.

When I dragged myself to the kitchen the next morning, the dove was back. This time with a mate carrying twigs. “Look, Matthew,” I said, pointing to the tree. “They ’re going to make a nest.” The doves flew in and out of the courtyard all week, building on top of the rubber tree.

Matthew could hardly contain his excitement. Every morning, he'd run into the kitchen and take his spot by the sliding glass door, talking to the birds while they worked. His enthusiasm was influential. As much as I was grieving, I couldn't help but look forward to the doves' visits too.

Then it all went wrong. The courtyard was a safe enough spot for a nest, but the rubber tree's broad, thin leaves were far from stable. One night, a strong wind blew, throwing the doves' nest to the ground. I heard the twigs break apart.

I surveyed the damage. Nothing good ever lasts. I wouldn't blame the doves if they never came back. But they returned. And they paid no attention to the pile of sticks that had once been their nest.They started again from scratch. Again, though, the wind destroyed all their hard work. The next day, and the next, they renewed their efforts, as if nothing had happened.

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I knew I had to do something.

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“It works! The birds are back!” Matthew announced.

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【答案】

I knew I had to do something. The white dove and its mate had given me something to look

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forward to, even in my darkest days. Now I was going to help them in return. I woke up the following morning with a plan. There was only an hour before the doves usually made their visits.

I hammered a shelf into the wall next to the rubber tree and covered it with leaves to make it look like a tree. Then Matthew and I stood by the sliding glass door, waiting and hoping.

“It works! The birds are back !” Matthew announced. There they were—sitting on top of the shelf, adding some twigs to the new nest despite damage from the strong wind. Three weeks later, we watched three chicks break free from their shells. “Chirp, chirp!” Matthew sang. I held him close and kissed him, feeling more positive and hopeful than I had in months. I realized all around me, life went on. And it was filled with wonders and surprises that I couldn't even imagine.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

【详解】

通过阅读所给文章可知，作者四岁的儿子Matthew每天都看到白鸽来到自己家的院子里，每天早上，他都会跑进厨房，站在滑动玻璃门旁边，在鸟儿搭巢时和它们说话。一天夜里，刮起了一阵大风，把鸽巢掀到地上。作者以为鸽子再也不回来，但他们又回来了。它们对那堆曾经是它们巢穴的树枝毫不在意。他们又从零开始。然而，风又一次摧毁了他们所有的辛勤工作。第二天，接着第二天，他们又继续努力，仿佛什么也没发生过。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我知道我必须做点什么。所以后文应该是讲述鸽子给了作者一些值得期待的东西，于是作者在橡胶树旁边的墙上敲了一个架子，并用树叶覆盖，使它看起来像一棵树。然后和Matthew站在滑动玻璃门旁边等待着，希望着。第二段开头是：“起作用了！鸟儿回来了!” Matthew宣布。本段应该写鸽子们回来后的情况，三个星期后，三只小鸽子破壳而出。作者和儿子都感到几个月来从未有过的乐观和希望。作者也意识到，在周围，生活在继续，充满了无法想象的奇迹和惊喜。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】

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本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：look forward to, in return, cover with 等高级词汇；There was only an hour before the doves usually made their visits.运用了时间状语从句；And it was filled with wonders and surprises that I couldn't even imagine.运用了定语从句等高级句式。

3.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

The day of the balloon festival, I felt as light as a hot-air balloon. This year I wouldn’t just be

watching. I’d be riding in Mr. J’s truck, following the flight of the balloon and meeting it when it came down.

It was a perfect day. Dad and I drove down the road, circled along the lake and turned into the field that was being used as a parking area. Dad pointed to the lake. “That’s where the balloon festival will take place.” he said. We came to a stop and I got out of the car. And then I saw it, a white bird with black stripes, brown head, and skinny legs. It screamed and beat its wings in the dirt in front of the cars that were driving downhills. Its wings looked broken. Suddenly it cried bitterly and flew off.

“Dad,” I called, but my father was watching the balloons.

“It’s a killdeer(北美喧鹆).” A silver-haired old woman said to me, adding that there must have been a nest here somewhere. “In the parking area?” I asked. She nodded firmly. “It was a nesting place before it became a parking area. No one told the killdeer about the balloon festival!”

“Jack!” Dad called “Isn’t it time you went down to meet Mr. J?”

“I have got to go.” I said to the woman but she pointed with her walking stick. There, on the ground was a perfect nest of eggs, looking like pebbles(卵石). They were almost in the path of cars, trucks and motorbikes.

