2016届高考英语 专题十七 短文改错（全国通用）

专题十七 短文改错

A组 2015～2013模拟基础题

Passage 1 (2015·曲阜4月)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hello，everyone.It's nice to speak about that we can do for our school，and I

think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights and close the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school in a better place to study and live in.

How I wish we can enjoy a better school life! Thank you for listening!

答案

Hello，everyone.It's nice to speak about we can do for our school，

and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do

is to make our campus morein the school or

.Every one of may plant a tree

organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form

a good habit of putting into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the

lights close the doors.We should not leave the tap water or waste

any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school

a better place to study and live in.

How I wish we enjoy a better school life!

Thank you for listening!

Passage 2 (2015·潍坊3月)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack，

Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing

by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.

The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people

selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isn't that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

Yours， Li Hua

答案

Dear Jack，

Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you

organizing

organizedby my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a style.After that，you can go to your host family

differently learning

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whereinterestChinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever

interestsyou.

off some famous scenic spots.You can

aroundwassee people selling kites everywhere because our city home to kites.There are

isthatvarieties of kites to choose ∧from.So isn't a good idea to buy some for your

itunlessfriends？Write to me you have any questions about the schedule.

if/when

The host family will also show you

Yours， Li Hua

Passage 3 (2015·淄博模拟)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，

so I'd like to tell you everything about it.

In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made

into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things are begun to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will

not die in the future.They had taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur.

Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.What's

more，their living conditions have greatly improved. 答案

I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，

so I'd like to tell you

everything about it.

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antelope/antelopes'Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.What's

more，their living conditions have greatly improved. Passage 4 (2015·大连一模)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle

there.It's a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street. 答案

In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid

?a visit to my uncle

there.It's a long and

fallboredjourney.But the moment I arrived，I in love with

fellboringsuchbeautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe socleaningit.The streets are and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you

cleanthe city.It's

can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as

Moreoverfaras it is permitted.，

HoweverlongI think the

driverthere drive too fast in the street.You can never be too

driverscarelesswhen crossing the street.

carefulPassage 5 (2015·山东省实验中学模拟)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since

I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save people's lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that I'll concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed. 答案

As we all know，everyone

havea dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since hasI entered into\\ the primary school.Nowadays with modern life

gorapidly，many goingpeople suffer from different

kindof diseases，both mentally and physically.As a kindsresult，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become

?asuccessful doctor，helping to save people's lives.Although to be a good doctor

washealthvery difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone.To make my ishealthydream come true，I have told

meover and over again that I'll concentrate more

myselftohardlystudies.After all，only by working can one succeed. onhardPassage 6 (2015·枣庄一模)

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有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up his

dreams for this or that reason.Those who dreams have come true have at least one thing in common，which is，they always hold fast to their dreams.

Marie Curie set us the good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In

order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.Then to get the new element become her dream and goal of her life.After four years' hard work，Marie and her husband last saw the dim blue light of the new element—radium.

Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big and small they are.The path to your

dreams may not be smoothly and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end. 答案

We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up

hiswhodreams for this or that reason.Those dreams have come true have at

whosetheirwhichleast one thing in common， is，they always hold fast to their dreams.

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ashowedorder to prove her discovery，she had to get it and it to the world.Then

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became?lasthard work，Marie and her husband / saw the dim blue light of the new

atlastlyelement—radium.

Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big

andsmall they are.The path to your ordreams may not be to the end.

smoothlyand wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on

smoothPassage 7 (2015·泰安期末)

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有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.

First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn

from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so

you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible. 答案

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manyas possible. muchPassage 8 (2014·昆明一模)

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有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It's pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found

that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.What's more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and can't always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.

Obvious，it's important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must

learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.

Thanks for listen.

