全国十城市质检试题分类荟萃 之短文改错

全国十城市质检试题分类荟萃 之 短文改错

第一套[长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（一）]

第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Ms. J. K. Rowling,

It is great pleasure to write to you. I like reading all of your Harry Potter book. A few days before, I listened to a radio programme about you. Now I know that you teach English at home and in others countries before you started writing books. I also know that you could only write the first book while your baby daughter was asleep, so you worked on them for five years. That was a very much difficult job. Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud for you. I hope I can become as successfully as you when I grow up. Thank you for spending time read my letter.

Yours sincerely, Michele

第二套 [长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（二）]

Last week, there was a program calling “Learning to Respect Our Parents” in our school. That is known to us that respect for one’s parents is one of Chinese traditional moral value. And most students nowadays are “the only child”. We often think of themselves as the centre of their family.

As for the program, eight “dos” have worked out for the students to follow. For an example, we are advised to remember our parents’ birthdays. Beside this, it is necessary that we should also tell our parents what we are going to do when we go out. The program has been such successful that it has been high praised by many people.

第三套[2016年三省四市高三模拟考试英语能力测试]

One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided that we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other’s problems. Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before.

第四套[2016年沈阳市高中三年级教学质量监测（一）]

There was a rich man who carried many treasures to the distance to look into happiness.

But after a long march, he fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of the mountain while a farmer carrying a large bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasant and said, “Happiness is very simple: put down and you’ll be happy!” The rich man inspired suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried that heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness.

第五套[2016届石家庄市高中毕业班质量检测（二）试题]

I’ve learnt from the notice that you’re looking for an English editor for us school paper.

I’m written this letter to apply for the position.

I’m Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements:

for one thing, I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another,

I’m good at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be glad

if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

I’m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

第六套[NCS(南昌市)20160607项目第一次模拟测试卷]

A woman was taken to the hospital. While having an operation, she had a nearly

death experience. Seeing God, she asked how this was it. God said,” No, you had another 40 years.” On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery. She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it. Finally she got out of the hospital. While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by. Arriving in the front of God, she demanded，“They said I had another 40 years!” God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.”

第七套[南京市、盐城市2016届高三年级第二次模拟考试] 第八套[厦门市2016届高中毕业班第一次质量检查]

One day, some children were playing hide-and-seek while they heard a boy names Tate shouting. “Help! The golden lion is coming after me!” They go running to help Tate, only find him laughing on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn’t do that. If you are real in trouble, nobody will come to help you.”

In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can’t swim. Help!” The children didn’t believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. Tate was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again.

第九套[武汉市2016届高中毕业生二月调研测试]

I grew up in a small town there the elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age when children could go home for lunch and found their mothers waiting. I took for granted that mothers were the sandwich-makers or the homework monitors. I never questioned if this intelligent woman, who had had a job before I was born, would eventually return again to work. I only knew that when the noon bell rings, I would race breathless home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stair, smiling at me in a look that suggested I was the only important thing she had on her mind. For this, I am forever grateful.

第十套[2016年大连市高三双基测试卷]

Recently I have done a survey on the hobbies of the 1,500 students in our school.

The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments in their spare time because it can improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them know about world affair. What surprises me most is the number of the students paid much attention to reading and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up for 12% , although one is a best way to gain knowledge and the other to keep fit.

Therefore, many students are strongly advised to take on reading as knowledge is power. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment.

第十一套[2016届广州市高考模拟考试2016．01]

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

第十二套[2016年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试（一）2016．3]

Last Friday, I learned a lesson about telling lies. Early in morning, I didn’t want to go to school, but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying when I told her. She left quickly and I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill. She said that she had asked for a day off work to look for me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the true. That afternoon, my teacher came to visit to me. I felt so regretfully for telling lies. I had wasted anybody’s time. Finally, I admitted I had lied and promised never to do it again.

第十三套[重庆试题] 第十四套[成都试题] 第十五套[天津试题]

全国十城市质检试题分类荟萃 之短文改错参考答案

第一套 [长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（一）]

【参考答案】

Dear Ms. J. K. Rowling,

It is ^ great pleasure to write to you. I like reading all of your Harry Potter book. A few a books

days before, I listened to a radio programme about you. Now I know that you teach English at

ago taught

home and in others countries before you started writing books. I also know that you could only other

write the first book while your baby daughter was asleep so you worked on them for five years. it

That was a very much difficult job. Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud

for you. I hope I can become as successfully as you when I grow up. Thank you for spending of successful time read my letter. reading

Yours sincerely, Michele

【语篇解读】本文是应用文，作者写信给J.K.罗琳，表达自己对她的崇拜，以及期望自

己成功的愿望。

1. 【命题立意】考查冠词。

【试题解析】“great”的前面需用冠词a。 2. 【命题立意】考查名词。

【试题解析】根据“all”可知，“book”需用复数。 3. 【命题立意】考查副词。 【试题解析】几天前应该用ago。 4. 【命题立意】考查动词。

【试题解析】此处应该用过去时，表示以前曾经教过英语，teach的过去时为taught。 5. 【命题立意】考查形容词。

【试题解析】“countries”需用“other”修饰。 6. 【命题立意】考查代词。

【试题解析】此处代词替代的是上文提到的第一本书，故用单数代词替代。 7. 【命题立意】考查副词。

【试题解析】“very”修饰形容词，“very much”修饰动词。 8. 【命题立意】考查固定短语。

【试题解析】此处考查固定短语be proud of。 9. 【命题立意】考查形容词。

【试题解析】become在此句中为系动词，后面应该用形容词而不是副词。

10.【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。

【试题解析】此处考查固定短语spend time(in)doing something。

第二套 [长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（二）]

Last week, there was a program calling “Learning to Respect Our Parents” called

in our school. That is known to us that respect for one’s parents is one of Chinese It

traditional moral value. And most students nowadays are “the only child”. We values But They often think of themselves as the centre of their family. .

