Responses to comments（英文期刊 审稿意见回复）

Dear Editor-in-Chief in XXXXXXX:

Thank you very much for your help in processing the review of our manuscript (Manuscript ID XXXXX). We have carefully read the thoughtful comments from you and reviewers and found that these suggestions are helpful for us to improve our manuscript. On the basis of the enlightening questions and helpful advices, we have now completed the revision of our manuscript. The itemized responses to the reviewers’ comments are listed in the succeeding sheets. We hope that all these corrections and revisions would be satisfactory. Thanks a lot, again.

1. Title: XXX

2. Manuscript type: Article 3. Corresponding author: XXX 4. Full author names: XXX

Sincerely,

Prof. XXX

School of Chemistry and Chemical Engineering, XX Key Laboratory of Controllable Chemistry Reaction & Material Chemical Engineering, XX University,

Wuhan, Hubei, 430072 , P R China.

2015-03-05

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Responses to comments of Editor

Thank you for your serious and constructive comments on our manuscript. According to your suggestion, the manuscript has been revised as a letter to editor. The revisions we have made are as follows:

? 1 Subtitles \Conclusions\\Acknowledgments\and \References\Reply:

Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion. The relevant subtitles have been revised in the revision.

? 2 In the section of the References, title of cited paper should be removed, and in ref.35 the superfluous comma should be deleted. Reply:

Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion.

All the titles have been removed as you required and the superfluous comma in ref.35 has also been deleted.

? 3 Numerous relevant papers have been published in recent years especially in 2014 and 2015. Some key, important or/and latest research results in this field, should be mentioned and cited in the section of introduction instead of outdated or earlier papers so that we can provide a solid background and progress to the readers regarding the current state-of-knowledge on this topic. Therefore, I strongly require you to rewrite this part and then update your citations. Reply:

Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion.

We have rewritten the section of introduction and updated corresponding citations as you required. In detail, some recent and excellent researches have been cited in the revision to replace those of earlier papers which are no longer

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? 4 Any changes or revisions in the text should be highlighted by different color in the revised manuscript compared with that of the previous version. Reply:

Thank you for your constructive and helpful suggestion. All the changes and revisions have been highlighted by cyan.

We have revised our manuscript again

We have made further modifications on the manuscript, especially the introduction section. The latest revisions are highlighted by green, while previous changes are highlighted by cyan.

To be specific: a) Some adjustments about sentence structures have been made to increase the diversity of expression.

b) The second example about N-doped carbon materials is relatively early research result published in 2009. Thus we have replaced it with a lasted and outstanding paper.

c) The unique effects of S-doping have been expounded in the revision to correspond to the effects of N-doping introduced above.

d) In addition to rewriting the part of introduction as you required, we have also polished and revised the chapters of experimental, results and discussion, conclusions and updated the section of references.

The initial examples about N-S-codoped carbon materials (references16 and 17) are earlier results published in 2012 and 2013. Thus we have replaced them with some lasted and outstanding papers.

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