Suddenly, the parent bird was back to its nest and its wings both twisted again. “Jack!” Dad called again. “The balloons are ready to fly.”

“Dad! I am…” A truck roared over the hill. Brakes(刹车) screamed and dust flew. “What’s

the matter?” asked Dad angrily from the truck.

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注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；

2.至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

“Dad, I am not going,” I said.

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Soon a number of vehicles surrounded the nest.

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【答案】

Paragraph 1:

“Dad, I’m not going.” I said. “I have to stay here so the cars won’t roll over the nest. With so many things to deal with, my dad drove away to tell Mr. J. Then the woman reminded me that it was time to come up with a plan to protect the nest. Just then several cars pulled over. That was when a plan took sudden, perfect shape in my head. I ran over to turn to the car drivers for help. It was not long before they understood everything. More drivers joined in. They parked the cars in the way to protect the nest.

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Soon a ring of vehicles surrounded the nest. Nothing or nobody is allowed to get close to the eggs. By noon the festival was over and people began to leave. When Dad came to pick me up, he was astonished to see the killdeer and its nest of eggs safe and sound. Having failed to take part in the balloon festival, I felt no regret. Hungry and tired as I was, I was overjoyed when thinking of the efforts I had made to protect the eggs

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者和父亲一起来参加热气球节，看到了一只北美喧鹆，一位满头银发的老妇人对我说，并补充说这里的某个地方一定有一个巢穴，老人说，鸟巢在停车场，几乎挡住了小汽车、卡车和摩托车的去路。

【详解】

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸，我不去了。短文要接着续写是如何保护鸟巢的。第二段的开头：很快一圈车辆包围了巢穴。短文接着续写成功地保护了鸟巢，父亲来接作者时的态度以及作者时如何看待没能参加热气球节、保护鸟的意义以及自己的感受。

续写时要求使用文章中的关键词，所以这就增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉文章的主要大意以及关键词，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：deal with; come up with; astonished等高级词汇；as引导的让步状语从句的倒装Hungry and tired as I was, I was overjoyed when thinking of the efforts I had made to protect the eggs 展示了句式的多样性；而非谓语作状语Having failed to take part in the balloon festival, I felt no regret.更是写得好；通过这些高级句型，让这篇文章增色不少。

4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写

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的词数应为150左右。

On March 3, Eric Johnson was asleep when the family’s six-year-old Australian shepherd, Bella, woke him up. Bella was acting unpredictably, giving Johnson the sense that “something just didn’t feel right.” Bella sensed danger, and alerted the family to the tornado that soon destroyed their home.

When Johnson woke up, he turned on the TV and found out that a tornado was headed toward their town of Cookeville, Tennessee. He quickly grabbed his wife and their three children and put them in the bathtub. Nearly 45 minutes later, around 2:00 am, the tornado hit and destroyed the house. Johnson was thrown into the backyard.

Johnson said, “Bella was hiding under our bed when the tornado hit our house. She was thrown into our yard and survived and was missing after that. It was hard for us knowing she had survived but we couldn’t find her. She was the piece of our family that was missing.” The furious 175 mph twister destroyed everything in its path. The Johnsons would not have survived if not for Bella.

Johnson suffered a head injury and his wife had broken ribs, but they soon set about searching for their beloved heroic dog. They left pieces of clothing around the destroyed neighborhood, hoping that Bella would recognize the scent and find her way back home. Church friend and dog tracker Sarah Romeyn also joined in.

She borrowed cameras from a local animal rescue group and set them up in areas where people reported seeing her. She also worked with other dog trackers and even sought tips from residents with the help of the Putnam County Police Department.

When leads dried up, the Johnsons and Romeyn pressed on. “I was still finding time searching in parking lots, but it was tough. Because nobody had found a body, in rescue you can’t give up until you know you don’t have a positive outcome. And I hadn’t given up,” Romeyn said.

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In time, they found a glimmer of hope when Romeyn got a call from friend Karen Ritacco,

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who said that Bella was behind her shop.

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Romeyn was happy to play a part in the rescue, but also credits the community for their help.

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In time, they found a glimmer of hope when Romeyn got a call from friend Karen Ritacco, who said that Bella was behind her shop. Romeyn enlisted the help of her husband, their pastor, and Eric Johnson to get Bella. When the team had Bella trapped in the enclosed space, the poor dog began to panic, until Johnson called out to her. Romeyn said, “It was heartbreaking. You could see her stop, and you could see the wheels turning. There was something so familiar.” Then something clicked, and she recognized Johnson. Bella was home.

