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初一书面表达能力培养

主讲人：张英月

中关村中学

?初一英语书面表达技能要求?初一话题作文介绍

?写作常用词语归纳?如何修改英语作文？?改病句?基础写作训练

初一英语书面表达技能要求

初一书面表达主要考查学生观察、审题及组织语篇的能力，学生能够正确使用大小写字母和标点

符号，就常见话题能表述事实，并能够运用所学的语言基础知识从书面上正确、得体地表达自己的思

想。

初一书面表达话题介绍

Topic 1：Personal information

(个人信息)

?Self-introduction自我介绍?Penpal介绍笔友

?Friends,familymembersorteachers介绍周围的人，比如朋友，家人或者老师

写作基本句式和句型(个人爱好）

1.Ilikeswimmingverymuch.2.Myhobbyisswimming.

3.MyhobbiesarecollectingstampsandwatchingTV.

4.I’minterestedin/goodatplayingthepianobecauseIthinkit’sgoodformetostudywell.

5.Ireallyenjoygoinghiking.

可用短语或词组（学校生活和学习成绩）

??????????

workhardat

putone’sheartintobeinterestedinbegoodatbefondofdowellin

bepoorat/beweakinmakeprogressinbebusydoingsthspend…doingsth

努力学习…用心

对…感兴趣擅长…喜欢…

在…方面做得好在…方面差/弱在…方面取得进步忙于做…花…做…

【例文2】介绍笔友

请给你的小学老师写一封信，介绍你新结识的笔友。

Name / ageSchoolNationalityLanguage

KateGreen(14)No.1MiddleSchoolAustralian

English,alittleChinese

Favorite animal

HobbiesIdeal jobReasons

panda(cute,friendly)writingstories,singingreporter

interesting,touralotofcitiesandmeetfamouspeople

【例文2】介绍笔友

Dear teacher,

I’mgladtotellyouaboutmypenpalcalledKateGreen.Sheisa14-year-oldgirlfromAustralia.ShestudiesinNo.1MiddleSchool.NowshecanspeakEnglishandalittleChinese.Andshelikespandasbecauseshethinkstheyarefriendlyandcute.Herhobbiesarewritingstoriesandsinging.Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeareporterbecauseshecanmeetmanyfamouspeopleandtourlotsofcities.

SheworkshardandoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Ilikeherverymuch.

Yours

注意：

下面三种错句是最易出现的：

1. She can speak English and a few1. She can speak English and a littleChinese. Chinese. (Chinese是不可数名词，用a little修饰)2. I/she favorite subject is English. 2. My / Herfavorite subject is English. (受汉语影响，应该是My或Her)3. She often helpsme with my English. me with my English. 3. She often help(一般现在时态中当主语是第三人称单数时，谓语动词应变为三单形式，改为helps。)

写作基本框架

介绍朋

开头句：Letmeintroducemyfriendtoyou.

第一层:基本信息

（name, age, phone number, etc)

中间段落

第二层:兴趣爱好

友

第三层:成为朋友的原因

结尾句：Whataboutyourfriend?

（hobby,like/enjoydoing…,becauseit’s…)

（the same interest, help each other)

书信的结构

Dear ____, 例如：Dear friend, / Dear Dad,

开场白例如Thank you for ____.

正文

结束语例如：Best wishes!

签名例：Yours

/ Your loving

开场白一般用：

Thankyoufor____.

It’sapleasureformeto____.

Gladtogetyourletter.Howarethingsgettingon?结束语一般用：Bestwishes!Wishyougoodluck!Writetomesoon.Hopetohearfromyou.Givemybestwishesto_____.

随时练

你班举行演讲比赛，主题是——我的朋友。把你的笔友介绍给大家。你的演讲稿要包括：笔友来自哪里；家庭情况；外表；爱好；他（她）想从事的职业；你对拥有笔友的感受。

NameCountryFamilyAppearance

MaryCanadaone brother

tall, thin, long straight hair

HobbyWant to be

read, teach kids to sing

teacher

Feelingsexciting, interesting

审题(中英文结合)：标注要点，确立中心?

My pen pal

?1. country

4. hobby

2. family 3. appearance

5. dream job 6. feeling

?important

Brainstorm：罗列素材，选择素材，句型

?选择你能表达的／有特点的／能很好为中心服务的

?确定好各类材料的详与略

Outline: 文章布局，整合素材

?开头：提出感受

?主体部分：各层之间不能全是简单罗列，要体现一定的逻辑关系。（理想职业和爱好之间）文字方面，注意长短句的结合，主语的变化，避免重复用词，高级词句要用得自然；内容方面，注意自然紧凑，与主题无关或关系不大的不提。?结尾：呼应或提升主题，要有思想，但切忌牵强。

成文后检查：

???

要点是否都全

精简语句（是否有重复用词、句型；可有可无的词、句删掉）检查语法

名词:单复数,冠词

动词:时态，主谓一致,固定搭配

形容词,副词的区别……

【学生习作实例】

MypenpalisMary.Shecomefromcanadaandshehaveabrother.Sheistallandthin.Shehairislongandstraight.Sheverylikesreadbookandteachkidstosing.Ilikereadbookbecauseit’sinteresting.Shewanttodoa

teacher.Becauseitisinteresting.IverylikeMary.

