上海大学研究生英语写作2复习资料及考试题型

一、 商务信函

（1）头：地址+日期（Room=>Building=>Lane=>Road=>City=>State）

College of Communication and Information Engineering 分支 Shanghai University 99 Shangda Road Shanghai, 200444 China

January 26st, 2015

组织 街道、门牌号 城市和邮编 国家 日期 名字/职位 组织 街道、门牌号 城市和邮编 国家

（2）收件人姓名和地址

The Manager

College of Communication and Information Engineering 分支 Shanghai University 99 Shangda Road Shanghai, 200444 China

（3）敬称

Dear Ms. White/Mr. White/Professor/Sir or Madam/Sirs

（4）主体部分

介绍：目的和文章的重要性 主体：给出关键信息

结论：陈述你希望接下来发生什么事情，以及观点。

（5）结束敬语

Yours respectfully/Sincerely yours

（6）签名

包括手写签名和打印签名

（7）符号

可选内容

举例：

College of Communication and Information Engineering Shanghai University 99 Shangda Road Shanghai, 200444

China January 26st, 2015

The Manager

Robin’s Woolen Co. Ltd. 320 Sterling Street Lyndon City, Tx 75212

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m sorry to occupy your spare time, but I’m really wants to complain about the damaged goods you delivered to me when I purchase it online shopping.

I submit the order online on Saturday 6nd December, and fortunately I receive the goods the next day. I am so happy to open the box, but to surprise me, the goods was badly hurt. At the beginning, I was so anger to complaint your company in the taobao.com. But after a minute, I realized that anyone could make careless mistakes, and it can be understood. So I choose to tell you the truth, and hope you will deal with carefully.

I enclose the damaged goods and a copy of original receipt, and I will send the damaged goods back. Then I hope you will send me a full refund as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Student, Shanghai University 特点：

（1）每个部分间都需要空一行（也有特殊的） （2）每一段都需要左对齐 （3）特别注意在哪里需要逗号

二、 学业申请

College of Communication and Information Engineering Shanghai University 99 Shangda Road Shanghai, 200444 China

January 26st, 2015

Admission Administrator Graduate School Admissions Michigan State University East Lansing, MI 48824

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing to request information on graduate programs of communication engineering in your university. In June, 2016, I will graduate from shanghai University in Shanghai, China, where I majored communication engineering. I have completed all the required courses with satisfactory scores in my undergraduate courses. I will take the TOEFL on January 5st, 2015 and plan to start graduate school in July 2015.

Please include information about the possibilities for financial aid in your university. I do not have the funds to finance my education; therefore I will be applying for an application fee waiver and full financial support from the university to cover tuition and living expenses.

If you could send me these materials along with an application form and any special information for international students, I would be very grateful. I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours, Rabin

Rabin

三、 工作申请

（1） 附信 cover letter

College of Communication and Information Engineering Shanghai University 99 Shangda Road Shanghai, 200444 December 9st, 2014

The Manager

Human Resources Manager Room 1200, Jingbao building Number 76, Pujian Road Shanghai, 200444 China

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to introduce myself to you and apply for the software engineers, advertised in the advertisement.

As you can see in the enclosed resume, I am a graduate student of shanghai university, majoring in communication engineering. And I think I have the quality to apply the position. Firstly, I have got a computer level 2 certificate and an assistant engineer certificate, during my undergraduate study. Secondly, I have engaged in many projects under the guidance of my tutor, and have the tools and knowledge to finish a project by myself. Last but not least, I am pretty easygoing and willing to communicate with others. If I became a member of your company, your company will benefit a lot.

I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss how my education and experience will be helpful to you. Thank you for your time and consideration. Waiting for your reply, helpfully positive one.

Sincerely yours, Rabin Rabin

Student, Shanghai University

（2）简历 Resume 四、 便条 note

（1） 感谢信 Thank-you note

December 9st

Dear Dr. Rainbow,

I am writing to express my heartfelt appreciation for all that you did for me in my GRE preparation. It is very kind of you to have spared me your precious time answering my questions patiently. Now I’m happy to inform you that I received an offer from New York University Graduate School of Arts and Science, which, I understand clearly, should be attributed to your generous help. Heartfelt thanks again.

