写作技巧与预测作文索玉柱编写

写作技巧与预测作文 索玉柱编写

大学英语作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出分值(Reward Scoring)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题、是否充分表达主题思想，也要考虑是否能用英语清楚而确切地表达，也就是考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

(一)评分标准

写作满分为15分，分5个等级：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。 各分段评分具体标准如下：

2分——条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错，且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯。语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。

11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

(二)写作技巧

1．使用一些表示顺序或表示列举的词：first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)； on one hand，on the other hand；

2．文章要有开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分；

3．尽量使句子完整，不要使用自己不懂的词以及太复杂的句式； 4．背诵一些闪光词；

5．平时养成思考的习惯，学会从多个角度思考问题。 (三)热点作文预测和背诵范文

大学英语作文内容以和日常生活有关的话题和常识为主，尤其是广大考生关注的问题，历年的考题也证明了这一点。根据近十次作文考题的命题趋势，结合

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当前的校园生活和社会热点问题，我们预测出以下十个作文题目，极有可能考到。请大家认真背诵范文，巧取高分。

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Notice of English Speech Contest to publish on your school BBS. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 通知中应包括英语演讲比赛的时间、地点、主办者及演讲的主题和对参赛者的要求。

A Notice of English Speech Contest

An English speech contest sponsored by the University English Club will be held on May 4th at the university auditorium to memorize the 86th anniversary of the May 4th Campaign. Any of the full-time student in this university is entitled to take part in the speech. The student interested in the activity is required to submit a draft of his/her speech before April 30th to the Speech Organizing Committee Office at Room 1512 of the No. 2 Students Dormitory. You are free to choose your topic and the teachers of the English Department will offer their help to polish your drafts. The student whose draft is chosen by the Speech Organizing Committee will become the candidate. The winner will be awarded prizes by the President of. the University himself and will be recommended to take part in the English speech contest among universities in the district of Beijing. Please mail your speech draft to jyhw888@ sina. com. on. For further information please contact us at 82578597.

The Organizing Committee of English Speech Contest

August 15, 2005

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Notice of Enrollment of new members of the Association of Young Volunteers. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．有关青年志愿者协会的简介 2．报名要求和报名方式 A Notice of Enrollment

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The Association of Young Volunteers of this university is an

organization of the students whose main task is to help protect the campus environment and provide help of many sorts to the needed. To do a better job, the Association is to recruit 100 new members from the freshmen in this semester. Anyone who has a warm heart and has the time is welcome to join. Your extra talents such as dancing, singing, drawing and other crafts will be specially appreciated. The Association does not pay its member and the members do not have to pay the Association for its membership. The freshmen who are interested in the Association please send us an e-mail about your personal information to ayv_puc@ sina. edu. cn from September 10 - 25. The head of the association will have an interview with every candidate. The qualified members will get an admission notice. The new members will be offered a two-week training program and will be required to take an active part in the activities of this Association.

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to your school newspaper to express your view on CET Reform. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．举办四、六级考试的优点 2．四、六级考试存在的问题 3．你的建议 CET Reform Oct. 28, 2005 Dear editor,

I am a junior majoring ill computer science. At present, I am preparing for the CET-6. During the process of preparation, I think I get a clearer view of this national test, and I' d like to express my views on it. As science students, we consider English as a helpful tool, and the CET is useful to measure the English proficiency of college students in China. In my case, I learn a lot of knowledge from the information given by the CET. Both my comprehension and pragmatic skills are improved after taking the various mock tests. The test result is fairly reliable because it is still one of the basic criteria for employers to hire employees. What' s more, to meet the needs of China' s reform and open-door policy,

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the offer of the Spoken English Test also helps monitor the students to pay attention to the oral communication skill in daily life.

Nevertheless, there are still a lot of problems emerging out. English is not our native tongue, so we have to spend a lot of time on some items not necessary for our major. After all, too many exams do make us feel stressful, and we sometimes are confused about our motivations of learning English.

I suggest the CET designers apply the high technology to make the CET show more humanistic characteristics, that is to say, the questions in CET can change according to the examinees' specific circumstances, thus the interactiveness between us and the test will be achieved. In a word, I hope the current reform of CET will be more authentic instead of just bringing headache to students.

Best wishes to you all.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Ling

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Safety of Food. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．目前食品安全的状况

2．产生这些食品质量问题的原因 3．提出建议 The Safety of Food

Despite the decline in the number of eases related to fake foods and foods of poor quality, problems remain serious in the market. Food-born diseases remain responsible for high levels of sickness and mortality in the general population, particularly for at-risk groups, such as infants, young children, and the elderly. The most notorious case involved low quality milk powder in Fuyang, in East China's Anhui Province, which caused the death of a dozen babies.

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In my personal opinion, I think the responsibility goes for the most part to the food producers especially those who fail to meet safety standards. In order to sell more products, some food producers may even intentionally use various chemicals, such as pesticides, animal drugs etc. during manufacturing and processing just to make food look or taste good without taking people' s life into consideration. As we all know, food additives and contaminants can adversely affect health.

In this regard, in order to reduce the incidence and economic

consequences of food-born diseases, the supervision of food production should be stepped up. What' s more, it is important to drastically increase penalties on those who neglect food safety statutes.

After all, the Food Safety Department in our country should educate consumers about the risks presented in food and the safe food handling behaviors that can help minimize those risks. Nevertheless, it is our own awareness of good life style and hygiene habit that a healthy life relies on.