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Romeyn was happy to play a part in the rescue, but also credits the community for their help. “I feel like our whole community had a part in bringing Bella back. I give it all to God. So many things had to come together to make this happen.” Now that Bella is back, the Johnsons are focusing on moving forward and plan to rebuild their property. The tornado may have destroyed all of their possessions, but Johnson is just grateful that their family is together again.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容。

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【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求续写两段内容：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文：要求续写约翰逊夫妇在龙卷风过后是如何在好心人的帮助下找到爱犬贝拉的以及他们对众人帮忙的感谢。第一段：终于，当Romeyn接到朋友Karen Ritacco的电话，说贝拉在她的店铺后面，他们看到了一线希望。此处接着续写，贝拉当时被关在屋子里的状态，约翰逊到达时，贝拉的反应，最终认出了是自己的主人。第二段：Romeyn很高兴能参与救援，但也感谢社区的帮助。此处接着续写整个社区的帮助才使得贝拉被找到。现在贝拉回来了，约翰逊一家正专注于向前看，计划重建他们的家，约翰逊很高兴他们的家人可以再次团聚。故事的时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；enlist（支持、赞助），panic（惊慌），heartbreaking （令人心疼的），familiar（熟悉的），possession（财产），recognize （认出），enclosed （围住的），destroy（毁坏），rebuild（重建），property（财产）及grateful（感激的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

【点睛】

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be trapped in（被困在），call out to (召唤)，plan to do（计划做），move forward （前行），play a part in（参与），bring back（带回来），focus on（集中精力于）以及begin to do（开始做），而且还使用了宾语从句“The tornado may have destroyed all of their possessions, but Johnson is just grateful that their family is together again.”，时间状语从句“When the team had Bella trapped in the enclosed space, the poor dog began to panic, until Johnson called out to her.”，原因状语从句“Now that Bella is back, the Johnsons are focusing on moving forward and plan to rebuild their property.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

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Everyone in our neighborhood knew who Ugly was. Ugly was a wild cat. Ugly loved three things in this world: fighting, eating garbage, and, shall we say, love. All these things had their effect on Ugly. He had only one eye and where the other should have been was a hole. He was also missing his ear on the same side, his left foot broke at one time, making him look like he was always turning the comer. Every time some one saw Ugly there was the same reaction. “That's one UGL Y cat!”

All the children were warned not to touch him, the adults threw rocks at him, shouted at him, watered him when he tried to come in their homes, or shut his paws in the door when he would not leave. Ugly always had the same reaction. If you watered him, he would stand there, getting wet all over until you gave up and quit. If you threw things at him, he would lie down crying for forgive ness. Whenever he saw children, he would come running, meowing, and bump his head against their hands, begging for their love. If you ever picked him up he would immediately suck (吮吸) on your shirt, hat, whatever he could find.

One day Ugly shared his love with the neighbor's dogs. They did not respond kindly, and Ugly was badly injured. From my apartment I could hear his screams, and I tried to rush to his aid. By the time I got to where he was lying, it was obvious Ugly's life was almost at an end. Ugly lay in a wet circle. He was bleeding badly. As I picked him up in my arms and tried to carry him home, I could hear him crying and could feel him struggling. It must be hurting terribly, I thought.

Then I felt a familiar sucking on my ear. Ugly, in so much pain, suffering and obviously dying, was trying to suck my ear. I pulled him closer to me, and he bumped my hand with his head, then he turned his one golden eye towards me. Even in the greatest pain, that ugly cat was asking only for a little love.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上(含5个)短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

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4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标岀你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

At that moment I thought Ugly was the most beautiful, loving creature I have ever seen.

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Ugly died in my arms before I could get inside, but I sat and held him for a long time afterwards.

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【答案】

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At that moment I thought Ugly was the most beautiful, loving creature I have ever seen. Never once did he try to bite or scratch me, or even try to get away from me, or struggle in any way. Ugly was kind to everyone he met but now he was dying in my arms. Ugly just looked up at me completely trusting me to relieve his pain.