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

（2） 邀请信 Invitation note

December 9st

Dear Dr. Rainbow,

The Russian National Ballet Troupe Theater is going to perform Swan Lake at Boston Opera House at 19:00 on Nov. 29. I am wondering whether you will be happy to watch it. Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

（3） 任命信 Appointment note

December 9st

Dear Dr. Rainbow,

I’m so glad that you can go to the ballet with me tomorrow evening. As the performance begins at seven o’clock sharp, I think we can have supper in Victoria Seafood Restaurant opposite Boston Opera House. I will meet you there at 5:30 if that’s OK with you. Please let me know whether you would prefer another place.

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

（4） 道歉信 Apology note

December 9st

Dear Dr. Rainbow,

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to have dinner with you this evening because I have to go to Logan International Airport at 4:00 p.m. to meet the Senior Vice President of our Australia branch. I really have kept our date in mind; however, my boss just phoned me, asking me to pick her up. It’s so sudden and urgent that I’m the only one available for this task. Please forgive me. I’ll meet you at the entrance to the Opera House at 6:45.

Many thanks.

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

（5） 电话留言 Telephone message

December 9st

Dear Dr. Rainbow,

A Mr. Jake called you this morning when you were out. He wanted to meet you in your office at 9 a.m. this coming Saturday. If that is not convenient for you, you are requested to ring him up at any time this evening from 7 p.m. to 11 p.m. at 745-6000, Ext. 3025

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

（6） 请求信 Request note

December 9st

Dear Manager,

I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “Japanese-American Literature”. But it is a great pity that I missed the first half of the lecture and failed to get the handout due to a minor traffic accident on my way to the lecture. I’m really interested in the field and plan to do some research in it, so I’m

wondering if it is possible for me to get the handout. IF it is not too much trouble for you, would you please email it to guoshuilin@126.com or call me at 18801912528 so that I can go and fetch it? Thank you very much.

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

（7） 收据 Note of receipt

December 9st

Received from Mr. Rainbow the sum of RMB 400 in full of all demands for rent to Apr. 15, 2015 for premises located at 21 Washington Ave., Sunnyvale, CA.

Rabin

（8） 恭喜信 Congratulation note

December 9st

Dear Mom,

Congratulations! You cannot imagine how excited I was when Dad told me that you were just Dad and I are proud of you. You are sure to make the best General Manager.

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

appointed General Manager of your company. Your efforts during the last five years have paid off.

（9） 安慰信 Consolation note

December 9st

Dear Ms. Rainbow,

I just can’t tell you how shocked I was to learn of your accident. It is to my great relief that you were All of us are missing you. Do not worry about your work. Ms. Watson has made all the arrangements, With every good wish for your quick recovery.

Sincerely yours,

Rabin

not seriously injured and will be out of hospital next week.

五、 通告 notes

(1) 会议 Meeting

All senior students are requested to be present at the graduation ceremony held in the auditorium this Monday at 1 p.m.

Please be punctual!

College of Communication and Information Engineering

(2) 演讲 Lecture

Lecture

Topic: Modem Electronics and Its Uses

Speaker: Prof. John Milford

(Visiting scholar from Harvard University) Place: In the Lecture Hall of the Library

Time: at 7:30 p.m. All Are Warmly Welcome

College of Communication and Information Engineering

December 9st

(3) 公共活动 Public activity

Hosted by the College of Communication and Information Engineering, the third English Talent Competition will be held in class room AJ103 of Building A at 6 p.m., Friday, April 7,2014.

All are warmly welcome!

College of Communication and Information Engineering

(4) 招募 Wanted

Wanted Computer Under 1000 RMB

Rabin

Afternoons and evenings 18801912528

六、 邀请卡 Invitation Cards

Invitation

Professor and Mrs. Ellen White Requests the pleasure of your company

At dinner with her family

On Saturday, the twenty fourth of March

At King Hotel 99 Shangda Road Dress Code: Formal Tel: 18801912528

R. S. V. P

七、 致谢 Acknowledgements

I would like to express my gratitude to the many people who saw me through this book; to all those who provided support, talked things over, read, wrote, offered comments. Allowed me to quote their remarks and assisted in the editing, proofreading and design.

I would like to thank Mr. Rainbow for enabling me to publish this book. Above all, I want to thank my wife, Wetty and rest of my family, who supported and encouraged me in spite of all the time I t took me away from them. It was a long and difficult journey for them.

