雅思小作文饼状图写作范例、思路、常用句式

雅思小作文：饼状图一例

Manywomenwantorneedtocontinueworkingaftertheyhavechildren.Thechartbelowshowstheworkingaftertheyhavechildren.Thechartbelowshowstheworkingpatternofmotherswithyoungchildren.作文写作要点：

介绍各扇面及总体的关系。

各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间、不同地点的比较。

重点突出特点最明显的扇面：最大的、最小的、互相成倍的。

Thebasictrendsofthefourcharts:

Justafterbearingchildren,backtowork.

Theolderchild…themore…

Mostpart-timeduringchild5~9

Child10+,fulltimedouble,part-timeless

theintroductioncanbewrittenlikethis:

Evenjustafterhavingachild,alargenumberwomenreturntowork.Asthechildgrowsolder,thepercentageofmotherswhochooseorneedtocontinueworkingrises.Atleastuntilthechildisten,thelargernumberofworkingmotherstakepart-timeoccupations.Whenthechildistenyearsorolder,thenumberofthefull-timersmorethandoubleswhilethatofthepart-timersdecrease.

Eachchartentails/containsinstruction,whichillustrateswhatthechartinvolvesratherthantheovertrends.

WritingParagraphs:

Informationanalyzedaccordingtothepiecharts.

Child0~2,30%backtowork(19p.t.,

11f.t.)

3~4,p.t.updramaticallyto35%,f.t.same

5~9,p.t.upconsistentlyto48%,f.t.slightincreaseto14%

10+,p.t.slightly3%down,f.t.doubleto29%

Paragraph1：Whentheyoungestchildisatmost2yearsold,30%ofthewomenreturntowork.19%full-time,and11%aspart-timers.

Paragraph2：Thepercentageoffulltimersremainsthesameuntilthechildturnsfiveandincreasedslightlyto14%whenthechildisatmost9yearsold,butthepercentageofpart-timeworkingmothersgrowsdramaticallyto35andcontinuesgrowingto48%bythetimethechildis9.

Paragraph3：Achangeoccursafterthechildgrowstoten.Thenumberoffull-timeworkingmothersdoublesinpercentageto29,whilethatofthepart-timersisreducedslightlytoby3%to45%.

Conclusion：Itappearsthat,whenthechildturnstoten,womenhavemuchfewermaternalresponsibilitiesthantheyearsbefore.

SentencePatterns：

Introduction：

The(two)piechartsshow(reveal,suggest,illustrate,demonstrate,indicate,describe,relate)theproportion(percentage)ofAandB…in(7)(categories),pidedinto…and…(oneis…,anotheris…)

Comparison：

1、Thebiggestdifferencebetween(2)groupsisin…,whereAmakesup%while(whereas)Bconstitutes%(makesup=constitutes=accountsfor)

thehighestpercentage/amountofA,whichwasapproximately%,wasfor….(=in)/wasfoundin

2、ThepercentageofAin…ismorethantwicethepercentageofB,therationis%to%(%comparedto%)

3、In…,whilethereis(not)agreatdealofdifferencebetweenthepercentageofAandB(theformeris%andthelatteris%).

in…,whileagreaterpercentageofAthanBarefoundin…(theformeris%andthelatteris%).

4、TherearemoreA(in…),reaching%,comparedwith%ofB

5、Bycontrast,Ahasincreased(declined),from%in…to%in….

ComparedwithB,A…

Conclusion:

Tosumup

Inconclusion

Itappearsthat…

Thetwochartsclearlyshow…

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