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Ugly died in my arms before I could get inside, but I sat and held him for a long time afterwards. I was thinking about how an ugly-looking cat could so change my opinion about what it means to have true pureness of spirit, to love so totally and truly. Ugly taught me more about giving and love than a thousand books, lectures, or talk show specials ever could, and for that I will always be thankful. He was ugly outside but nice inside. It was time for me to learn to love truly and deeply, to give my total to those I cared for. Many people want to be richer, more

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successful, well liked, beautiful, but for me, I will always try to be Ugly.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。

【详解】

通过阅读所给文章可知，作者讲述了他住的地方里有一只叫Ugly的流浪猫，Ugly虽然满身伤痕、丑陋肮脏，但它有爱，有一天作者发现Ugly受了重伤，作者去帮忙想把它带回家，Ugly想吮吸作者的耳朵请求一点爱。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：在那一刻，我认为Ugly是我见过的最美丽、最可爱的动物。本段应该写为什么Ugly是最美丽、最可爱的动物，可从Ugly对作者和其他人有爱的行为上体现。第二段开头是：Ugly还没来得及进去就死在我怀里了，但后来我坐了好长时间抱着它。本段应该写Ugly的死亡带给作者的反思，作者明白真正纯洁的灵魂是内心善良且真诚地去爱，作者会努力变得和Ugly一样。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：try to do sth.，think about，care for 等高级词汇；如限制性定语从句everyone he met，everyone先行词，后接定语从句，省略关系代词that。

6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写的词数应为150左右。

Last Sunday afternoon, Sandra and I were eager to meet up with a man on Detroit’s east side to help him get ready for a job interview this week. But on the way, we spotted a dog lying near the road next to his owner. We thought he’d been hit by a car. My friend, Sandra Abrahamian and I,

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had assisted animal rescue groups before and we thought there might be something we could do, so we quickly pulled over to help.

His owner, a woman told us the dog’s name is Bosco, and she was walking him over a mile in the heat to her new home. She said Bosco was an outside dog and no one would give him a ride to her new place. That’s when she and a friend decided to walk the entire way. He was going from a life on a chain in one backyard to another. She said Bosco was having trouble breathing along the way, but they thought he could make it. But just a block away from their destination, Bosco fell down. We could tell he was suffering from heatstroke(中暑). She told us he had thrown up and could no longer stand. Bosco was out of breath quickly, his drool(口水) was also thick. Bosco’s owner said she wanted to give him away because she didn’t have time for him. She said he would never be allowed into her new “home” because her children have allergies(过敏症) and she worried he would dirty the carpet.

I made a call to Kristina Rinaldi of Detroit Dog Rescue to ask if they could help Bosco because it was clear that he was going to die without emergency care. To our happiness, Rinaldi said they could help. At once she told the people at Oakland Veterinary Referral Services that a dog which needed critical care was being rushed in and they must be ready to try their best to save him.

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Sandra drove while I stayed in the back seat trying to comfort Bosco.

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So Bosco is now being called Roscoe, whose critical care and recovery were estimated to be

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several thousand dollars.

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【答案】

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Sandra drove while I stayed in the back seat trying to comfort Bosco. I thought we lost him a couple of times when he was seemingly out of breath and his eyes seemed to close. By the time we arrived, Bosco was wheeled into the animal care center to receive emergency care. Bosco was put on oxygen and was taken good care of by staff there and we waited anxiously for the dog to get out of danger. Rinaldi said another dog in Detroit Dog Rescue had already been named Bosco, and she wanted this new member to have a new name for his new life.

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So Bosco is now being called Roscoe, whose critical care and recovery were estimated to be several thousand dollars. It would be difficult for Roscoe’s new home to cover the costs as a non-profit organization. Thankfully, many people who knew Roscoe’s story on Detroit Dog Rescue’s Facebook page donated money to his care. With the help of supporters, Detroit Dog Rescue managed to make it. Once Roscoe was in a stable state, Sandra and I returned to our original mission, knowing we had already been given the chance to help one desperate soul.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。所给文章讲述了救助小狗Bosco以及给他找到新家的经过。作者

和朋友Sandra在路上遇到了一只因为中暑而生命垂危的狗。狗的主人说因为种种原因，她

想将这只狗送出去。作者打电话给在Detroit Dog Rescue工作的Kristina Rinaldi，向她说明

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了情况后，Rinaldi 答应帮忙。

【详解】

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Sandra开着车而我待在后座试图安抚Bosco，再结合Paragraph 2开头的内容提示可知，接下来的内容应该是去救援中心途中Bosco的情况，以及到达救援中心后Bosco的情况（接受治疗，救援中心的工作人员给了Bosco一个新名字Roscoe等）。无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。

第二段开头是：现在Bosco被称为Roscoe，它的急救护理和恢复预计要花费几千美元。这暗示接下来的内容可能会交代这笔钱的来历（如有好心人捐款等），还可以进一步延伸内容，交代一下Roscoe的恢复情况以及作者的感想。

