浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(7)写作综合

写作综合练(七)

第一节:应用文写作

(2017·浙江台州期末)

假如你是李华,上周,你校学生会组织了“冬日暖衣(Warm Clothes For Winter)”活动,为贫困山区儿童献爱心。请你为校英语报写一篇相关报道。内容如下:

1.活动目的; 2.活动内容; 3.活动意义。

注意:1.词数80左右,题目已为你写好; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Warm Clothes,Warm Heart

第二节:读后续写

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 (2017·浙江杭州七校联考)

An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)on their window.

The father asked his son,“What is this?” The son replied,“It is a crow.” After a few minutes,the father asked his son for the second time,“What is this?” The son said,“Father,I have just now told you.It’s a crow!”

After a little while,the old father again asked his son for the third time,“What is this?”

At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝).“It’s a crow,a crow.” A little while later,the father again asked his son the fourth time,“What is this?”

This time,the son shouted at his father,“Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again,although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’.Are you not able to understand this?”

A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary,which he had maintained since his son was born.On opening a page,he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it,the following words were written in the diary:

“Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa,when a crow was sitting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was,and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I did not feel irritated at all but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.

注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

After reading the diary,

Feeling ashamed,

参考答案

写作综合练(七)

第一节

Warm Clothes,Warm Heart

Last week,the Student Union in our school organized an activity “Warm Clothes for Winter” to show love and care to the children in the poverty-stricken

mountainous areas.This activity was welcomed by all the students,who donated clothes,gloves and so on to help the less fortunate through the freezing winter.

Unquestionably,students find such an activity quite rewarding.Knowing that they have improved the lives of others,they feel a strong sense of fulfillment.It is giving that makes the difference.

(83 words)

第二节 Paragraph 1:

After reading the diary,the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the

days when he used to sit together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times!The son thought to himself:If I attain old age,how will my son look at me?Will he think of me as a burden?Will he shout at me because of my poor sight,poor hearing or poor understanding?

Paragraph 2:

Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an

apology to his father,begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud,“I promise to see you happy forever,Dad.It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child,showering your selfless affection on me.You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best way no matter how you behave.”

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