6.10 2017-2018初三二模考作文汇编 分专题

2017-2018初三二模考作文汇编

专题一：书信类

One徐汇区

VII. Writing(作文):(共20分)

You are graduating from Middle school soon.Your parents will give you a gift to celebrate the important time.Write a letter with at least 60 words to your mun and dad.Tell what you want and how useful and important it is to you.The beginning part of the letter is given.

你即将初中毕业，父母准备一份礼物给你庆祝这一重要时刻，写一篇至少60字的信给你的父母。告诉他们你想要什么礼物，它对你的重要性以及用处。信的开头已给出。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分，标点符号不占格）

Dear mum and dad,

Thank you for your great love for me. As for the gift, I’d like to have ...... Yours truly Michelle 【答案】 Dear mum and dad,

Thank you for your great love for me. As for the gift, I’d like to have such a special gift that it is unique for me. The best gift, I believe, is to embrace the nature alone. When it comes to graduation, the majority of students suppose that graduation is free of hardworking.

Having spent about 9 years in study, I gradually lose the ability to stay alone.Both at school and at home, I spend the whole day with my parents and classmates. So it is high time that I should take the time to see the outside world alone. There is no doubt that travelling alone provides a chance for me to live more independently.

A proverb says“Travel can cultivate people’s endurance.” For me, travel is a part of education. In the course of travelling, I may be faced with new challenges, which is beneficial to me. I never know what will happen on the road. Maybe that is the point of life!

In a word, nothing is more important than to travel alone and meet the unexpected

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challenges! Yours truly Two 闵行区 94. Write an e-mail in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景写一封不少于 60 词的电子邮件，邮件开头已给。）

假如你是 Sunny，你们班级将要在教室里举行一次毕业派对，班主任 Susan 正在征求大家的金点子。请给 Susan 写一封电子邮件，介绍你设计的一个或几个有意义的毕业派对活动。

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．

Subject To Dear Susan, Graduation Party classteachersusan@163.com I am really excited about the coming graduation party. Yours, Sunny Keys:

Subject Graduation Party 2

To Dear Susan, classteachersusan@163.com I am really excited about the coming graduation party. And I couldn’t help but be eager to share my some of my ideas with you. First and foremost, considering we are going to enter different high schools and may not see each other as often as now, a video display of the various activities which we have taken part in before is suggested. Whenever we review the past happy moments after graduation, I believe every student will feel precious. In addition, a students’ talent show, in my view, will make the party much more interesting, which not only deepen our understanding about each other, but also add more confidence to ourselves. Hope my advice is helpful to you, and best wishes! Yours, Sunny

专题类：观点及措施类

One 松江区

Write at least 60 words on the topic “A personal habit I’d like to change”.（以“我想改变的一个个人习惯”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following points are only for reference: 1. 简述你想改变的这个个人习惯； 2. 说明你想改变这一习惯的理由及措施。

【范文】

In real life, there are many people who have trouble finding themselves. So I’m not an exception.

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For me, worry seems to be a habit, which has been a personal habit I’d like to change. To tell the truth, I often feel tired. In fact, I am not so unlucky, but my inner sadness, and there is a one-sided understanding of life. A wise man, even in a troubled environment, often finds pleasure in himself. There is no denying that I have to find the reason to get rid of the bad habit before it destroys me. To get rid of a bad habit, it is important that I first get to know how harmful the habit really is. Take the habit of worry as an example. Obviously, worry is harmful to my health. It can result in anxiety and nervousness. Besides, worry is a waste of time. A depressed person spends almost as much time a day as I can thinking about some unnecessary little things. Since I can realize the danger and waste, it is likely that I may stop worrying slowly. To get rid of a bad habit, it is essential that I also have a strong will. Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe I am able to change this bad habit in the near future. Two 普陀区

Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I have trouble with my best friend”

【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】 提示：生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何 处理此类问题呢?请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自身经历进行阐述。 (注意短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

When I have trouble with my best friend

Similar as we are to our friends, we are distinct and independent individuals. Sometimes we may differ in views and have trouble with each other. However, it is communication and understanding that really matter.

When I have trouble with my best friend, I won’t withdraw but contact him timely, figure out what has gone wrong and work out a plan to rebuild friendship. To some degree, I owe a permanent, steady and dynamic relationship to mutual understanding. Attention should be paid to similarities rather than hovering over differences if I am to cultivate our friendship. Furthermore, as I have chosen him to be an intimate friend, I should never be conquered by obstacles that are meant to test my heart and advance relationship.

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To conclude, whatever trouble I have with my friends, I will reserve differences, seek common ground.

专题三：评论类

One 静安区 Write a review of a novel in 60-120 words.(从你平时看过的小说中选取一本，写一篇60-120个词的书评，标点符合不占格)

You can use the following points to help you: > What is the novel about?

> Give your opinions and your conclusion.

> Would you recommend this novel to others? Why or why not?

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

The Old Man and the Sea was the work of fiction produced by Hemingway , which is about an old fisherman named Santiago. The story is that Santiago fight with the sharks on the return voyage.

From the story, we can see how brave the old man is.In the face of these sharks, he never still gave up killing them and protecting his prey.

In my opinion, the old fisherman did his best to fight with fate although he was in the face of challenges of aging and death. It told us that we all should have a brave heart.

So I would recommend this novel to others ,for it is amazing and inspiring.

Two 杨浦区 95. In 60 to 120 words,write a review about a hotel you stayed at.（根据所给提示，针对你曾经住过的宾馆，写一篇60-120个词的评论，标点符号不占格） In your review,you may include:

-the name of hotel -the price

-what you like about it -what do you didn’t like about it -where you got the information about it -your recommendation（推荐）

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