As for the program, eight “dos ” have∧ worked out for the students to follow.

been

For an example, we are advised to remember our parents’ birthdays. Beside this, Besides it is necessary that we should also tell our parents what we are going to do when we go out. The program has been such successful that it has been high praised by many so highly

people.

【参考答案及解析】 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9.

【语篇解读】本文讲述了在学校开展尊敬父母的活动并取得很大成功。 【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。

【试题解析】calling与其所修饰的词program 之间是被动关系，故改为过去分词 【命题立意】考查主语从句中的形式主语。

【试题解析】此句为主语从句，形式主语用it，后接由that引导的真正主语 【命题立意】考查名词单复数。

【试题解析】one of表示其中之一时 后面要用名词复数，故用values 【命题立意】考查连词。

【试题解析】上下文是转折而不是并列。 【命题立意】考查代词。

【试题解析】根据下文的themselves 和their来判断。 【命题立意】考查被动语态。

【试题解析】此处意为八条准则被制定出来，应该用被动语态而不是主动语态。 【命题立意】考查冠词。

【试题解析】举例说明的固定短语是for example,冠词an 多余，所以去掉。 【命题立意】考查介词。

【试题解析】根据上下文语境可知此处表示此外，而beside表示在旁边。 【命题立意】考查固定搭配。

【试题解析】此处successful是形容词，故用so修饰。 10. 【命题立意】考查学生对形容词与副词。

【试题解析】此处修饰动词praised，故用highly。

第三套[2016年三省四市高三模拟考试英语能力测试]

短文改错（1×10=10分）

One of my happiest childhood memories were—was/is having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, 加having found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided that we would set aside three evenings the--a week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or--and Fridays. After a couple of week--weeks of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they would rather删to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual- Gradually, though, they began to see these evenings together for--in a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other’s problems. Since--After a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong--stronger relationships with the family than we had before.

第四套[2016年沈阳市高中三年级教学质量监测（一）]

There was a rich man who carried many treasures to the distance to look into happiness.

for But after a long march, he fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of the mountain failed

while a farmer carrying a large bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man when

said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the wealthy

heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasant and said, “Happiness is very simple: put down and pleasantly you’ll be happy!” The rich man ∧inspired suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried that was tired heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man he helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness. deeds

第五套[2016届石家庄市高中毕业班质量检测（二）试题]

I’ve learnt from the notice that you’re looking for an English editor for us school paper. our I’m written this letter to apply for the position.

writing

I’m Li Hua, ∧ Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements: a meet

for one thing, I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another, serving

I’m good at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be glad and also if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

I’m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient. kind convenience

第六套[NCS(南昌市)20160607项目第一次模拟测试卷]

A woman was taken to the hospital. While having an operation, she had a nearly near death experience. Seeing God, she asked how this was it. God said, “No, you had if/whether have another 40 years.” On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery. She had woman

someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she’d much

better make full use from it. Finally she got out of the hospital. While crossing the of

street, she∧killed by an ambulance speeded by. Arriving in the front of God, was speeding

she demanded, “ They said I had another 40 years!” God replied, “ But I didn’t You recognize you.”

第七套[南京市、盐城市2016届高三年级第二次模拟考试]

To make it easier for her parents to get to America, a young woman has drawn three pictures. These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way to America. With vivid drawings and clear instructions, they are impressive and easy to understand. (31words)

Seeing the pictures, I’m deeply moved like many others. The young woman is very sweet and considerate. She loves her parents so much. Also, she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea, which will be of great help to her parents.

As for me, my parents are faced with much pressure from work and life. I should try my best to help them. For example, …In addition, …

第八套[厦门市2016届高中毕业班第一次质量检查]

One day, some children were playing hide-and-seek while they heard a boy names Tate

when named

shouting. “Help! The golden lion is coming after me!” They go running to help Tate, only∧ find

A went to him laughing on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn’t do that. If you are real in trouble, really nobody will come to help you.”

In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can’t swim. Help!” The On

children didn’t believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. him

Tate was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again. friends

第九套[武汉市2016届高中毕业生二月调研测试] 见图片（暂时没空打字哦！拟联系肖老师提供）

第十套[2016年大连市高三双基测试卷]

Recently I have done a survey on the hobbies of the 1,500 students in our school.

The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments in their spare

shows

time because it can improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them surfing

know about world affair . What surprises me most is∧ the number of the students paid much attention

affairs that paying

to reading and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up for 12% , although one is a best way the to gain knowledge and the other to keep fit.

Therefore, many students are strongly advised to take on reading as knowledge is power. Plus, more up

they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment. properly

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第十一套[2016届广州市高考模拟考试2016．01]

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some gave

advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a it

speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. before fully

But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank.

so

The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life losing

is like∧battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, a times to I never give up when I do anything.

第十二套[2016年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试（一）2016．3]

Last Friday, I learned a lesson about telling lies. Early in? morning, I didn’t want to the (或in改为that) go to school, but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying when I told her. She left so worried quickly and I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill. She said had pills that she had asked for leave to look for me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the true. That after truth afternoon, my teacher came to visit to me. I felt so regretfully for telling lies. I had wasted regretful anybody’s time. Finally, I admitted I had lied and promised never to do it again. everybody’s / everyone’s

第十三套[重庆试题] 第十四套[成都试题] 第十五套[天津试题]

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