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English Writing 导学案

抓 扩 连 改 抄 复习目标：掌握英语书面表达的常用写作技巧:审

Step 1 Lead-in :看广告，作宣传。

宋祖英：中国乐坛著名音乐家。1966年8月13日出生于湖南.为实现梦想，1992年才结婚，40岁才生下一子。主要作品有《辣妹子》等。连续20多年在央视春晚演唱经典歌曲 。为推动中国民族音乐的发展，目前她正忙于全球巡演工作。5月25日将亮相于宜昌市体育馆，敬请期待！ 佳作欣赏 Don’t miss Song Zuying’ s major concert

Hello,everyone!Let me tell you a piece of good news! Song Zuying is going on a world tour in Yichang! We are so excited and proud.

Song Zuying is the famous musician on Chinese music scene. She was born on August 13,1966 in Hunan . She is very beautiful and has a sweet voice. She is loved by everyone .

In order to achieve her dream,she got married in 1992 and had a son at the age of 40.She has many famous works like Lameizi and so on.She has sung songs at CCTV Spring Festival Gala for over 20 years!

Now in order to improve Chinese national music，she is busy preparing for her world tour. She is coming to Yichang on May 25th and She’ll perform at 8:00pm in Yichang Statium. The tickets will be sold soon.You can call 400-0717-518 or 18807200517 to book tickets.

Be sure not to miss her concert. Call your relatives or friends, Let’s look forward to her coming! Step 2 书面表达六步法

一、审题 二、抓要点 三、扩展成句 四、连句成文 五、查错改错 第六步 誊写

2013年4月20日8时02分，四川雅安芦山发生地震。许多建筑物倒塌, 数百人死亡，数千人受伤并失去家园。 生命高于一切， 李总理组织部队及志愿者们赴灾区夜以继日地救人，社会各界踊跃捐款帮助灾区人民。请先报道以上新闻，再谈谈不同地震场合中的自救方法(至少3条)。

1）when / where/ what /who/why/how?

2) 不同场合自救法： 1)If you‘re indoors？ 2)If you are in a tall building？ 3)If you’re in a crowded public place？…

拟出关键词： hit， fall down， be buried埋 under the ruins废墟 ， lose ， premier总理 Li ， save， All circles of the society社会各界， donate ，help， disaster area灾区

1.1)A terrible____________ _____ Lushan , Ya’an,Sichuan at 8:02 am on April 20th 2013 .

2) Many buildings ______ _______. A large ________ of people ______ buried under the ruins and died. Thousands of people badly _______ and ________ their homes.

3)After the earthquake, premier Li ___________ our armies and volunteers to go to the disaster area to _______ people day and night. All circles of the society ________ a lot of money to help the people in disaster area.

2.What should we do when we are facing an earthquake?

1)If you're indoors, stay beside or under the furniture and ______ your head.

2)If you are in a tall building, use the stairs ________ of the lift because the lift may stop.

3)If you're in a crowded public place, try to be calm and don't ______(推) while rushing out. Leave the building quickly in order.

收尾的话： Life is the most important to all of us. We should master the correct ways to save ourselves or others who need help.

Find out the mistakes and correct them.:

1.Sicuan Yaan Lushan happened an earthquake ._______________________________________________

2.it happen in 2013,april 20,8:02 am._______________________________________________________

3.Some people buried under the ruins .____________________________________________________

4. Leaving the building quickly in order .___________________________________________________ Step 3近三年调考题比较

A .2011年九年级调研考试书面表达

良好的生活习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请你从下面的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不好，但现在已经养成的好习惯，谈一谈你是如何养成这个习惯的。要求：１、不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息。２、内容完整，书写整齐。词数８０－１００。

Good habits: 1.Have breakfast. 2.Eat healthy food. 3.Early to bed, early to rise.

4.Wash hands. 5.Exercise.

范文:My good habit is early to bed and early to rise.(开门见山)

Two years ago, when I was a Grade 7 student,I liked reading books in bed.Every day after I finished my homework,I lay in bed reading books until about 12:00 o’clock.The next day I couldn’t get up on time.I used to be late for school and felt tired in class.It was too bad.Then I followed my teacher’s and my parents’ advice. I stopped staying up and went to bed before 10 o’clock.I also bought an alarm clock.It woke me up at 6:30 the next morning.My mother also did morning exercises with me every morning.Then I felt very energetic.(一定要注意叙述事件时谓语动词形式)

With the help of my teacher and my parents,I gave up the bad habit. Ever since then ,I go to bed early and get up early. I never go to school late.I’m much stronger and doing better in school.

B.2012年九年级调研考试书面表达

在你的学习生活和成长过程中，有时会遇到一些困难。但是在你的努力之下，最终克服了困难，取得了进步。请你谈谈你曾经遇到过什么困难，是怎么克服的，你有什么感受。

要求：1.不得使用真实姓名和学校；2.词数80-100。

范文:A few years ago,I had trouble in learning English. I even wanted to give up learning it.（略写什么困难）But with the help of my parents, friends and teachers, I could study it well. Firstly,I listened to the teachers carefully in class. Secondly,I tried my best to do my homework well. Thirdly,I read English words and passages everymorning.

Lastly, I kept writing two passages every week. Little by little, I could do well in English.I was very happy at that time.（详写克服困难的过程，按总分总的格局）Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it!Believe in yourself,my dear friends!You are sure to get success!（感受）

C.201３年九年级调研考试书面表达

志愿者活动已经成为了全社会的风尚。请根据以上几个问题描述你或你的朋友所经历的一次志愿者活动。 1.Where did you do the volunteer job? 2.What did you do? 3.How did you feel about it? 注意：文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。字数80-100。

Step 4 当堂演练

如今，小组合作这种学习方式在夷陵各地正如火如荼地推进，并深受每个学子欢迎。请你写一篇有关小组合作学习的短文，内容包含以下三个方面：

１、小组合作学习的好处；

2、让你感受深刻的一次小组合作学习的经历；

3、小组合作学习的方式给你带来的收获。

要求：1、词数80左右，已给出的句子不计入总词数；2、文中不得出现真实的人名与校名. Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages…

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