2013.9.8 托福独立作文范文 +解析

A or DA: Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.范文出自托福名师谢侃。

2013.9.8 托福独立作文范文 +解析

——谢侃（侃哥Kevin）

A or DA: Governments should focus its budgets more on

environmental protection than on economic development.

题型：呼吁题

论点：一边倒（同意）

论证角度：利弊分析

开头：同意政府应该把财政预算更多地放在环保上 。（话题引入 +双方 /

某 方观点呈现 +我方观点及过渡句）

The past several decades have witnessed that the world’s economy is booming. Modern skyscrapers, convenient communications, fast

transportations make it easier and cozier for people to live in this planet. However, people are beginning to realize that the great achievements today seem to be at the price of destroying the nature. They claim that

governments should focus its budgets more on environment than on economic development. As for me, I am a big fan of environmental protection and I am wholeheartedly in agreement with this claim. Here are some reasons and examples to support my view.

中间段 1：环 境 保 护 关 系 到 每 一 个 人 的 健 康 问 题 。（ 主 题 句 +说理论 证 +细节 例子）

First, the environmental protection is closely bound up with the health of every single person in this world. If the environment is polluted, the basic elements people need to survive must be affected, and thus disastrous results may occur. Recently I have read an appalling fact from newspapers that there is a village in the center of China where the majority of its residents, including kids and seniors, suffer from cancer such as lung cancer, stomach cancer and lymph cancer. The investigators found that the villagers’ drinking water is from a river that is severely contaminated by the industrial discharges of enterprises located at the upstream.

中间段 2：经 济 的 可 持 续 发 展 需 要 以 环 境 保 护 为 前 提 ，我 们 不 能 竭 泽 而 渔 。

（主题句 +说理论证 +细节例子）

In addition, the environmental protection is conducive to the

sustainability of economic development. There are some idioms in China, “killing the hens for the egg”, “draining the pond for the fish”, and “burning the woods for the prey”. These ancient wisdoms warn modern

A or DA: Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.范文出自托福名师谢侃。

people not to gain profits at present without thinking of the future. In other words, we cannot simply satisfy the need of contemporary people regardless of the interest of our next generation. Imagine that if we were in excessive pursuit of economic development by consuming all the natural resources, hunting for precious animals mercilessly and cutting down forests, what will become of our descendants?

中间段 3：环境保护可以在一定程度上刺激经济的发展，比如可以发展旅 游业 。（主题句 +说理论证 +细节例子）

Last but not least, the environmental protection can boost the development of economy at the same time. For instance, a country that emphasizes on its environment must be a country famous for its sightseeing industry. I have been to Singapore in which I am not only amazed by its prosperous economy but also by its garden-­‐like environment. The lawns, the trees, the rivers are beautifully designed to fit into the city. This case well illustrates that the economic development and environmental protection sometimes construct no conflicts between each other.

结尾：重申观点 +归纳理由 /升化主题。

To put it in a nutshell, governments should put its budgets on environmental protection than on economic development. In the process of achieving more prosperous economy, people should sometimes stop to think about whether the world we live could provide fresh air, clean water and healthy food, for these are fundamentally vital to the fate of human beings.

文章来源：100教育

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