(英语)英语书面表达提高训练及解析(1)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·江苏中考模拟）临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假

设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告．

要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.

【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.

I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、

He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

2．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

（湖南衡阳）荣光学校九年级（2）班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有些同学对未来有些担心。请根据表格中的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。

提示：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。2.短文中应包含至少4个要点。

3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80.

参考词汇：optimistic adj.乐观的 government n.政府take measures to采取措施private adj.私有的

Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?

Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.

【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?

Many students are optimistic（乐观的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.

However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．

But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily．

【解析】这篇作文要求我们就荣光中学九年级2班的同学们对环境问题所召开的一次班会情况进行介绍。这个班会的主题是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?，对于未来的环境，很多同学吃乐观的态度，而其他同学感到很担心。题目中用表格的形式给我们呈现了这些内容，我们需要用正确的英语将他们表达出来，首先我们应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的句型、词汇和短语，以简单句的结构为主，如主谓宾、主系表等，点缀几个并列句或复合句，提升文章档次。其次注意使用正确的时态和人称，本文应以一般现在时态和一般将来时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。最后应注意在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章的逻辑关系更加合理，文意流畅、连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并根据表达的需要，进行了合理的想象和补充，使文意更加的充实。短文共分为三段，前两段各描述了不同的同学们的观点，最后一段用一句话点明了自己的看法，层次清晰，叙述条理、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主，阐明了学生们的不同观点，以简单句为主，也用了一些复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感，更有表现力。最后短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如In fact, they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．、As a result、However、hey say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.、Therefore, we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．、But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily等。

3．（·四川中考模拟）近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：

1. 雾霾的危害

2. 雾霾产生的原因（2个）

3. 应对雾霾的措施（3个）

提示：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的

注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

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【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the ol d in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.

How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air m ainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.

What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。

4．（·全国中考模拟）假如你是Ivy，你们学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动。请你根据所列提示问题谈谈你对这个活动的认识，用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿。

提示问题：

（1） Why do you show your kindness to others? （At least one reason）

（2） What do you usually do when someone needs help? （At least two examples）

（3） How do you feel?

写作要求：

（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

（2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.

【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.

It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.

As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have become close friends.

I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.

【解析】这是一篇关于学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动，谈谈自己的看法；

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是怎样的；make great progress 取得巨大进步

5．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

假设你校正开展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大讨论活动，请你结合生活实际写一封英语小短文介绍有关情况，以帮助他人安全、文明地使用网络。短文内容包括以下几个方面：

1、网络使用的利弊。

2、介绍如何安全、文明地使用网络的几条规则。如，和家长有所约定，不向strangers透

露（give out）真实的个人信息，不单独和net friend见面，使用文明语言，等等。

3、希望……

要求：1、词数不少于100。 2、信中须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。 3、文章中不要出现真实的校名和人名。

At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet.

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【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.

Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alo ne. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others.

I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.

【解析】试题分析：

本篇作文是一篇小议论文，主要讨论如何正确使用网络的方式。写作中学生需要紧密贴合题干中已经给出的要点：网络使用的利弊，利弊都要写出。介绍如何安全、文明地使用网络的几条规则。题干中给出了例子，如，和家长有所约定，不向陌生人透露真实的个人信息，不单独和网友见面，使用文明语言，等等。学生可以在这个基础上整理自己的语言，罗列出规则，可以借助实用的祈使句结构。最后收尾要写出自己的希望。

写作亮点：

这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。文章脉络清晰，自然流畅，首先完整介绍了网络使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介绍了几条规则，恰当运用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后结尾提出了倡议，结构完整，段落清晰。

6．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达

共享单车为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。假设你是红星中学九年级学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国最新出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。

请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；2. 这种单车的优势；3. 你对这种单车的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：智能手机smartphone；扫码scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。

Dear Jim,

I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______

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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.

It’s very convenient to use if you have a smar tphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.

Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇要求介绍关于共享单车的一些事情。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

7．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供的信息，将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。

要求：

1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由；

2. 结合游玩国家的情况，自拟希望可以安排的活动，并提出1-2点出游的注意事项；

3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范；

5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.