答案

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found that some of my classmates study

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advicescan help you.

advice/suggestions Thanks for

listen.

listeningPassage 9 (2014·西铁一中诊断)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hello，Peter.I'm very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell

you truth，I have been busy prepare for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling real stressed due to the exam，but I don't take them so seriously.I always learn in a relaxing mood and I'm making a great progress.Now that I had tried my best，it doesn't matter much to me what the result is.

In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest or exercise.I

believe we can be succeeded if we prepare for the exam in a proper way. I'd appreciate it if you could give me some good advices. 答案 you

Hello，Peter.I'm very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell

?thetruth，I have been busy

preparefor the exam recently.Some classmates are

preparingfeeling

themrealstressed due to the exam，but I don't take so seriously.I always

itreally

?thethief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted message on a poster

toa－board and put it in the front yard：“To the person who stole my bike；You hurt my

feelinghim.But I am a Christian and I forgive！”When he left for\\ home the

feelingsyounext morning，at the end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes. Passage 5 (2015·洛阳质检)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habit，

which do great harm to their health.

As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，

you cannot do everything even if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.

First of all，eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should

eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich of vitamins.Secondly，getting enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise make you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.

As long as you form health habits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and

live the healthy life. 答案

A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living

habit，habitswhich do great harm to their health.

As we all know it\\，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，

you cannot do

?everythingeven if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，

toanythingit's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.

First of all，

eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You

eatingofgettingvitamins.Secondly， ingetshould eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich

enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise

makeyou feel great all day

makeslong.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.

As long as you form

healthhabits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and

healthylive

thehealthy life. aPassage 6 (2014·宝鸡一模)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Here are the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far

away from London，and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of course.I'm sure you will find one you like it.I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.So I will see that there is anything in their websites.I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you arrived.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look forward to seeing you again. 答案

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arethe information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far\\ iscourse.I'm sure you will find one you like

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it\\.I know you are

particularinterested in Human Rights.So I will see

particularly?thatinthere is anything their websites.I'll send my friend Charlie meet

towhether/ifonarrivedyou at the airport when you.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed

arriveora lot since then.Both your aunt I look forward to seeing you again.

andPassage 7 (2014·黑龙江摸底)

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有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim，

Our friend Li Ming will leave to Shanghai to study.So we are going to have a

get－together on 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He lived at No.225 Dongfeng Street.It is not very difficulty to find your way to your home.Take a No.2 bus，the stop of that is on the left of your university，and get off at second crossing.There is a cinema cross the street.Turning right at the corner，and you will find Dongfeng Street.Li Ming's home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post office is opposite to Li Ming's home.

Yours， Zhang Hua

答案 Dear Jim，

toShanghai to study.So we are going to have a foronlivedget－together 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He at No.225 Dongfeng Street.It

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difficulthis?thatis on the left of your university，and get off at second crossing.There

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Dongfeng Street.Li Ming's home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post office is\\ opposite to Li Ming's home.

Yours， Zhang Hua

Passage 8 (2014·金华十校联考)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I have a bicycle that came to me as birthday present from my mum and dad when

I was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan，that was half of my father's monthly salary.The bicycle was made in Shanghai and it's color is red，my favorite.Which is important is that my bicycle plays an important part on my school life.It also represent the deep love from my parents.But I ride it to school every day.I have made up my mind to work hardly so that I can repay them in the future.I will buy a car to drive them to wherever they want when I grow up because the car is faster and very convenient than the bike，especially when it rains. 答案

I have a bicycle that came to me as

?abirthday present from my mum and dad when

that was half of my father's monthly salary.The

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itsWhatI was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan，is that my bicycle plays an important part

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morethan the bike，especially when it rains. Passage 9 (2013·陕西安康一模)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life.At about 9：00 a.m.，

I go to the bookstore with my friends.There was a lot of new books.I didn't know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me.At 10：00，we went to cinema.The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see it.Having been seen the film，everyone was deeply moving.Some of my friends even burst into tear.That's a really wonderful film.It is very worth seeing.

What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.

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