浙江专版2017高考英语二轮复习专题限时集训2读后续写训练

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专题限时集训(二) 读后续写

训练2

A

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was a cold winter day.A woman drove up to the Rainbow Bridge tollbooth(收费站)．“I'm paying for myself，and for the six cars behind me，”she said with a smile，handing over seven tickets.One after another，the next six drivers arriving at the tollbooth were informed，“Some lady up ahead already paid your fare．”

It turned out that the woman，Natalie Smith，had read something on a friend's refrigerator：“Practice random kindness and senseless acts of beauty．” The phrase impressed her so much that she copied it down as soon as she got home.

Judy Foreman spotted the same phrase on a warehouse wall far away from home.When it stayed on her mind for days，she gave up and drove all the way back to copy it down in her diary.“I thought it was beautiful，”she said，explaining why she'd taken to writing it at the bottom of all her letters，“like a message from above.”Her husband，Frank，liked the phrase so much that he put it up on the classroom wall for his students，one of whom was the daughter of Alice Johnson，a local news reporter.Alice put it in the newspaper，admitting that though she liked it，she didn't know where it came from or what it really meant.She really wanted to find out the originator(创作者) of this phrase and know about the story of it.

Two days later，Alice got a call from Anne Herbert，a woman living in Marin.It was in a restaurant that Anne wrote the phrase down on a piece of paper，after turning it around in her mind for days.The restaurant was decorated in a simple style and the owner had a kind heart.He regularly handed out food to the beggars nearby，which left a deep impression on Anne.

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Then Alice asked her what her idea was.

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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“Here's the idea，”Anne says.

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The world will be much better

【写作指导】

根据所给短文及续写部分的开头句可知，本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。故续写部分第一段应承接上文，围绕作者Anne对“Practice random kindness and senseless acts of beauty.”这句话的理解等内容进行合理续写；第二段应对文章中心进行总结并深化主题。所给关键词，如Anne，kindness，with a smile等均为文中多次出现的词或常用短语，结合合理的联想不难续写。注意上下文应衔接合理，符合逻辑。

【参考范文】

“Here's the idea，”Anne says.“Anything you think there should be more of，do it randomly.”Her fantasies include painting the classrooms of shabby schools，leaving hot meals on kitchen tables in the poor part of town，sending clothes to children without parents，passing on kindness to a stranger with a smile，and giving

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money secretly to a proud old lady.Anne says，“Kindness can build on itself as much as violence can.”

The world will be much better when the acts of random kindness spread.If you were one of those drivers who found your fare paid，who knows what you might have been inspired to do for someone else later？Like all great events，kindness begins slowly with every single act.Try your best and do whatever you can to show your kindness in daily life.And you will find the world's full of beauty．Let it be yours!

【导学号：85602025】

B

(2016·浙江新高考基础调研)

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

James shook his money box again.Nothing! He carefully counted the coins that lay on the bed.$ 24.52 was all that he had.The bicycle he wanted was $ 90! How on earth was he going to get the rest of the money？He knew that his friends all had bicycles.It was hard to hang around with people when you were the only one without wheels.He thought about what he could do.There was no need to ask his parents for he knew they had no money to spare.

There was only one way to get money，and that was to earn it.He would have to find a job.But who would hire him and what could he do? He decided to ask Mr.Clay for advice，who usually had opinions in most things.“Well，you can start right here，”said Mr Clay.“My win dows need cleaning and my car needs washing.” That was the beginning of James's odd-job(零工)business．For three months he worked every day after finishing his homework.He was surprised by the various jobs that people found for him to do.He took dogs and babies for walks，cleared out cupboards，and mended books.He forgot the number of cars he washed and

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windows he cleaned，but the money increased and he knew that he would soon have enough for the bicycle he was dying for.The day finally came when James counted his money and found $ 94.32.He wasted no time and went down to the shop to pick up the bicycle he wanted.

It had been hard work for the money，but James knew that he valued his bicycle far more since he had bought it with his own money.He had achieved what he thought was impossible，and that was worth even more than the bicycle.

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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He rode proudly home，looking forward to showing his new bicycle to his friends.