I hope I will have a good time there!

【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting. However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.

I hope I will have a good time there!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

8．（·江苏泰州中学附属初中中考模拟）请根据下表中的信息用英文介绍你的好友Lily。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，可做适当发挥。词数100字左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

【答案】My good friend

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.

She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.

She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her. She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.

She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She

said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.等

复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

9．（·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟）当代雷锋郭明义，在《幸福就这么简单》一书中，用自己的点滴平凡小事诠释出幸福的真谛。幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来。那你的幸福观又是什么呢？请以 My Happiness 为题写一篇短文。

内容包括以下方面：

1. 你认为幸福是什么？

2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代时间、地点、过程与感受）。

3. 以自己的感悟揭示：应该如何创造幸福。

写作要求：

1. 短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2. 卷面干净整洁；

3. 词数 80 左右；

4. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

My Happiness

After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for

me,____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I fe el happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

【解析】

【详解】

幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来，这篇作文要求写一写自己的幸福观，描述自己对于幸福的定义，描述一件到幸福的事，最后谈谈应该如何创造幸福，要注意叙述流畅，在描述过去的幸福往事的时候要注意正确使用时态，可以使用到的短语表达有：happiness is always around you 幸福总在你身边；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 数学考试成绩很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕见家长；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要帮助；Never give up永不放弃；made up my mind to下定决心去做…；in trouble有困难。总体来说这篇文章分为三大段，条理清晰，叙述完整，完成了既定的写作任务。

10．（·天津中考模拟）最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位

水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。

参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________

【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.

Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.

In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.

I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（I think ???；try one's best to do sth.）。

常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do

sth.，the importance of…等。

11．（·甘肃中考模拟）发明创造改变了世界。作为一名中学生．假如你梦想当一名发明家，应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢?请根据下面的漫画提示，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

要求：1. 80词左右，可适当发挥。（文章标题和开头已给出不计人总词数）

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,

【答案】How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic method.It is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of innovation.Second,interesting is the best teacher.Hardly can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the problem.What's more important,Never give up.Keep our belief.That's the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.

What I have list above is my answer to how to become an inventor,and that is what I'll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I

want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That's……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家；接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家，应该如何做；最后指出为了成为一个发明家，我要坚持做下去。此处play an important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

12．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste

of time; cause a lot of stress

要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________

Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students t o develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.

However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but

also for our growing.

Thank you!【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。

【点睛】

这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。

13．（·陕西中考模拟）下周一下午轮到你在英语课上做课堂报告, 你打算把你爸爸最近网购的音乐机器人（music robot）介绍给同学们。下图是关于这个音乐机器人的广告, 请你根据所提供的信息写一份发言稿。

我是能听会说的小音乐机器人,只要你对我说歌曲的名字, 我就能唱给你听。我还有其他本领……

参考词汇:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient

要求:1. 参考提示, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句涌顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息；

Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I'd like to introduce the music robot my father bought

online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, "Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE's songs" ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.

I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达主要描述爸爸最近给“我”买的音乐机器人。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文。内容上首先要介绍这个音乐机器人，其次表达为什么“我”要介绍这个机器人，也就是对它的喜爱。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

14．（·辽宁初三）近年来“汉语热”在全球各地悄然兴起，你的笔友 Peter在如何学好汉语方面急需你的帮助，快来帮帮他吧！

Dear Peter,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】例文

Here are some ways to learn Chinese. You could watch Chinese movies. You could also write to me in Chinese. It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with. These will be helpful.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信，书信的内容为方法策略，给外国笔友推荐一些学习汉语的方法。因此在信件中，写出一些你认为有效的学习方法即可，写作过程中注意语法、拼写正确。

【高分句型】

It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with.找一个同伴一起练习汉语很不错。句子为It is+形容词+to do sth.结构，句中it为形式主语，真正的主语为不定式短语。

15．（·江苏中考模拟）今年初《流浪地球》在中国火热上映。影片故事设定在2075年，讲述太阳即将毁火，已经不适合人类生存，而面对绝境，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类新家园的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老师问:希望是什么?班长回答:希望是我们这个年代钻石一样的东西。你的笔友Demon观看后，印象深刻，给你写了一封邮件。请你根据邮件内容结合你的情况，用英语回复。

注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;

2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Demon

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as

well.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】Dear Demon，

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don't want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.

