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摘要： 本文老师给大家讲解了托福写作的要求和评分标准，童鞋表示受益颇多，内容主要分为两大部分：1.托福独立写作常见误区;2.原创范文点评。

托福 写作高分在于什么?词汇、语法、速度?都是又不全是，考生们想要在 托福写作 尤其是独立写作部分取得高分，需要掌握太多的内容，同时也不能缺少一些必要的技巧。

一、托福独立写作常见误区

误区1：写多少字?300?350?400?越多越好?

侃哥解答1：虽然官方要求300字，但是这个字数很难得高分，能达到400字最好。

字数不够的原因及解决方案

1.手速慢：用金山打字通练习

2.思路慢：用机经练习头脑风暴

3.中译英速度慢：积累总结，直译很难的时候用意译。

误区2：独立写作分几段?4段?5段?

侃哥解答2：建议用5段体。应试作文要写八股文。开头+结尾+三个中间段。同样的字数，四段需要比五段的中间段需要写更多的字数，很难。

误区3：托福写作到底怎样评分?

侃哥解答3：结构+思路+语言

以上三部分的要求及如何提高

(1)结构：纯技巧。每一段，每一句的内容安排，可以快速提高。

(2)思路：半技巧半能力。万能理由不会很扣题，侃哥不推荐使用万能理由。可以用机经练习头脑风暴能力。

(3)语言：纯能力。高大上的句子不是盲目追求复杂，而是句式简洁+表达准确!

插播一个表达准确的栗子

有一个观点：最好的释放压力的方法是独处?如果想表达“这个方法太绝对了。”这个“绝对”应该用什么英文单词呢?

显然absolute不合适。文中想表达的是“武断”的意思，应当用arbitary。

误区4.如何确立观点?一边倒?中立?让步?

侃哥解答4：一边倒>让步>中立。

(1)如果能想到三个区别鲜明的理由，首推一边倒。逻辑简单。

(2)想不到一边倒的三个理由怎么办?用让步写。两个理由+一个让步。

(3)中立观点容易写的没有观点，需要语言水平非常高，通常情况下不推荐。

托福考试 并不考察主要逻辑，主要考察语言。不需要非常严密的逻辑。

二、原创范文点评

【题】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it is more important for universities to spend money on improving facilities than on hiring famous professors.

题型：比较题

论点：让步

角度：利弊分析

开头段思路

开头段分为4部分(话题引入+他人观点+明确立场+过渡)。这样达到的效果是：结构清晰，层次分明，引入观点不唐突，满足字数要求。最后一句话无实际意义，但能体现连接性。

开头段：对大学而言，雇佣著名教授要比提升硬件更重要。

Nowadays, universities in my country seem to enter an “arms race”. For instance, a university even sold its old and small campus in the downtown and built a larger and more beautiful one in the suburbs. This phenomenon triggers a heated debate on which one should be given top priority when it comes to investment: facilities or famous professors. From my perspective, famous professor should be the No.1 concern for school authorities. My viewpoint is based on the following reasons and examples. (85 words)

中间段思路

主题句：表明理由。说理论证：展开理由。细节例子：有人名，地名，数字，书名，专有名词等等。

PS：多用词组/习惯搭配，比单词更好。

说理论证和细节例子的比例不一定要1:1，看临场发挥。

中间段1：著名教授可以吸引优质生源。

Firstly, famous professors in a university are magnetic to excellent students. It is because what truly draws to high-quality students is someone who can show them the right way to explore the unknown world, rather than hardware conditions. A good case in point is that in World War 2, in order to escape from the Japanese invasion, several top

universities in China combined together and relocated to the southwest China. At the time, without advanced facilities, the new university still worked well in fostering plenty of great talents thanks to the efforts of famous professors, which created a miracle in the history of Chinese education. (105 words)

中间段2：著名教授可以在研究上做出卓越贡献，增加大学的价值。

Secondly, famous professors can add much value to the university with their remarkable contributions. The function of universities is not only producing talents for society but also serving as an impetus to the progress of human beings.It is those scientific and social breakthroughs made by famous professors that dramatically expand people’s lives, increase productivity, and improve people’s living standards, which really defines the importance of universities. To some extent, the ranking of a university is measured by the number of published papers by professors in a journal like Nature or Science, as well as how many important awards that professors won for the school such as Nobel Prize. (109 words)

让步段思路

承认漏洞+堵漏。先说设备固然很重要，但后面一定要把话圆回来。与教授相比，设备只是辅助作用。

让步段：当然，硬件设备对于大学也是很重要的，试想完备的藏书、设施齐全的实验室、体育场馆和食堂，这些对于提升学生学习效率和保障科研很重要，但是相比著名的教授而言，是次要因素。

Admittedly, facilities are also of great importance to a university. It is hard to imagine what will become of a

university if there is a poor condition in libraries, laboratories, sports venues and restaurants, because they play a basic role in supporting a university to run well. However, compared with famous professors, facilities are what work as an aid to help professors to carry out their works including teaching and researching. Thus, they are just secondary factors. (77 words)

结尾段思路

重申观点+归纳理由/升华主题。归纳理由简单，升华主题难，根据个人情况二选一。

结尾段：引用名人名言升华主题。

To put it in a nutshell, famous professors far outweigh the facilities and thus the former should be given more

consideration in school’s budget plan. Mei Yi Qi, one of the presidents of Qinghua University, once said, “The essence of university does not lie in its buildings but in its masters.” Hopefully every university can bear this remark in minds and do not put the cart before the horse. (69 words)

最后再看全篇，段落之间的逻辑关系如下：

第一段的论点是果，三个中间段是因。

看中间段：主题句是果，说理论证是因。

精彩表达总结

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