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Many years later，James succeeded in

【写作指导】

就本篇续写短文而言，续写部分的第一段应用描述James购得自行车后的情形；第二段应表达这一经历对于他多年后的人生的影响。写作过程中，学生应运用关键词，在此基础

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上，注意表达。语言风格应与原文保持一致，尽量使用高级复杂结构，使文章浑然一体，生动丰满。

【参考范文】

He rode proudly home，looking forward to showing his new bicycle to his friends.His friends were more than glad that James owned his bicycle so that they could make a trip together.Excited and confident，James told them the fact that he spent spare time doing various jobs to realize his dream with money earned by himself.All of his friends admired him for his hard work，expressing that they would learn from him，achieving their goals without giving up.Going home happily，James was encouraged and required by his parents to thank Mr.Clay for the odd-job(零工)business he offered.Thinking of so many surprising jobs，James understood all of them，moved to tears.

Many years later，James succeeded in running a company with the name of Good Opinions．He was willing to give good opinions to poor people in difficulty，offering various jobs and helpful equipment to help them overcome all the challenges and live happy lives.He used his life to thank Mr.Clay and spread his kind spirits.

【导学号：85602026】

C

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

There were three boys，Martin，Tom and Jack，who like camping very much.One day，Jack told Martin and Tom that he knew a very good place to go.They set off a new adventure together when they got ready.

The light from the campfire brightened the darkness，but it could not prevent the damp cold of Dennis's Swamp(沼泽地) creeping into their bones.It was a strange place．Martin and Tom wished that they had not accepted Jack's dare.They liked

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camping，but not near this swamp．

“So，”Martin asked as they sat watching the hot coals.“How did this place get its name？”

“Are you sure you want to hear it? It's a scary story，”warned Jack.

“Of course！” cried out Tom.“If there were anything to be scared of，you wouldn't have chosen this place ！”

“OK，but don't say I didn't warn you，”said Jack，and he began his tale.

Way back in time，a man called Dennis tried to start a farm here.He built that cottage over there to live in.In those days，the area looked quite different—it was covered with tall trees and the swamp was a crysta l-clear river．After three hard years，Dennis had cleared several fields and planted crops.He was so proud of his success that he refused to listen to advice.

“‘You are clearing too much land，’warned one old man.‘The land is a living th ing.It will hit back at you if you abuse it.’”

“‘Silly fool，’said Dennis to himself.‘If I clear more land，I can grow more crops.I'll become wealthier.He's just jealous！’”

“Dennis continued to chop down trees.Small animals that relied on them for food and shelter were destroyed.He was so eager to expand his farm that he did not notice the river flowing slowly towards his door.He did not notice salt seeping to the surface of the land.He did not notice swamp plants choking all the native plants.”

“What happened？” Martin asked.It was growing colder.He trembled，twisting his body closer to the fire.

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

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3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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“The land hit back—just as the old man warned，”Jack shrugged.

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Few minutes later，Tom woke slowly.

【写作指导】

在续写前，学生首先应该理清文章的脉络，再根据所给关键词进行续写，以保证续写内容的完整性和准确性。本文先写到三个爱野外露营的男孩在一片沼泽地露营的特殊经历，主要提到了一个由于Dennis贪婪而毁坏环境，即这片沼泽如何形成的故事。结合所给关键词，学生可以从环境保护的话题续写，确保情节合理即可。在写作过程中，可适当用一些连接词，以使内容连贯；还可使用一些复杂句式，来提高作文的得分档次。

【参考范文】

“The land hit back—just as the old man warned，”Jack shrugged.“Dennis disappeared.Old folks around here believe that swamp plants moved up from the river and dragged him underwater.His body was never found.”“What a stupid story，”laughed Tom．“Plants can't...”Before he had finished speaking，he screamed and lost consciousness.The other two boys jumped up with fright，staring at Tom.Suddenly，they burst out laughing.Some green swamp ivy had covered Tom's face.It was a while before Tom could appreciate the joke.

Few minutes later，Tom woke slowly.Having thought about what happened

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and the amazing story，Tom made up his mind to change the environment here.He wanted the crystal-clear river back.He shared his idea with the other two boys.They began to tell that story to their classmates and friends.More and more people joined them.A lot of trees and flowers were grown on the land．After many years，the land was back to life because of the great efforts everyone made.

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