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to your fellow students advocating Saving Water. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．我国是个淡水资源十分匮乏的国家 2．如何从我做起节约用水 Saving Water

I am writing to inform all of my fellow students to save water in daily life. Our country is not rich in water resources, and the possession of water resources per person in China is below the world average. In some regions of our country water is so scarce that it is hard for the people and animals to get enough water to drink. What makes it worse, the pollution of water resources by the industries is getting more serious every day.

Of course, our government has taken many measures to counter the problem, and the good effect has been seen in some degree. However, that is not enough, the cause of saving water needs the participant of everybody. As college students, we have a good reason to do a better job in saving

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water. Here are some suggestion, we wish all of you to follow. First of all, we wish you bear saving water in mind when using water in your daily life, for example, do not let water running without restraint when you wash dishes, clothes or have a bath. Secondly, please do not stand by when seeing the phenomenon of wasting water, do something to combat it. Thirdly, help people to form the good habit of using water economically by giving wide publicity to save water.

With the effort of everybody, we firmly believe that the stem

situation of water resources in our country will be alleviated gradually.

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled How to Increase Your Working Experience in

University. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．大学期间，大学生有必要获得一些工作经验 2．获得工作经验的途径

How to Increase Your Working Experience in University

While studying in universities, students are required to make a detailed study of the knowledge in the books. Certainly the academic knowledge is the foundation for future work, but it is not the only thing that students have to acquire. Some working experience is also

indispensable for them to adapt themselves to the future occupations. How to increase the working experience without the sacrifice of studies? Firstly, I think, the students should get mentally and physically prepared for the coming part-time jobs. Secondly, they should widen the scope of choices. Whenever mentioning the part-time jobs, students will inevitably think of tutoring little kids or working in the supermarkets. In fact, there are a lot of other choices, such as working as volunteers for some associations, teaching in some less developed areas, and writing articles for newspapers. Finally, write down promptly what they have learned from work. By doing so, they could have deep impression of that experience and making it really valuable for the future work. In a word, working experience gained while the students are studying in universities will benefit them throughout their lives.

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Some Suggestions for the English Speech Contestants. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．英语演讲比赛在大学校园里很普遍 2．比赛前应注意的事项

Some Suggestions for the English Speech Contestants

The English speech contest is always the focus in every university. It is not only a kind of heated competition to select a few students with the best English fluency, but a festival for English learners to join together and learn from each other.

As a contestant, I think, one should be confident and full of hope. Although there must be many competent candidates, you are one of them. Most of time self-assurance will help you a lot to get to the very end of the game. Another important point one should bear in mind is that speech contest is a unique form of speaking. It involves many special techniques, such as advocating, stressing certain words, and making some gestures. After learning the article by heart, one should do more practice in performing, that is to say, in how to deliver the speech. Last but not the least, one should have proper attitude towards the final results. You should not emphasize too much on the ranking. It will only exist for the time being. As long as you have learned something through the contest, it's not a waste of time, and you will be quite clear about the direction for your future efforts.

To sum up, English speech contest is a kind of beneficiary activity, which deserves the active participation of every college students.

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled My Opinion on Campus Lectures. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

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1．大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩 2．听讲座有哪些益处

3．你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论 My Opinion on Campus Lectures

In recent years, more and more lectures are being given on campus. They are organized either by the departments or by the students' unions with an aim to improve the students' quality both mentally and academically. These lectures are usually in series and on different topics, such as arts, life, economy, psychology, world issues, etc.

Generally speaking, the advantages of good lectures are various. First, they broaden the students' knowledge horizon and cultivate their interests in different fields. Second, they make the life of the students colorful and enjoyable.

With these merits, lectures are just complementary and subordinate to our school work. If students spend too much time attending lectures, their regular study will be affected and disturbed. So, in my opinion, the students should, on the one hand, do their class work and homework well first, on the other hand, set as more time as possible to attend good lectures which are helpful to our life and study.

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled The Ideal Assistant in My Mind. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．大学生的全面成长离不开辅导员的工作 2．合格的辅导员应具备的素质和工作要求 The Ideal Assistant in My Mind

Political and ideological assistants place a very important role in the education and growth of the college students. Sole academic

cultivation does not ensure the making of talents. So, the assistants shoulder the responsibility to foster the students in an all-round way. In my opinion, to be a good assistant, first, the person must be very knowledgeable and talkative. He must have a solid command of theories and a wide range of interests. Second, he must be patient and considerate.

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When students have difficulties, he will try every means to give help. Third, a good assistant should be a good organizer and adviser. He must be good at communicating with the students and settling mental problems. Last but not the least, he should have a strong sense of responsibility and be hardworking. That means he must have affection for this job and get ready to devote himself to the education career.

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Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a good friend John congratulating him for his admission to a famous university. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1．对朋友进入大学表示祝贺 2．介绍大学生活和中学生活的异同

3．对如何成功地度过大学生活提出自己的建议 A Congratulation Letter

Dear John, Apr. 21, 2005

I'm very glad to hear that you have passed the entrance examination and been accepted by a very famous university. I feel very proud of you and I believe you really deserve the honor since you have been working so hard on that.

As you have mentioned in the letter, there are both some similarities and differences between college life and the life in high school. First, you have to go on working hard as there are a lot of subjects for you to learn. Second, in high school, teachers will probably tell you what to learn and how to learn in details and will also monitor your learning performance, while in college, teachers work like tour guides and you have to find out your own ways to acquire knowledge and solve problems. Last, be optimistic. If you hope to adapt yourself to this new environment, you'd better be positive no matter what difficulties you will experience in your college life.

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May you adapt yourself to the college life as soon as possible !

Truly Yours,

Li Ming

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