高中英语Module2FantasyLiterature写作园地教学案外研版选修6

写作园地

幻想故事写作

[感悟范文]

最近，某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头，续写一篇幻想小故事参赛。

A young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood and wondered and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put me on and I will help you.”．..

注意：词数120左右。

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[精彩范文]

A young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood and wondered and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put me on and I will help you.”

①The young man didn't hesitate and put the ring on his finger. ②Much to his surprise, he discovered that he disappeared and was invisible to any other people.

③Only when he took it off could people see him. ④He felt more confident and headed for the castle. ⑤On approaching the castle, he put the ring on and entered the castle.

⑥He eventually found the crying girl, on whom the witch had put a spell, learning that the girl couldn't move unless someone destroyed the witch's magical club, removing the spell. ⑦Having learned about this, the young man put the ring on, looking around for the witch's magical club. ⑧Finally, he found it in a golden box; he destroyed it, removing the spell on the girl and saving the girl. ⑨The young man, together with the girl, defeated the witch.

⑩The girl saved by the young man turned out to be a princess, and the king married her off to the young man, the young man and the princess living a happy life.

亮点分析：

1．文中only位于句首的倒装句，on doing sth.结构以及独立主格结构的使用，使文章内容表述清晰，句子结构更加复杂高级。

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2．文中非限制性定语从句和现在分词短语的使用，丰富了所在句子的相关信息，使句子更有层次感。

[技法讨论]

本模块要求写一篇幻想故事，幻想故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性，在体裁上属于记叙文，情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。

虚幻故事的写作步骤：

1．仔细审题，确定文章结构

虚幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始，第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果，最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。

2．根据需要确定时态

虚幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主。

3．筛选词汇

虚幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张。为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动，富于虚幻性。

[类文演练]

假设你要给参观你校的外籍人员，讲解中国的传统文化。一名外国朋友对中国成语“自相矛盾”发生了兴趣。请你根据图片，把这个古代的寓言故事讲给他们听。词数130左右。

参考词汇：矛spear；盾shield；刺pierce

[联想词汇]

1．__________________ 自相矛盾的

答案：self-contradictory

2．________ adj. 锋利的

答案：sharp

3．________ v. 吹嘘，夸大

答案：boast

4．__________________ 在古代中国

答案：in ancient China

5．__________________ 众所周知

答案：be known to all

[单句写作]

1．中国成语“自相矛盾”众所周知。

________________ “Zi Xiang Mao Dun” is ________ all.

答案：The Chinese idiom; known to

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2．世界上没有东西能刺穿他们。

__________________ can pierce them.

答案：Nothing in the world

3．世上没有完美的东西。

________________________ in the world.

答案：There are not perfect things

[连句成章]

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[精彩范文]

The Chinese idiom “Zi Xiang Mao Dun” is known to all, which is used to laugh at someone whose words or behaviors are s elf-contradictory.

It tells us a story that happens in the State of Chu in ancient China. We see a man selling spears and shields in the marketplace in the center of the picture.

A lot of people gather around him. “My spears are the sharpest，” he boasts, “that there is nothing they cannot pierce. My shields are also the strongest, so nothing in the world can pierce them.” One of the people in the crowd then laughs, “So what if the spear pierces the shield？”

The man can not answer a word.

From the story we can know that there are not perfect things in the world. We shouldn't say anything in the world is good to the limit.

课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练

对应学生用书P034 阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

These days, modern buildings are everywhere. But if you want to see __1__ life was back in the old days, China still has many beautiful water __2__ (town) to visit. CNN has chosen four of the country's most beautiful ones.

The village of Zhouzhuang in Jiangsu calls __3__ (it) “the oldest water town in China”. The village, which __4__ (build) in 1086, is crossed with canals. Taking a boat ride through town, the red lanterns might make you think of China's romantic past.

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Hongcun, __5__ (fill) with lakes and beautiful Anhui-style buildings, is 900 years old. It was built to look like a big ox. Huangshan Mountain is the head; the town is the body and the bridges are legs.

Fenghuang in Hunan doesn't look like a bird, __6__ its name means “phoenix (凤凰)” in Chinese. The town is as beautiful as the __7__ (magic) bird. The stilted (吊脚的) buildings on each side of the Tuojiang River make the area look like a scene from __8__ postcard.

While most water towns are in the south, Shandong's Tai'erzhuang stands out in the north. The town __9__ (be) on the bank of the Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal. I n the town, there are ancient bridges, a canal and temples, __10__ (make) you think of its past glory.

1．________ 2.________ 3.________ 4.________

5．________ 6.________ 7.________ 8.________

9．________ 10.________

答案：1.how 2.towns 3.itself 4.was built 5.filled

6．but 7.magical 8.a 9.is 10.making

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