I would like to thank Pay for helping me in the process of selection and editing. Thanks are also due to Uarn, Thanks go to Chiris and Server—without you this book would never find its way to the Web and to so many Last but not least, I beg forgiveness of all those who have been with me over the course of the years and my publisher who encouraged me.

people who can not read the Hebrew printed book. whose names I have failed to mention.

Part 1有关于邀请的通知

大家请注意!我要传达一个通知。为欢迎来访的美国朋友，学生会将于8月15日，即周六晚举行一个晚会。晚会将在主楼屋顶花园举行。

晚会19：30开始，节目包括音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品等。为此，请大家务必要带好你的礼物。请包装好，签上名，并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词。

千万记住：星期六晚19：30，主楼屋顶花园。肯定玩得开心。欢迎大家的到来。 学生会 8月 10日

Notice

May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Student Union is going to hold a

party on Saturday evening, August 15th, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the main building.

It will begin at 19:30. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Everybody please brings along a small gift. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.

Don't forget: 19: 30, Saturday evening, roof garden, main building. There's sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.

Student Union Aug. 10

Part 2投诉信的排序

1. I was satisfied with it at first.

2. I will appreciate your handling my case as soon as possible. 3. I’ve got so upset about it that I strongly demand a refund now.

4. I am writing to complain about the digital camera I purchased from your store last weekend. 5. However, it no longer works properly after being used for five days. 正确顺序：4, 1, 5, 3, 2

（2） Part 3求职信 (附信 cover letter)

School of materials Shanghai University 149Yanchang Rd. Shanghai,200072 Jan.4, 2012

Manager Buynow Mall 588 Zhangyang Road Shanghai, 200135

Dear manager,

I saw your recruitment advertisement on internet. I deeply interested in the position as a teacher.

第二段（叙述自己具备的条件）

第三段（表达希望得到面试机会，表示感谢）

Enclosed you will find a copy of resume. Basically, I am interested in a position as a foreign language expert or as a teacher. If you have any position available, please allow me to interview with you. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Respectfully yours, Peter Peter

Part 4 Thesis writing(10%)

Direction: Translate the acknowledgment/abstract into English. 或 Fill in the blanks of the acknowledgment/abstract with the words given in the box或 Rearrange the follows

acknowledgment/abstract into the right order

首先我要对所有在我写论文的过程中提供帮助的人表示感谢。

Firstly, I would like to express my gratitude to all those who helped me during the writing of my thesis. 我要衷心感谢我的导师王帅，感谢多年来对我的鼓励和引导。

My heartfelt thanks go to my tutor, professor Wang Shuai, for his consistent encouragement and guidance. 没有我父母朋友的帮助，我的论文就不可能完成。

Without my parents’ and friends’ help, my thesis couldn’t have been completed. 对你给我的支持我谨表谢意，我为有你这样的导师而感到幸运。

I am pleased to acknowledge your support. And I feel lucky to have you as my tutor. 最后我要感谢家人，有了他们的支持我才得以完成博士阶段的学习

Lastly，my gratitude extends to my family whose support helped me during my doctorate study.

Part5 Summary(20%)

Direction: write a summary passage. Credit will be given for the use of your own words, but care must be taken not change the original meaning. Your summary must be in continuous form and in no less than 150 words.

写作技巧：首先将各个段落的中心句划出。然后对中心进行句型句式的变换，加入连词使整篇概述连贯且富于变化。最后再做修改，将一些繁琐的用语改用简单的词组替代。

Most people seem to believe that money is important. Researchers found that in poor countries being relatively well off does make for greater well-being but in more developed countries where nearly everyone can afford life’s necessities, more money matters surprising little.

The Forbes’ 100 wealthiest Americans have expressed only slightly greater happiness than average American. The advance of technology makes possible a much more comfortable life than it was back in 1940s when many households didn’t have a toilet. Yet material abundance doesn’t guarantee happiness. Since 1957, American happiness index has declined from 35 to 32 percent. Meanwhile, the divorce rate has doubled, the teenage suicide rate tripled, the violent crime rate nearly quadrupled. Many, especially young adults are depressed. We have big houses and broken homes, high incomes and low morale, secured rights and reduced civility. We excel at making a living but often fail at making a life. We celebrate our prosperity but yearn for purpose. We cherish our freedom but long for connection. In an age of plenty, we feel spiritual hunger. P.104

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