【学生习作实例】

MypenpalisMary.ShecomesfromCanadaandshehasabrother.Sheistallandthin.Herhairislongandstraight.Shelikesreadingbooksverymuch.Shewantstobeateacherbecauseitisinteresting.IlikeMaryverymuch.

Palsplayanimportantroleinourlife.IhaveaCanadianpenpalnamedMary,withwhomIhavealotincommon.Shehasayoungerbrotherathome.Similarly,Ihaveasister.Theirinterestingstoriesarealwaysourtopic.Readingandteachingkidsarehermajorhobbies,soshehasmadeuphermindtobeateacherinthefuture.Thebiggestdifferencebetweenusistheappearance.She’stall,thinwithlongstraighthair,whileI’mshortandfat.However,itdoesn’taffectourdeepfriendship.Wesharejoysanddifficultiesinourlifebye-mailandIfeelreallyluckytohaveapenpallikeher.

Topic2: Personal Environments

(周围环境)

??

How to write a tour guideHow to introduce a place

ZhutanStreetacrossfrom,

nextto,on…Street,infrontof,behindbetween…and…

Step1.Placesandlocations

next to in front of between behind across from on ……

behind1.There is a park ________ my apartment.swimmingpool2.Next to the park is a ______________.

shoppingmallsupermarket3.My apartment is between the ____________ and the ___________.

acrossfrom

seaside

4.A flower market is __________ my apartment.

5.Take a walk through Zhutan Street, you can reach the _______.

Step2.Descriptionwords

greatgoodnice

newapartmentatZhutanStreet.ItisveryWelcometomy____

quiet and clean_______________.Thereissmalla_____park

behindmy

apartment.Nexttothebeautifulparkisa_________swimmingpool.Mybigapartmentisbetweenthe_______shoppingoldmallandthewonderful_______market.Thereisa___________flowermarketacross

newcleaninterestingbeautifulfantasticwonderfulamazing……

frommyapartment.TakeawalkthroughZhutanStreet,youamazingcanreachthe___________seaside.

Step3.Grammaticalstructures句型

1.…with…

Eg.Nexttothehotelisasmallhousewithaninterestinggarden.

请练习

1)acrossfrom,postoffice,library,manycomfortableseats

2)infrontof,bank,myhouse,asmallswimmingpool

Step3.GrammaticalStructures句型

1.…with…

1)acrossfrom,postoffice,library,manycomfortableseats

Acrossfromthepostofficeisabiglibrarywithmanycomfortableseats.2)infrontof,bank,myhouse,asmallswimmingpool

Infrontofthebankismyhousewithasmallswimmingpool.

Step3.Grammaticalstructures句型2. …is a good place to do something…

Eg. Bridge Street is a good place to have fun.

Beijing Museum is an interesting place to learn history.

请练习

1) Haidian library, read books and do homework with friends2) The Summer Palace…3) The public garden….

Step3.Grammaticalstructures句型3.Ifyou…,youcan…

Eg.1.Ifyouarehungry,youcanbuysomefoodinthesupermarket.

2.Ifyoulikecollectingstamps,youcangotoHaidianPostOffice.

请练习

1)thirsty,Chineseteahouse2)tired,publicgarden3)likecollectingshells,seaside

【例文1】地点介绍

Welcometomyneighborhood

WelcometomynewapartmentatZhutanStreet.Itisagoodplacetorelaxinwinter.Itisveryquietandclean.Thereisasmallparkwithmanyflowersandasodamachinebehindmyapartment.Ifyouarethirsty,youcandrinkcoldsoda.Nexttotheparkisabeautifulswimmingpool.Myapartmentisbetweenthebigshoppingmallandtheoldmarket.Awonderfulflowermarketisacrossfrommyapartment.TakeawalkthroughZhutanStreet,youcanreachanamazingseasideandenjoythebluewaterandgoldensunshine.

写作基本句式和句型(地点介绍）

1.Thereisabanknexttomyschool.2.Itisagoodplacetorelaxinwinter.

3.Myapartmentisbetweenthebigshoppingmallandtheoldmarket.

4.Acrossfromthepostofficeisabiglibrary.

注意：

下面五句中均有易错点：

1.Icanenjoythedeliciousfoodinthere.

2.Therearemanygrassinandaroundmyschool.3.Theoldhotelisbetweenpostofficeandrestaurant.

4.Therehavetwonewpayphoneinfrontofthepark.5.Acrossfrommyschoolisabighousewitha

amazingswimmingpool.

注意：

下面五句中均有易错点：

1.Icanenjoythedeliciousfoodinthere.

ismuchmanygrassinandaroundmyschool.2.Thereare

3.Theoldhotelisbetween(the)postofficeand(the)restaurant.

aretwonewpayphonesphoneinfrontofthepark.4.Therehave

a5.Acrossfrommyschoolisabighousewithanamazingswimmingpool.

随时练

下周澳洲学生访问团要来你校参观，交流

经验，请你代表全校同学介绍你的学校，写一篇导游词。

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