续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。根据所给内容和段落开头语续写，注意连贯，使之构成一篇完整的短文。注意按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文内容符合要求，语句严谨，层次分明，同时文中使用高级句子。I thought we lost him a couple of times when he was seemingly out of breath and his eyes seemed to close.句中使用when引导的定语从句；By the time we arrived, Bosco was wheeled into the animal care center to receive emergency care.句中使用By the time引导时间状语从句；Thankfully, many people who knew Roscoe’s story on Detroit Dog Rescue’s Facebook page donated money to his care.句中使用who引导定语从句。

7.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn’t see some rain soon we would lose everything. It was on this day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the best miracle I have ever seen in my life.

I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn’t walking with his usual steps. He

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was obviously walking with great effort... trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again, toward the house. I went back to make sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that slow purposeful long step toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.

He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill(溅出) the water he held in them. I stepped close as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I came closer, I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer stood in front of him. Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck (雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck neither threatened him nor even moved as Billy knelt down. And I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion, lifting its head with great effort to lap (舔) up the water cupped in my boy’s hands.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语；

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When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him

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This time I joined him, with a small pot of water from the kitchen

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【答案】

When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him back to the tap. Billy turned it on and began to cup both hands. He knelt down, letting the drip slowly fill up his “cup”. And now I knew what was going on. Obviously, was afraid of being scolded for wasting water, so he avoided asking me for help. When he stood up and turned back, I walked toward him. His eyes were filled with tears. “Mom, I’m not wasting.”

This time I joined him, with a small pot of water from the kitchen. I let him tend to the baby deer alone while I just helped fetch the water. As the tears that rolled down my face began to hit the ground, they were suddenly joined by other drops... and more drops... and more. I looked up at the sky. It was as if God, himself, was weeping with pride. I can’t believe it was raining!

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇续写。

【详解】

1.第一段给出的首句是When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“我跟着他回到水龙头旁。比利打开电视，双手捧起杯子。”入手扩展开去，——无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。

2.第二段所给首句This time I joined him, with a small pot of water from the kitchen这一句呼应

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前文，紧接着可以从“我让他一个人照顾小鹿，而我只是帮忙打水。”入手续写。

【点睛】

这篇续写段落衔接紧密，紧扣主题，且应使用5个以上短文中标有划线的关键词语，符合续写要求。同时文中使用高级句子。He knelt down, letting the drip slowly fill up his “cup”.现在分词作伴随状语；now I knew what was going on. Obviously, was afraid of being scolded for wasting water,句中what引导宾语从句；It was as if God, himself, was weeping with pride.句中as if 引导表语从句。

8.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Mama and I spend mornings cleaning up the dirt that blows into our house. Mama says all the dust is due to the drought, not only here in the Oklahoma panhandle(狭长地带) but all over the Great Plains.

The dirt sifts into everything. It covers our clothes. We have to wash the dishes before each meal. It also slips into the automobiles horn (喇叭). Although Papa has fixed it, he fears the dust from the road will ruin the motor, So, we have to walk to school.

On the way to school, my sister, Faye, and I wear kerchiefs over our mouths so we don' t breathe in the dirt On days when the air is so bad that they close the school, we stay home and help Mama put sheets over the windows. But the dirt always finds a way in .

Last Sunday, there was no dirt in the air, only bright spring sunshine and a clear blue sky. After church, Papa headed out to the field to check on the cattle while Mama started dinner. Faye and I played in the yard. The temperature suddenly dropped-it felt good. The heat had been building since dawn.

Then Mama shouted from the house, “Iris, you and Faye get inside. Be quick!”

I looked to the west and saw a huge black cloud of dust, like thick smoke pouring out from a chimney. All the birds flew away. “Faye, go with Mama!” I shouted, “I’ll warn Papa.”

Faye raced, toward the house. The storm hit so fast, I barely saw her climb the porch steps.

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Fine sand heaved against my face and in an instant the day turned into night. I stumbled over our bicycles left carelessly in the yard. I screamed for Papa, hoping my voice would lead him back.

The dirt and sand stung my skin like a thousand bees. I needed to get to shelter. Covering my face with one hand, I felt my way toward the automobile and I opened the door. Dirt flew in with me as I pulled the door closed. Papa was still out there! I needed to help him find the automobile. Worried as I was, I managed to calm myself down.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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I was figuring out what to do when I caught sight of the switch for the front lights and the horn.

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Suddenly Papa’s face appeared at the window.

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【答案】

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