In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always comes to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.

I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?

Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文。根据所给出的材料内容可知文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先要注意书信的书写格式，要对来信中的问题作出全面的答复。同时在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

二、中考英语阅读理解汇编

16．阅读短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。

Hobbies let you explore interests outside of your line of work. They let you be creative and try all kinds of new things. Picking a different one can get your creative juices flowing again.

Look at what interests you.

Check what you love doing in your spare time. Do you enjoy reading books? Maybe you want to try your hand at writing your own. Do you like a hot coffee at the end of the day? Maybe your hobby could be trying to make it at home. Turn what you already love into a hobby.

Think about what you value most

Do you value wisdom or courage? Do you admire artists? Let such question guide you when choosing a hobby.

For example, maybe you could volunteer at a library as a hobby because you value education or maybe you could try painting because you admire people who can express themselves with art. Examine your skills and personality.

Certain hobbies require certain skill

If you don't have much patience, then maybe going fishing isn't something you'd enjoy. However, if you love building things, maybe you should consider a hobby like working on older cars or building furniture.

Play to your strengths.

Pay attention to what excites your ①________.

The way you talk about things can also show what you really like and it can be developed into a hobby.

Think about the topics you go on endlessly about. Ask your friends and family what you seem to talk about all the time. Now think about the subject that you enjoy so much and decide how it can be turned into your hobby.

（1）This passage is most probably taken from ________.

A. a magazine for old people

B. a magazine for young people

C. a picture book for children

D. a picture book for hobbies

（2）This passage mainly shows us ________.

A. how to find a new hobby

B. how to give up old hobbies

C. why you must find a new hobby

D. why you must give up old hobbies

（3）Which is the most suitable word for ①________?

A. hobbies

B. skills

C. topics

D. interests

【答案】（1）B

（2）A

（3）C

【解析】【分析】主要讲了发现一种新爱好的建议。

（1）细节题。根据全文可知讲了发现一种新爱好，可知不是picture book图画书，排除C、D。根据maybe you could volunteer at a library在图书馆里当志愿者，所以给年轻人写的，故选B。

（2）主旨题。根据全文可知主要讲了发现一种新爱好的建议。故选A。

（3）推断题。根据后文Think about the topics you go on endlessly about.考虑下话题，可知最合适的词是话题，topics，故选C。

【点评】考查阅读理解。本文涉及细节题、推断题和主旨题三种常考题型，细节题要注意

从文中寻找答案；推断题需要联系上下文，推断出需要的信息；主旨题需要通读全文，了解大意之后找出中心思想。

17．阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C三个选项中，选出最佳选项。

Many people love travelling to different countries, but if you plan to go abroad, you should know how to behave in different situations around the world.

Most travelers enjoy meeting new people, but sometimes you can be rude without saying anything. In Russia, you should never shake hands in a doorway, and if you're travelling in Thailand, never touch people's heads or point your feet at people. When the Japanese meet new people, they like giving business cards-but you should read the card carefully, not just put it in your pocket.

In most countries in Europe people expect a lot of eye contact when you talk to them, but in many Asian countries a lot of eye contact seems unfriendly. And in South America people usually stand quite close to each other when they talk, but in countries like the USA you need to give people more personal space. Also, it's rude to interrupt Japanese people while they are talking to you. You must wait until they finish before you start speaking.

In restaurants in China you can leave a bit of food on your plate, it's OK to start smoking before other people finish eating, which you mustn't do in the UK. When in India, remember to eat with your right hand. Also avoid leaving empty bottles on the dinner table in Russia--that's bad luck.

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