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I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist．I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply to the position．

First of all, allow me to introduce myself．I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination． I want to find out a part-time job in the summer． I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English, especial in terms or speaking and listening In fact, I once won the rust prize in die English speech competition hold in our school Besides, I'm quite easy-going hut therefore very popular among my classmates． 第二节书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，你校外教Mr．Brown邀请你周日上午去听关于英国文学的讲座，但你因故不能参加。请根据以下提示，写封邮件向Mr．Brown说明。 1．表示歉意；

2．说明理由：去火车站接一位来访的老同学；

3．表示遗憾：对英国文学很感兴趣，遗憾失去这次机会； 4．希望得到讲座录像或课件，以便课下学习。 注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； Dear Mr．Brown．

短文改错（10×1=10）：

I have learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for∧ receptionist. a I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply to the position. interested for

First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I had just graduated from high school have

and taken the University Entrance Examination. I want to find out a part-time job in the

summer. I’m 18 year old and have a good command of English, especial in terms of speaking years especially

and listening. In fact, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our held school. Besides, I’m quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates. and

I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply. me

书面表达（满分25分）： One possible version： Dear Mr. Brown,

I’m so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on the British literature this Sunday morning. But an old classmate of mine will come to see me that day. We haven’t seen each other for quite a long time and I have promised to meet him at the railway station, for he is not familiar

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with this city.

As you know, I’m deeply interested in the British literature, so it’s really a pity to miss the lecture. But I wonder if I could borrow the record or have a copy of the PPT. It would mean so much to me to watch the record or PPT and learn what’s covered in your lecture. (116 words)

Best wishes to you. Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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Good afternoon, everyone!

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Welcome to the Cycling Club．This is the ideal place for you to make more friend, to experience the

excitement of discover, and to keep fit．

The Cycling Club had a wide range of activities for members．We have basic training once a week, that will be

instructed by teachers．It will arranged during the time of after-class physical activities．We arrange an outdoor

cycling trip at the weekends every month．And we will have some races with other teams if possibly．

If you are interesting in our club, you can either come to our club in Room 702, on the fourteenth floor,

Building 5 and call us at 02585559955．By the way, we have to get the equipment ready by yourself, but the

charge is free．

Don’t wait．Join us now! Thank you!

（2）

One day, I got a full mark in maths exam and only got 50 marks in the Chinese exam．On my way home, I was

in low spirits．

When I arrived at home, my mother kissed me on the cheek as soon as she knew the result of maths and

said she would bring me to have a nice meal in KFC as the praise． Seen her so happy ，I quick took out of my

Chinese exam paper．But quite contrary to her behavior just now, he slapped me on my face heavily．At that

moment, I couldn’t help cry．

I understood my mother cared much for my scores than me and I felt sad．But as matter of fact, I needed my

mother’s help when I have difficulty with my study rather than her slaps．

（3）

There are various way to get relaxed for middle school students．One way is take exercise, walking, running,

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playing basketball or football, etc．We can either watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful

programs both in Chinese and English as well as．Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and

entertainment．

As for me, surfing the Internet appeal to me most．For one thing, the Internet offered a wide range of

activities for relaxation．In general, I keep track of the latest news as a enjoyment．Sometimes, I play computer

games to refresh me．For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and at

abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them．In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and

living videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy．

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Dear Sophie,

I am glad you will have the chance to get close look at my country．

You were more than welcome to stay in my home during your visit Beijing．Now that you have two weeks

here, that will be a good idea to take several activities through them you can get a taste of the local culture．Pay a

visit to some famous cultural relics such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City or the Summer Place will help you

picture our country with a long history．In addition to, you may be interesting in having a look at our school and

taking part in a Chinese Story Telling Competition．It, of course, will be beneficially to your understanding of

Chinese language．

Yours sincerely,

Zhangli

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Dear Joe,

I’m glad to receive you letter．It is true to read successfully requires correct ways of reading．Here is some

suggestions．

Firstly, choose books which are either too difficult nor too easy for you to read．If you find a book too difficult

to go on with it, just put it aside for a moment and change a easier one．Secondly, read books that not only

interest you but also benefit

you, for reading was always just for fun．Thirdly, as to some books, you need to read them careful while as to

others, you need to read it roughly．Lastly, don’t forget to take notes, make good use of dictionaries and ask

questions whenever necessary．

I wish you will succeed of reading．

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Chinese is one of the most ancient language in the world．It is also one of the official languages of United

Nations．Now that China is becoming stronger, Chinese is playing a much important part in international

communication．So if you can speak Chinese good, I am sure, you will make more friends．

Here are some suggestions．First, that is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll able to learn from the

teacher and practice with your fellow students．Then, it also helps to read books, newspapers and magazines on

Chinese whenever possible．Besides, you should take more Chinese friends．They would tell you a lot about China

and help you learn the Chinese．Finally, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs．Try and write to

me in Chinese next time．

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