My online classes 1

My online classes

Internet is new approach of learning .Many students are taking online courses and I am one of them. I had doubted if it was a good idea to take these courses before the online classes began. But after I experienced some of the courses, I began to know that I had truly made a right decision. It seems that I have a whole library at home when I search the internet for the information I need. Furthermore, I soon found that I could take good advantage of the time which should have been wasted on the way. I also can communicate with my teachers and classmates without face to face. It inspires me to ask more questions and to discuss with them more because I always be shy to see them in the flesh.

In a word, the online classes are very helpful to me and I will continue taking it.

修改一:字体

My online classes

Internet is new approach of learning .Many students are taking online courses and I am one of them. I had doubted if it was a good idea to take these courses before the online classes began. But after I experienced some of the courses, I began to know that I had truly made a right decision. It seems that I have a whole library at home when I search the internet for the information I need. Furthermore, I soon found that I could take good advantage of the time which should have been wasted on the way. I also can communicate with my teachers and classmates without face to face. It inspires me to ask more questions and to discuss with them more because I always be shy to see them in the flesh.

In a word, the online classes are very helpful to me and I will continue taking it.

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The Internet is a new approach of learning. Like most students, I am taking online courses. Before the classes begin, I have doubted if it is a good idea to take these courses. But after experiencing some, I begin to realize that I have made a wise decision. …

文章总体写得不错，但还有提高的空间，要在语言上多下点功夫, 建议：有时间看点英语散文。

Huang Xiaolin

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