话题 2 如何用英语描写家庭、朋友与周围的人

话题 2 如何用英语描写家庭、朋友与周围的人

Family，friends and people around

必走三步

根据提示，写一篇 100 词左右的短文。

1．杨利伟 38 岁，辽宁人，是中国空军飞行员。

2．他于 2003 年 10 月 15 日乘坐“神舟”五号载人宇宙飞船进入太空，成为我国的第一位宇航员。在太空飞行了 21 个小时，绕(orbit)地球 14 圈之后，顺利返回地面， 3．中国是继美国和俄罗斯之后第三个能够成功地发射(launch n. ＆ v.)和回收飞船的国家，标志(mark)着我国空间载人工程的巨大成功。 第一步：认真审题，提炼要点 一审格式：记叙文体裁

二审结构：主语要用第三人称，谓语动词的时态以过去时为主 三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。 A pilot in the air force of PLA

launch a manned spacecraft with Yang Liwei his spacecraft orbited the earth 14 times return back to the earth

第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句

Yang Liwei，who was born in Liaoning Province in 1965，is a pilot in the air force of PLA． On Oct.15，2003，China launched its Shenzhou Ⅴ manned spacecraft，with the astronaut Yang Liwei aboard．

Yang and his spacecraft orbited the earth 14 times．

The successful launch and return of the spacecraft made China the third country in space after Russia and the United States． 第三步：补充修改，连句成篇

Yang Liwei，who was born in Liaoning Province in 1965，is a pilot in the air force of PLA． On Oct．15，2003，China launched its Shenzhou Ⅴ manned spacecraft，with the astronaut Yang Liwei aboard and Yang has become the first astronaut in China．Yang and his spacecraft orbited the earth 14 times during about 21 hours before he safely landed in North China the next day．The successful launch and return of the spacecraft made China the third country in space after Russia and the United States，and this marked the great success of the manned space program of China．

习作点评

假若国际电视台要举行“2007 年度感动中国人物”颁奖仪式，在颁奖仪式上要对孟祥斌烈士的事迹进行介绍，请你用英语写一篇短文对孟祥斌烈士进行一个全面的介绍。 姓名 籍贯 孟祥斌 山东省齐河县 性别 家庭住址 男 出生年月 1979 年 4 月 9 日 山东省齐河县刘桥镇刘桥村 主要事迹：(Meng Xiangbin) 生前为驻浙江金华(Jinhua)某部(a local PLA unit)中尉军官。2007 年 11 月 30 日，是妻子叶庆华到部队探亲的第二天，孟祥斌为了多抽出点时间和家人团聚，请了一周的假，陪妻子和三岁的女儿到街上买东西。在准备去给女儿买红鞋的时候获知一女青年因失恋而跳入江中，正在水中挣扎，生命垂危，孟祥斌毫不犹豫地从 10 米高的桥上跳入冰冷的水中。女青年获救了，他却在妻子和三岁的女儿的眼前壮烈地牺牲了。年仅 28 岁。 参考词语：

中尉军官：lieutenant

跳江自尽：jump into the river to commit suicide 要求：词数 120 ～ 150

满分作文——满分说明文二 上海出版一份“学生英文报”，对象是我国的学生。请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍少年体育明星孙淑伟。内容要点如下：

1．简况：孙淑伟(Sun Shuwei)，男，14 岁，广东(Guangdong)人； 2．训练项目：跳水(diving)；

3．取得成绩：第 11 届亚运会冠军，第 6 届世界游泳锦标赛冠军(亚运会：the Asian Games；冠军：champion；游泳锦标赛：swimming championships)；

4．其他情况：孙淑伟从小就喜欢游泳，8 岁进广东跳水队；在学校里认真学习，在跳水队里认真训练，13 岁进入国家队；一年后(1990 年)夺得第十一届亚运会金牌；今年年初获第六届世界游泳锦标赛冠军。 注意：1．要有标题；

2．介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语； 3．介绍的长度为 80 — 120 个词。 范文：

A Young Sports Star Sun Shuwei，a fourteen-year boy from Guangdong Province，is a very famous sports star．He was fond of diving even when he was a little child．At the age of eight，he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province．He not only studied hard at school but also trained hard in the diving team．He was popular with his teachers and coaches as well．When he was aged 13，he joined the national team．One year after that，that is in 1990，he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games，which made many of his friends proud of him． Early this year he became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships．

Such is Sun Shuwei，a young sports star with many achievements in diving． 点评

短文按照时间顺序(8 岁、13 岁、一年后、今年初)介绍了体育明星孙淑伟的有关情况，层次分明。最后使用一句倒装句概括全文，结尾自然完美。 必做练习

根据提示，写一篇美国 NBA 超级球星迈克尔·乔丹的简历。 1．1963 年出生于纽约，小时候个子不高，不爱说话。 2．在北书罗卡纳大学开始出名，他把杂技的风格带人篮球运动中，以速度和力量一次又一次地中篮。因强有力的扣篮而著名，外号“飞人乔丹”。 3．大学毕业后，被芝加哥公牛队选中，率领该队六次获得 NBA 冠军，曾在一场比赛中创下个人得 63 分的纪录。2003 年 4 月，40 岁退役。 参考词汇：北卡罗来纳大学 University of North Carolina；杂技风格 acrobatic style；扣篮 slam dunk；外号 nickname；芝加哥公牛队 the Chicago Bulls 答案：

Michael Jordan was born in 1963 in New York．When he was young，he didn't look like a future superstar．He was very shy and didn't like to talk to other people．He was also very short． Michael's road to fame began at the University of North Carolina．He brought an acrobatic

style to the basketball．He used his quickness and strength to reach the basket again and again．He became famous for his powerful slam dunk．He was given the nickname \． After college，Michael was chosen by the Chicago Bulls．Since then he led the Chicago Bulls to six NBA championships．He once set a record by scoring 63 points in one game．In April 2003，when he was 40，he said goodbye to his game．

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